Kidnapped Groom a Swasan SS( epilogue pg 54) - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Helee

oh god...teaser is so interesting...! can't wait for the chapter... 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Or do to phir update jaldi karo
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-9


Ap came forward with vermilion.
Ap- sanskaar beta we haven't seen urs n swara's wedding yet n hence I simply want u to fill her partition with this vermilion..

Sa- M.. M.. Maa .. woh.. aa.. shadi ho gayi h Na toh phir kyun bar-bar u r..

Su- Na k bar bar.. isme k h bharde chori ki mang.. wese bhi have ayi h tabse ..
Sa- mom..
Su- Na sanskaar chal mahri bat man..

Sanskaar n swara felt numb..

Dp - sanskaar what's the big deal.. do it beta..

Sanskaar stood there motion less when sujata lifted his hand n kept the vermilion in his hand..
Sa- mom pls..
But no one seems to be listening..
L- chachi let it be Na.
Ap- laksh .. don't a speak in b/w... sanskaar..
He looked into her eyes.. she was trying to control her tears.. he looked at her questioningly n she looked down as if saying she doesn't know...

Su-Na abke 10 ghante chahiye k thare ko sanskaar..
With his face turned pale he took a pinch of vermilion n filled her partition.. his eyes now could not meet hers.. he was guilty... she touched her forehead n sensed that red holy powder there..
Seeing this mm wasis were now satisfied n happy they all left accept raglak who closed all the doors n Windows before they conversed with swasan.. sanskaar closed his eyes.. he realized they were in a complete mess.. a kidnapped groom with a half bride... they were half married... she fell on the ground on her knees.. almost broken.. ragini stood by her side..

L-sanskaar what u did..y u did that.
Sa- toh kya karta ... dadi ko dekha Na tune lucky woh swara ko aur mom ko kuch bhi bolti rahe aur mein sunta rahon..
L-par phir bhi ab kya hoga...
Sa-idk..
R-swara.. r u okay..
Sw- sanskaar.. I .. I .. I am Sorry.. I am really really sorry..

Sa came n sat close to her.. seeing them laksh took ragini out with him.. closing the door behind

Sa-y r u sorry..

Sw- yeh sab meri galti h sanskaar.. jabse mein ayi hoon Mene tumhari life bhi spoil kardi.. every day u have to struggle because of me.. I am sorry.. n today .. today I separated u n kavita..I am the intruder.. I am sorry...

Sa- have u lost it swara.. kavita was my past .. n not u but our destiny has separated us.. in fact I am sorry for spoiling ur life just in a few seconds..
Sw- no sanskaar u need not be my life was spoilt the day my mom dad left me..

Sa- noo swara..

Sw-sanskaar u know what I am unlucky I think I shouldn't be here.. I don't deserve anything..

Sa- kya kya bol rahi ho what r u saying.. ( he said shaking her shoulders)..
Sw- no I think I should die.. I am unlucky.. for all..
Sa- no swara pls .. yeh kya bol rahi ho.. shut up...
Thus time she stood up n went to the window n stood on its edge.. she then left her hands as freed herself.. but before gravity Can do its job there were a pair of 2. Strong arms who held her.. sanskaar pulled her back into the room..
. sa- time u in ur senses ...
He saw her she stood emotionless.. "she needs to cry n get her heart out" he thought

Sa-swara speak something..say something.. cry or beat me but atleast react..
she still stood numb .. he threw some water on her face.. shaked her.. n there it.was her reaction she was crying finally... he felt relaxed n then consoles her...

Sa- swara trust me yeh relationship adhoora h.. n never dare to call itself unlucky bad times are there in everyone's life kisike zada aur like kam got it ...aur wada h yeh sanskaar Maheshwari ka ki tumhare have sapna pura karoonga.. I have promised ur mama to be by ur side always n I never break my promises..

Sw-looked at him..n then she spoke up

Sw-sanskaar thanks for being there today as well.. saving me from those.alligations n questions on my character n upbringing.. thanks sanskaar..

Sa- sshhh!! Pyar aur dosri mein no sorry n no thank you..
She smiled faintly... then he found her body warm.. when he held her arm..

Sa- u should take rest.. come
Sw-but ..
Sa-no ifs no buts..

He made her sleep on the bed .. switched on the AC n left the room..

In the evening -
She woke up when sanskaar n sujata entered ..
Su-chori kesi tabyat h thari..
Sw-mom . Am ok..
Su-acha challo u both come down masi sa wants to meet u ...
Sa- yes mom we r coming.. u go..

In the hall.. swasan came down.. Sd was waiting there swara bend to touch her feet .. she blessed them n then Sd sat on her place..
SD-what is ur name..
Sw-Swara..
SD- aage kya I know now it is Maheshwari but what was earlier.
Sw- swara boss ..
Sd was sipping tea when she almost forgot to breathe..
SD-WHAT swara boss...
Sa-yes dadi boss any issues
SD- u know what?? Was this half bengalan less that u brought a full begali DIL.. (she said pointing to ragini n swara respectively)
L-pls dadi don't start that again..
Sd sat on the sofa ordering sujata to prepare for the arti in full angry mode..

After 2 hours -
Sd has set her mind to insult swara as much as possible.. their 1st meet wasn't already that good n then the truth of swara being a Bengali pinched her..

Sujata noticed swara coming..
Su-jiji aaj arti swara SE..
Ap-hmm
As soon as swara came down .. Sd started babling
SD- sujata ask ur DIL how many fishes she ate today so That I can purify the temple after she goes..
Sanskaar got irritated from her words but chose to be quite as not to provoke her anger more..
Soon the arti started n swasan dis it together..

After that was the dinner time Sd continued to make faces n taunt swara..
SD- hope u all hav not started eating fish yet..
Sa-dadi..
SD-what I am just questioning ..
Sanskaar turned his face away..
He was already not happy from Sd since mrng but still he tried speaking the least..
SD- bengalan come here 1st ..
Swara came close n Sd sprinkled ganga jal on her hands .. n then ordered the servant to keep it back..
Sanskaar clenched his fist in anger...
She wasn't much affected as was use to all this at her Mami sa's place..

SD-bengalan today the food is very tasty what have u made...

Swara stood dumb.. she didn't knew how to cook..

SD- bengalan I am asking something??
Sw-I don't know how to cook..
SD- great sanskaar see ur wife ,such a use less dil u have given to sujata .. look at this bengalan..
Sa- enough dadi .. she has a name swara.. n she is still quite young. 2ndly she is my wife not ur 24*7 maid.
SD- sujata r u listening to this boy..
Su- sorry masi sa.. I will talk to him..
SD- bengalan what have u done to our son..
This was it for him he got up...
Sa-I am not hungry n swara pls come with me upstairs I need ur help...
Sw-but sanskaar..
Sa-ssshhh!!
He held he wrist n took her upstairs ..

2 days later - it was a routine swasan did not eat with Sd sanskaar could not hear all the nonsense about hisrwif..okay okay half wife. Whatever!!
Sd kept on her bengalan Jap .. she was waiting for one chance to throw this girl out of the mm as well as out of sanskaar's life...

Today was Saturday.. dp called both swasan to the study...
DP - swara sanskaar I think we need to announce about ur weddings so I have thrown a party tomorrow evening all the media n everyone will be there so be ready...
Sa-but bade Papa.
DP - sanskaar.. pls try to understand we need to do this otherwise people will continue to question yes n swara's relationship!!

They both have to agree to it now...


BarkhaSingh123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sahakinju

Please esha treasure mat do
Or do to phir update jaldi karo
Varna phir pure din sochna padta he kya hoga age

Updated babes..
No worries tonight I will reach the teaser part in part 10
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update 👏
Finally swasan ki shaadi hogayi 😳
Ab romance bhi start kar do ☺️
But sd 😡 hate her
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
ye update 14 cm lamba nahi he😡
Kal hi nxt part daalegi tu varna kha jaaungi tujhe kaccha😆
Nice update...
aww iss sanky kab akal aayegi aur ye samjhega ki swara ki zarurat usse bhi he😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Awesome update 👏
Finally swasan ki shaadi hogayi 😳
Ab romance bhi start kar do ☺️
But sd 😡 hate her
Update soon

Thanks
N Sure
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice Update.. 👍🏼

Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: soumi93

ye update 14 cm lamba nahi he😡

Kal hi nxt part daalegi tu varna kha jaaungi tujhe kaccha😆
Nice update...
aww iss sanky kab akal aayegi aur ye samjhega ki swara ki zarurat usse bhi he😳

Gussa nahi bebo.. will update tonight
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
The vermillion filling sequence was beautiful
Bangalan jap...
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm

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