Beautiful story π read again.
What do I say about this story except I am moved to my core ! Your ability to layer the characters and then slowly unravel them is pure genius. The maturity in writing about Khushi's abuse and authenticity is building Aman's melancholy are truly humbling.
I won't even start complimenting the narrative / writing style, etc because no amount of words will ever justify the plethora of emotions this story has stirred in me - I can only say, I am so so so glad I read it !
Few things move you where you just want to let go and be washed over - Innocence to a half-mad city, did that to me !
Thank you for such an amazing story and this wonderful experience.
Excellent story :)
Hats off to your writing
Im reading this after 2 years of completion,
Characters are so beautifully penned
Arnav Aman Lavanya - what a bonding they have, it gives a nice feeling to see them stick to each other
Arnav Anjali - the turmoil Arnav suffered in the hands of Anjali is something that can give sleepless nights in reality... Arnav is mentally strong to pull along till he left the company (ofcourse khushi helped him)
Nice to see Arnav and Anjali trying to get back forgetting what they had endured
Anjali - good that finally she realized the evil plans of Jha and sent them packing
I loved SUMAN, what a character she is !!! Be it making a cake for Arnav or giving her piece of mind to Anjali, so so so beautifully penned
Excellent character
Aman - such an adorable person, hope he too get a partner and find happiness
Payal - really strong to sense the problem in khushis married and gutsy to take police help to rescue Khushi
Lavanya- beautiful in and out
Teddy - less said the better (hope such creepy doesnt exist much in our society, if so, let ladies be strong enough to fight it out)
Khushi - such a nice person
Arnav - beautifully carved character,
Good that he found solace and happiness in Khushi
Best story RB
Enjoyed a lot
Best wishes to u
Beautiful End of this amazing story.
The new time starts tiking, for Arnav & Khushi, Arnav & Anjali, Arnav & Aman & Lavanya and Arnav & Geandmother...
So beautiful ending or i should say begining..
Excellent. Read it all in a go. So beautifully woven, with each person's emotions so well described.
Wonderful
Read the entire story in one sitting and u are an amazing writer
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