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Originally posted by: aashupwhat a beautiful os ahhh... waiting for long time for this
even i found it bit awkward whenever kapil force sumona to show her tattoo but omg... you explained it so positively in your os that i felt awww feeling for kapil.please do write such os more it always makes me happy :)
Originally posted by: Chit15First a big thank you for KaSum OS. I missed them a lot
Wow you have written so beautifully.I liked the way Kapil explained his action to show Sumona tattoo. It was done in good way.
Originally posted by: KsfandishiAwesome os
Loved your storyPlzz write more of itAnd lastly KaSum rocks!!
Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18Finally I could read your OS. First of all thank you really really much for giving us a new KaSum Os. I appreciate it a lot :)
I had to read the story with breaks as I got too excited after some time and has to cool down ;) so you did a fab job as I had to put a whole night as a break.Ahh I just loved the scene you choose to write about. At that time I was so surprised to see him kind of obsessed with her Tattoo. I mean its her Tattoo and her back, let her decide if she wants to flaunt it on national tv or not. ..but it also got me blushIng on how he demanded her to show..About the way you wrote it was just mesmerizing..I really like the small twist with him dragging her to his van instead of asking her directly to talk and that too when no one but them was left... and *gutter mind* I think I loved the whole last part with their kiss and small talk after that the most... you had me again blushing and reading that part all over again. You just write it so natural and sensual... amazing! !!!Loved it as usual. And like every time I will say keep it up :)
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