Kidnapped Groom a Swasan SS( epilogue pg 54)

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So here is a new swasan SS I will update prologue and part one soonish but before that this is the character sketch. Pls do read.


Characters -
Swara Bose - 20 years. She is an orphan
Sanskaar maheshwari - 24 years. He is successful businessman
Janki Bose and Raj Bose - Dead, 3 years back ina car accident. Mother and father of swara
Mangal Rahti-swara's mama. A kind hearted man and has a soft corner for swara
Mridula - swara mami. Wicked woman, money minded. She hates swara and wants to spoil swara's life in every way
Mohan- Mridula bro same as her
Kavita - sanskaar's 1st luv dead
Sharmishta and Shekhar gadodiya Ragini's parents
Rest all characters are same

new-
rajnesh- sanskaar competetor, wicked minded 2nd best businessman but wants be the 1st by hook or by crook..
manoj - rajnesh's secretary.. partner in crime..
rohan- rajnesh's partnerin crime.. his photgrapher-clicked swasan's pictures..

New-2
Sarojini Devi (SD) - aunt (Mosi) of DP. The villain for all the Dil's of Mm. Strict, orthodox, authoritative and dominating lady. Shares a not so good bond with sanskaar and laksh because of them being the rebels n opposed her whenever she tries to impose wishes on any of their mothers or wife. Hates Bengalis, hates rags for being half Bengali never treated sharmishta properly. Will hate swara to the core n try to separate swasan by hook or crook, will bad mouth swara and try to show her down everytime..
Note - buddies don't worry I won't add any kitchen politics or typical Saas bahu fights as I my self hate them🤢 but she will surely create some drama to add on to the twists in this short tail.. hope u like her as a villian... sorry for or delaying the fake marriage track but I had to rewrite the part again so I will now post asap.. thanks for reading 😊



Concept - This is a wiered wedding ritual practiced in some backward areas of Rajasthan where a guy is kidnapped and beaten 1st and then he is married to the girl of the family. Off course he is pampered but after beating


Disclaimer - this is a marriage ritual for sure but i am not exactly sure how it takes place. Also this story is pure work of fiction, it does not intend to hurt ,target or insult any person, place ,cast or religion.

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue-

Janki rawat was 22 when she fell in love with a Bengali boy Raj Bose. They overcame all the hurdles it was tough for them to make their parents agree but somehow they succeed. Raj was a business man in Kolkata, so after marriage Janki came to Kolkata with raj, Janki's family never completely accepted Raj but janki and raj got their whole world in each other. Raj had no one else in the family so however Janki's family treated him he respected them a lot.

After some years Janki gave birth to a beautiful daughter, swara. She was a chirpy bubbly girl with general habbits of teenager. But an incident changed her life. IT was when Swara was 16 Janki and Raj died in a car accident, leaving their daughter alone to fight the whole world. Mangal decided to take her to Rajasthan where he can take care of swara but his wife was reluctant to it. She hated Janki to marry a Bengali boy and also swara cause for her she was also a bengalan. Mangal forcefully took swara to Rajasthan as he was concerned for her but his wife made Swara's life a hell. She treated swara like a slave and tortured her, Mangal could not stop her due to the general haterate of all the family towads swara and also Mridula's brother Mohan thanks to him to diatract his jiju almost evrytime swara was mistreated, Never the less when ever he came to know about it he had tried his level best to explain everyone but in vain. Due to his support swara completed her 12th class with sc. Bio as her subject she had big dreams but more than this facility could not be affordedby Mangal. But still swara's success marked the start of a new era in the village girls were motivated to go and study swara and mangal were trying their level best to collect funds so that swara can go and persue her further studies but before they could be successful Mridula and Mohan hade a plan to destroy her life completely ...

Maheshwaris are a happy family open minded and loved each other. Ragini and Laksh are love birds of the house who have fallen in love and were married 6 months back. Ragini is the only daughter of shekhar and sharmishtha Gadodiya who also did love marriage. Sharmistha was a Bengali. Pari and adarsh were also married 1 year ago this was a love arranged marriage. Adarsh and pari loved eachother and co incidently the same alliance came and they without disclosing anything to the family agreed for the marriage. Sanskaar Maheshwari is the only single man in the house, even when he could have been the 1st one. 2 years back his 1stlove kavit adied due to cancer. Now sanskaar is trying to move on in his life cause he knows afterall he have a family to live for. Suajat did not force him for the Marriage or never hurt him by showing alliances, she wants him to fall in love all over agin so that he can accept the girl whole heartedly. Her loves her son unconditionally and can do anything for him.

The life for Maheshwaris was smoothing going until one day their car was stopped on a lonely road and some men with guns and rods kidnapped sanskaar from the car..

So what had haapeened to sanskaar who are these people how will sanskaar and swara meet will sanskaar be able to move on so much that he can accept someone else accept for kavita...

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Hi everyone so here is the 1st part i am sorry for the late update and thanks a lot for ur feedback i am really sorry for not replying to any of ur coments.

Part-1

In MM study-

Sujata was crying and laksh is fully angry .Rest all the members of the family are pacing to and fro in the room.

Rp- shant ho ja sujata hum sab h na kuch na hoga sanskaar ko hum sab h

Su- Aree ese kese shan ho jaaun! Mahra chora na jane kiss hal mein hoga.

L- chichi agar mujhe pata chal gaya na ki who log kon h toh main unhe chodunga nahi

R- shant ho jayeye chichi ji yeh leejeiye pani peejeye

Su- nah mahre ko kuch na chahiye

Laksh calls someone

L- omi kuch pata chala

Omi- nahi who toh nhi challa par tujhe koi call aya

L- nahi

Omi"par bhai detail mein bata yeh sab kese hua

Su- haan mahre ko bhi batao kese hua yeh sab

Laksh keeps the phone on speaker and narrates the incident.

FB-

All the 5 of maheshwari boys were coming home from office in the car, Talking and discussing about the new tender Sanskaar was driving the car. When suddenly he applied the car breaks with a jerk. On a lonely road some m en came in front of their car and to his shock they had guns and rods, They were continusely asking who among them was unmarried. They forcefully opened the doors of the car and took all of them on gun points.

G1- Bolo Saanchi saanchi bolo kisa byah na hua h warna ????

(he hinted to shoot them all and hence sanskaar spoke up)

Sa- me meri nahi hui shadi, aap bandook neeche kariye aur shanti se boliye

Laksh and adarsh thought of shouting for help but it was of no use.

Before anyone could understand anything one man hit sanskaar with the back of the gun and he fell unconscious

L- sanskaar!!

Ad- kya chahte ho wallets chains watches yeh lo ;par pls humein jane do

G1- humein kuch nahi chahiye,(to his men) le chalo damadji ko (to maheshwaris) Aap toh nayi bahu k swagat ki tayaari karoo aur dahej hum bhijwayenge

They put sanskaar in a van tried his hands and legs and went away <Maheshwaris tried to chase them but it was of no use

FB ends......

In frustration now laksh got out of controlll and hits a lamp with his hand it falls and breaks.

Omi-Bahi lucky are u ok

l- haan tu police se baat kar yrr and be ready they might call us

Omi- Hmm

Laksh now cuts the call and ragini runs to laksh
R- laksh pagal ho kya tum Kya kiya !! chot lagi dikhaooo

Laksh jerks her hand away..

L- I'm k

R- itna gussa karne se kuch nahi hoga ! humein iss waqat sanskaar ko dhoondh na h aura b apna haath dikhaoo

(she bandages his wounds)

In a dark room-

Sanskaar gains conscious and he trieds to move but could not

Fb- some guys beat sanskaar brutally when he gained conscious earlier and he fainted again.

Sa- Chodo Pls .. aap sab yeh kya kar rahe ho leave me pls(but they beat him like till he gets unconscious )

FB ends...

Sanskaar now searches for the door. His condition is pathetic..

He bangs the door pls leave me ! what u want??

Suddenly someone opens the door with a force and sanskaar falls on the floor..

Some men enter and this time they held him from his upperarms helping him stand straight

G1- number bol ghar ka

Sa- kya

G1- number

Sa- Kyun?

G1- ghar nahi jana

Sa- hmm 9*********(laksh's no.)

L- hello!! Kon

Sa- Hello(faint voice)

L- Bhai where r u??

Sa nskaar was about to speak when the guy took the phone and spoke up

G1- Namaste samdhi ji !! hum jaldi hi damadji aur aapki bahu ko bhej rahe h!! and cuts the call

Sanskaar who was shocked at this was given a sherwani

G2- tayaar ho jayeyi dsamadji

Sa- par I can't

G3- jaldi karoo (he and his men lift sanskaar and took him to a room which was well decorated and sanskaar reluctantly changed )

In the mean time Omi along with police and maheshwaris traced the number and They reached the venue .

In the mid way in car-

Su- laksh sunle mahre chore ki saadi uski margi k bina na honi chahiye wa ki jindagi mat kharab hone dena

L- ji chachiji I promise...

Soon maheshwaris reached there but were shocked to see the scenario ...

Index-

character sketch-above

Disclaimer- above

Prologue- above

Part1 -above

Teaser1- pg6

Part2- pg7

Part3- pg9

Part4A-pg12

Teaser2-pg17

Part4B-pg19

Part5-pg23

Part6-pg26

Part7-pg28

Part8-pg30

Teaser3- pg32

Part9- pg 33

Part10- pg35

Part11 -pg38

Part12- pg40

Part13- pg42

Part14- pg44

Part15 - pg46

Part16- pg48

Teaser 4- pg50

Part17- pg52

Epilogue- pg54

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome cs 👏
Finally a swasan story from you 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome cs 👏
Finally a swasan story from you 😆

Hehe what to do swasan story on the show is so complete that had to think of this new concept to write 😆
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Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1


Hehe what to do swasan story on the show is so complete that had to think of this new concept to write😆


Same pinch actually i will also start 2 new story on swasan 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky


Same pinch actually i will also start 2 new story on swasan 😉

Pls do write and PM me as well egarly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome cs.
Continue soonish.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Humnava

Awesome cs.

Continue soonish.😊

Yo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting CS .Do post the prologue soon .

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