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Hi there!!
I just completed reading your story. It was just soo alluring, it gripped me from the first para that I read it was just that beautifully written. There was never a scene in all the chapters where I felt that the characters that you u have built so far are acting aur saying something out of their character (which is tough!!)... The plot itself is very gripping bt tough to narrate and you have done it real well. I could feel the pain and struggle of khushi. If anything that I felt to see more was arnav's personality. so far I don't know who or what kind of person is he that's it bt then you are the writer n it's your decision. Eagerly waiting for more updates !!
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