pritus ff^kismat connection^thread 2 last part on page 19 - Page 3

Ruchi yeh kya kiya tune ... 😭 . why this accident yr . doubt ho hi rha tha mujhe . Very much emotional part . naksh and shivu had an amazing bond . wish their second baby survived. But beautifully written each and every scene was fab. 👏

Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Ruchi yeh kya kiya tune ... 😭 . why this accident yr . doubt ho hi rha tha mujhe . Very much emotional part . naksh and shivu had an amazing bond . wish their second baby survived. But beautifully written each and every scene was fab. 👏

Nidhi mujhe kuch rishte bannane ke liye yeh dikhana pada... 😊 ..
But m hpy that jo bhi is story ko read kiya puri tarah involved ho gaya..dis is biggest comment for me.. 😊
Thanku so much for appreciate my work nd likes this part..dont vry i will show everything aage aage ...hope u all will like this ff... 😛

Part-36..
Gy-chinna...starts crying...nk saw to both...
Nk-he sat in knees...amma...crying..
Gy-chinna...hug to him...clam down plz...
Nk-amma..our baby ..first baby..jo bas aane hi wali thi hamari god mai woh esse kyo dur chali gai ...mai kya bolugi ak ko..mai kitna buri hu..jo ak ki care bhi nhi rakh saki ..ab woh toh baby ki rah dekh rahi thi..kaise i will tell to her..no plz aap hi bataiye unko..
Mujhse nhi hogi..kya kya bolu ki unki baby unse dur chali gai..thaki woh isi guilt mai rahe ki unki mistake thi..no amma..i better know woh kisi ko kuch nhi bolegi par tut jayegi puri aur sochegi sab unki galti thi...
De-par jamai saa yeh sach apko hi usse batana hoga...gy3 nd nk saw to dev..
Nk-comes near on her side..maa..i m sry maine apki beti ki care nhi ki...kitni promise ki but nhi ki...flooding his hand ..
De-nhi ..aap bhut aache hai jamai saa...aur isme apki koi galti nahi sayad meri bachi ki kismat mai hi yeh khushi nhi thi..holdes his hand nd crying...par mujhe pata hai agar bhagwan ne uski khushi chinni hai toh woh dega bhi ...par yeh sab apko hi usse batana hoga...aur kisi ke kehne se woh tut jayegi puri par apke kehne se thodi si tasali rahegi ..
Gy-haa chinna...hum sab tumhare sath hai beta touches his cheeks..hamari beti ki bhi koi galti nhi..sabse pehle ak ke health important hai aur kuch nhi..
De-aaj mai dawe se keh sakti hu..meri bachi ke sath jo hua ek hadsa hi hoga...par bhagwan ne usse bhut aacha pati aur ghar diya hai ...
Gy-gave hug to dev...chinna...ak ko hos aate hi bata dena...hum nhi aayege..
Nk-plz..i cant tell..mujhe itni himat nahi hogi..nd crying...hamari baby ..
Gy-bas...chinna..bas..samalo khud ko...tum esse tut jaoge toh ak ko kon dekhegga...beta agar tum thik rahoge toh ak tumhe dekh ke hi khush rahegi..
Nk-amma...doctors came ..doctor..ak ko hos kab tak aayegi..
Do-she is in icu...nd i think till mrng...but apko dhayan rakhna hoga ki unko bilkul hilna nhi hai unki stitches pe koi asar nhi honi chahiye...atleast one week...phir she can move..
Nk-wat..but agar maine unko batai about baby toh .
Do-she will cry nd i think unko blood nd glucose bhi chad raha ...toh apko dhayan rakhna hoga woh stress na le bas..aur samal le khud ko bas..dekhiye time ke sath sab kuch thik ho jayega but itna close aake baby khona yeh easy nhi hota yeh bhut bada pain hota hai...
Nk-i will take care of her..jo hui usse badal nhi sakta hu but mai unki pain ko kam karne ki kosish karugi..aur jo hui essa kuch nhi hogi..mai unke pass baith sakta hu..
Do-yes..but only one member..
Nk-maa..amma..mai.
Both nooded yes..
De-kya hum dur se ak ko dekh sakte hai ..
Do-yes...
Nk-amma...mujhe nhi pata ki kya hogi jab i will tell to her truth..but plz aap sab meri sath dena ..mai unko jo bhi bolu..mujhe unki chinta ho rahi bhut..
Gy-hum sath hai chinna...bas ak ko samal lena hum sab sath hai ...
Nk was fearing so much..but he entered in icu..
Nk saw to ak..she laied on bed...nd she was in deep sleep..somehow nk wipe his tears nd sat near of her bed in table..
nk-kya ho gai see kaise weak ho gai...yeh bold glucose ki bottles...holdes her hand ...kissed on her forehead..
Sab meri galti mujhe jani hi nhichahiye thi...apko kaise batau..u r so sensitive. .kya dreams dekh li thi hamne ..ki baby ko yeh degi dresses yeh hogi...but kuch puri nahi hui...a teras came from his eyes...aap thik ho jaiye bas ..
Is bar ek minute nhi chodni apko..
He holded her hand nd was seeing to her ..thinking about it..
Suddenly he got sleep in nyt..he put his head on bed near of ak...
In morning. ..
Ak moves lill...
Ak-aahhh...she was sleepy llill...her hand moves lill...
Nk wokeup ...
He saw movement on aks hand...
Nk-ak...caressing her hair...
Ak-aahhh...nnn...she opens mouth..
Nk-haa ak...went near ..open ur eyes...mai hu yahi hu..
She swlly swlly open her eyes..
Nk-ak...smile...
Ak-saw to nk...like stranger...
Nk-wat happened ak...smile...kissed on her cheeks. ..aapko hos aa gai i m so hpy ...mai yahi hu apki ekdom close. .
ak-nnkk..
Nk-haaa...ak r u feeling gud na. .
Ak was seeing to nk...
Nk-wat happened...kuch bolni nhi..
Ak-still she was seeing to nk...in his eyes..
But nk didnt meet...
Nk-aap rest kariye...mai baita hu pass mai haa...
Smile...
Ak-skipped her hand from him...nk saw to her..
Ak put hand in her stomach. ...nd serching somthing. .nk saw to her hand ...
Nk-ak...
Ak-she saw to nk with bechaini...want to ask all qu..maybe nk can understand her qu..
But to see her eyes he has no strength to tell all truth from her..
Nk-haa ak...boliye..
Ak-nnnkkk...baby...kaha hai..mera stomach falte ho gya...
Nk-a tears came from his eyes on her cheeks. .
Ak-nkkk...shout...she was breathing heavily. .
More parts coming soon Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago

Nk-ak plz cool down..apki operation hui na..aap gir gai thi...plz apko move nhi karni hai ..plz ak ..plz..
Ak-nk...starts crying ...she was moving her hand on her stomach...nk can feel her becheni...mera bacha kaha hai ...kaha hai nk...in loud voice. ..aap jaiye doctor ko bulaiye...mujhe puchna hai ..jaiye go...nhi mai jati hu...she was about to stood...but nk sttoped to her..nd coupped his hand on her face..
Nk-ak u got stitches so much ..apki body mai blood bhi nhi..u r so weak..
Ak-mujhe koi chinta nhi hai...aap mujhe bataiye kya hua hai nhi toh mai jati hu...aahhh...aahhh...maa...
Nk-kya hui...pain hui kya ...plz dhree dhree boliye na plz...
Ak-mai karugi pehle mujhe mere baby ko dekhne dijiye plz nk...she starts crying..
Nk-ak...woh...woh..thinking. .
Ak-kya ..bataiye na..kyo chup ho gye hai...meri jan nikal jayegi plz..
Nk-haa...every...every...everything is fine. ..
Ak-smile sach...aur baaabaababy...hamara baby..
Nk-woh bhi thik hai with sad face...
Ak-smile sa sa saaachhh...mai maa aap papa ban ban gaye..nk...
Nk-with sadly face ...haa...
Ak-toh baby kaha hai ..woh thik hai na.plz..kaha hai..
Nk-woh woh baby eight month mai hui na toh woh usko machine mai rakhi hai toh woh 1 week kisi ko nhi milegi..
Ak-haa..koi bat nhi...woh mai wait karugi uska aacha woh boy hai ya girl..
Nk-woh ladka hai...
Ak-bilkul apke jaisa na...smile...mujhe hug kariye na...congrtss aap papa ban gaye ..
Nk-nk hug to her...he was crying ...sry ak apko jhooti umid dedi maine..ussi thodni padegi phir...
Ak-smile...nk..mai kab thik ho jaugi..
Nk-thoda time lagegi...broke hug..one week mai apki stitching bhi kul jayegi.
Ak-apki aankhe itni lal kyo hai haa ..kuch hua hai kya..
Nk-aapki health weak thi na so i feared so much.
Ak-toh aapko roni nhi chahiye thi..dekhiye mai thik hu aur hamara bacha bhi...
Smile..
Nk-aap so jaiye ...u need of some rest...
Ak-haa...ab mai aur baby jaldi se thik ho jaiyege aur phir papa ko khoob tang karege...
Nk-hmmm...he was caressing her hair soon she slept...nk came outside nd crying..gy3 saw to nk..
Gy-chinna...ak thik hai na...
Nk-mujhse nhi hui amma...i cant tell ..woh bhut bimar hai...aur woh yeh sadma abhi bardast nhi kar payegi...mujhe time leni hogi...i want pehle unki health strong ho after that unko mujhe mentally support deni hogi.
Gy-aur teri health..
Nk-m fine ..bas mujhe ak ki chinta ho rahi..
Gy-i want that both will be fine..
Nk-pata nhi amma...mai thoda akli reh lu..
Gy-hmm...maine ak ke liye khana mangaya hai..
Nk sat in chair...he was thinking about it. ..after sometime. ..
Ak was shouting nk...nk went inside of room...
Nk-ak...aap..
Ak-nk...aap kaha chale gaye the..mai apko khoj rahi thi..
Nk-woh mai bahar thi..aap uth gai..
Ak-haa...aaiye na ..baithye ...
Nk-kaisi feel ho rahi ab apko...feeling better...
Ak-ab bhut dar gaye the na...mai bhi nk...bhut pain hua tha pata hai apko...jab mai gir rahi thi na ek aandhra sa cha gaya aur mujhe laga ab mai apko nhi mil paugi aur baby bhi...she had tears on eyes..
Nk-mujhe bhi yahi lagi wipe her tears from tumb...bas mai apki bhut care karugi.nd crying...
ak-karuga..smile...nk passed smile. ..
Nk-essi emotional time pe bhi meri fault nikalni hai..
Ak-nhi apko hasana tha...kyoki aap haste hue bhut cute lagte hai...nk gave hug to her...nk koi mujhse milne nhi aaya..
Nk-everyone wants..but maine mana ki...apko abhi rest leni hai na...
Ak-shivu woh thik hai na..
Nk-haa...he is fine...aur hpy hai apki health dekh ke...aur bhi hpy...
Ak-aap abhi bhi paresan hai...mai thik hu nk...
Nk-m fine..apki lunch...rukiye nurse bed ko utha dijiye mai apni wife ko khud kilaugii..ga..
Ak-smile. ...she fold bed lill...nd nk was feeding to her...aapne kha liya nk..
Nk-woh maine kha li..
Ak-jab jhoot bol nhi sakte kosish mat kariye...nurse ek plate khana milega mere husband ke liye plz..
Nu-ji maam.
Nk-pehle apko khani hai lijiye. ..aur haa...teb bhi...chaliye..
Ak-esse datke..
Nk-nhi..muaahh..pyar se...nd feed to her...lijiye bas ek teb aur...thats like a gud girl my sweetest wife...
Ak-nk pass aayege kya...
Nk-hmm...lill close. ..
Ak-aur thoda aur ...
Nk-kya...came close...she kissed on his cheeks. ..
Ak-yaiee...mai thik hu...ab aap is dar ko nikal dijiye..
Nk-hmm...
Ak-lijiye apka khana aa gya..
Nu-maam...ab aapka bed niche kar deti hu ...apko jayada bolna nhi hai...
Ak-ji...nk aap mere samne khaiye chaliye...
Nk-hmmm...he was having. .
Ak-aacha nk..hum apne bache ka nam kya rakhege..aacha aap usse dekh sakte hai kya..
Nk-nhi woh..
A-dur se mere liye ek chota sa video bana dijiye bhut man ho raha...woh kitna chota hai mujhe khoj raha hoga aur mai yaha essh se ..aacha woh dud kya market ka pi raha...nk i waana feed to baby..hamara baby aacha woh isi hospital mai ya dusare..
Nk-woh dusare mai.kisi ne nhi bana ne di video..nd woh care mai hai..
Ak-apko khushi nhi hai nk..
Nk-hai na..fake smile..
Ak-toh khush lag nhi rahe aap..
Nk-woh are mujhe call aai thi mai aaya...
Ak-ji...yeh nk bhi na aachese batatna hi nhi..mera bacha aa jayega toh toh mai ussi ko time dungi...
Nk was crying to hold d wall..
Nk-mai kitni bura hu..ek aacha pati bhi nhi hu...apko sach kaise batau mai...tut jayegi aap..mai...kyo hui yeh kyo...
More parts coming soon Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago

Nk-but mai apko tutne bhi nhi dunga...haa ak...i will give u support in every way...
After some day...
Ak-nk bas ...plz kitna kilayege mujhe mai moti ho jaugi..now mera blood bhi aacha aaya na..
Nk-haa par phir bhi ...khani padegi small plz..see...yeh thodi hai phir teb bhi...
Ak-nk...shivu aayega kya aaj...
Nk-woh read kar raha...amma nd maa will come...
Nk-aacha ur med...aaj apki stitches bhi open ho jayegi...docter told ki everything is ok...but apko rest leni padegi na ...
Ak-aacha nk...ab toh baby thik hoga na..plz uski voice toh suna dijiye..daily bahana aaj to de dijiye
nk-woh haa...aap chinta mat kiriye...woh mai puch lu apki stitched open ki time ho gai...
Ak-nk...yeh nk kuch chipa rahe kya...chipa rahe hai..
After somtimes. ...nk came with doctor. .
Nk-koi darne wali bat toh nhi hai na doctor. .
Do-nhi...she is fine ..nd her innury is also fine kyo mrs samarjhu r u feeling better..
Ak-ji...mere husband ne itna care jo kiya...
Do-u r lucky that u got hubby like nk..
Nk-nhi..apne meri ak ko nhi dekhi she is more beautiful from heart than me...
Do-aap hamesha esse hi rahiye. .
nk-are mujhe thodi kam hai..mai med leke aata hu..
ak-nurse. .aap mujhe water de dengi plz.
Nu-sure...she gave water...
Ak-aap nai hai yaha...pehle toh nhi thi..
Nu-ji mai us din aai thi jis din aap yaha aai thi..than mai chutti par thi ..bhut bura hua apke sath..
Ak-matlb...bura...haa..par all is well than ends is well..mai mera baby dono bach gye...
Nu-kya...kisne kaha apse..
Ak-matlb..mere husband ne..
Nu-but us din apka bacha toh mar gya tha. .
Ak broke down to listen dis..
Ak-kkk..kya bol rahi aap..aapko pata nhi sab thik hai aur mai baby sab...
Ny-ji mujhe koi galt fehmi nhi hui hai...apka baby mar chuka hai..
Ak had tears in her eyes..
Ak-kuch pata toh hai nhi bas dara dete hai aap log..mera bacha maachine mai hai dusare hospital mai...she saw to dev nd gy3 on door...she went near of both..
Dy-ak ..tu aaram kar ...plz..esse...
Ak-maa...maa..woh yeh nurse yeh bol rahi mera bacha mar gya hai..ye galt hai na ...woh toh machine mai hai na..amma nkne bola hai woh jhoot kyo bolege hena.apka grandson..woh hai chotu sa...
Gy starts crying. .
Ak-aap ro kyo rahi hai..amma..maa...bataiye mujhe plz..
Gy-she is saying ryt...u lost ur baby ak..
Ak was slient in one momets...
Ak-maa...shout. ..amma...aap log nhi jante kuch bhi ...nhi jante hai ..mai mere nk se puchugi woh bataiyege...
Apko na kuch nhi pata ...running ..
Gy-ak..plz stop...u r weak..
De-hey bhagwan yeh ladki..ak..dey r also running...
Nk was in counter..
Ak-nk...nk...she was shouting. ...
Nk listened her voice..
Nk-ak...he running near of her nd put his hand on her face...ky hui..
Ak-nk...crying..nk...aap mujhe bataiye ..sab sach sach..mujhe kisi ke upar trust nhi apke siwaye...aap mujhe bataiye..hamara baby thik hai na...woh nurse bolti hai woh ab nhi hai..amma bhi maa bhi..kisi ko kuch nhi pata aap bataiye na mujhe...apne bola hai he is fine..baby toh ekdom mast hai ..boliye na chup kyo hai..
Nk-aap esse...plz rest kariye aap...plz..
Ak-nhi..mai nhi jaugi..bataiye mujhe..plz bataiye...
Nk-aacha baithiye..batata hu..yaha...dey sat in chair...ak...apko batani thi ki aap thik hai..woh..
Ak-kya hai bataiye mujhe aachese..
Nk-woh woh amma..maa jo..bol rahi woh sab sach hai...ak skkiped his shirt...hamne usi din kho di baby ko..aap plz..dhayan...maine apki health thik nhi thi toh nhi batai..we lost our child...
Ak was slient...even she didnt cry..
Nk-ak...he came close of her..mujhe suniye plz...ek bar ..
She stood ...
Nk-esse..aap...kuch bol kyo nhi ak...she was walking. ..ak aap kuch bolti kyo nhi..
Ak was in her thought. ..
Nk -ak aap mujhse bat kariye...she reached in room...sat on bed wore blanket..nd she was sat on bed...
Nd she was slient..
Nk-ak...he was seeing from door...amma..ye chup kyo ho gai roti kyo nhi..
Gy-iska rona jaruri hai..esse toh pattar ho jayegi yeh...plz chinna..ise rulao..
Nk-ak...he sat on bed...aap sun rahi hai na...dekhiye ...ak..
She was sat on bed ...nd not moves anymore. ..
Nk-aap tut gai hai na...but y u r not expressing. ...anything. ..apne suni...hamari baby nhi rahi..
Ak ak...holdes her hand ..but she didnt say anything. .
Nk-ak look at to me...wat happened. .wat ..
Ak saw to him...but she silently watching in front side...she was caressing her stomach...
Nk-akk..akkk...moves to her forcefully. ..apko roni hogi aap roti kyo nhi...baby usi din chali gai ..jab u reached here...
Akk...in loud voice. ..cry plz..ak..cry..
Nk-aacha mai bhi challi jau essi ak ko i dont want jisse meri jarurat nhi..hena...stood just cry...baby died baby died...ak..
Ak-nkkk...in vry loud...bsss bas bas. ..she crying badly put hand on ears...bas nk..bas kijiye bas plz...saw to him...
Apke kiya sab apne kiya..stood kyo kyo nhi bataya mujhe kyo. ..mere masum bache ko bacha lete..hiting on his chest..mujhe mar jane dete kyo mujhe bachaya...kyo ...kyo..
Hiting on his chest...
Nk-was crying...
Ak-mera bacha nk...chota sa bacha..woh kitna chota sa tha..kyo mujhe umid di ki woh thik hai ...kitna dard hua hoga..meri sase judi thi usse...esse kaise tut gai usse sase..mera chota sa bacha nk...kyo mujhe nhi bataya kyo kyo...hiting on his chest...haww...put her hand on her mouth..
She sat on knees on floor..
Ak-meri galti hai...maine usski sase tod di...woh chota sa bacha mai niche nhi aati toh woh haww..mera bacha..nk maine usse khoya nhi maine usse har pal muhsus kiya tha..woh mujhe kick marta tha ..mera farz tha usko jindagi dena...meri god suni ho gai. ..nk mai ek aachi patni bahu aur maa nhi ban pai ...mai haww...
Ek choti si jimedari nhi le pai...mere bache ko ladijiye nk..kuch nhi manugi jindagi bhar..keh dijiye woh thik hai..woh bhi tadap raha tha mere pass aane ke liye...nk mai toh usse dekh bhi nhi pai...
Plz nk..ek maa apne bache ko sirf born nhi karti usse mehsus karti hai..agar woh suru mai jata toh mujhe kya dukh hota par woh itni pass aake ehsas deke chala gya...
Sry nk mai apko papa bhi nhi bana pai...kitni buri hu mai...mera bacha mujhe dedo bhagwan apse kuch nhi mangugi ..khabhi nhi...
Nk-hug to her...bas...jo ho jati hai usse badal toh nhi sakti na..
Ak-nk...mera bacha nk...she was crying badly ..mera bacha nk...i want my baby..mai ji nhi paugi nk uske bina...
Nk put hand on her face nd wipe tears from eyes with d help of fingers...
Nk-bas...bhagwan ki yahi marji thi na...
Ak-nk...mujhe baby ..maine usse..nd she got besohi...nd falls on his arms..
Nk-ak...wokeup..wat happened ak...plz..ak... 😭 😲 ????
So guys sry for late update enjoy dis part nd gave sweet comments i will wait for comments. ..
Sry for mistake plz press like button if u like this part..i m waiting. .
Precap-ak went in ss house...Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago

finally i read all parts which i missed... .
first naksh accident it was vert emotional part lovd ak's fear of losing nk bt nk is fine..cute moments of naksh lovd it...ak pregnancy news surprised nk nd the way he nd all family took care of ak was soo cute... lovd naksh convo in which they said tht shivu will always remain their first child...god bharai part was hillarious nd funny...nk had to leave ak bt shivu took care of her awww...bt poor naksh lost their child...lets see how nk will console ak.,waiting to read some nice emotional scenes of naksh...all parts were very nice lovd it...very sorry for late comment...nd congrats to both ruchi di nd pranu di for completing frst thread of this ff...do update next part soon..

Originally posted by: deepshikan

finally i read all parts which i missed... .
first naksh accident it was vert emotional part lovd ak's fear of losing nk bt nk is fine..cute moments of naksh lovd it...ak pregnancy news surprised nk nd the way he nd all family took care of ak was soo cute... lovd naksh convo in which they said tht shivu will always remain their first child...god bharai part was hillarious nd funny...nk had to leave ak bt shivu took care of her awww...bt poor naksh lost their child...lets see how nk will console ak.,waiting to read some nice emotional scenes of naksh...all parts were very nice lovd it...very sorry for late comment...nd congrats to both ruchi di nd pranu di for completing frst thread of this ff...do update next part soon..

Thanku so much vishu baby for liking this ff nd ur valuable comments 😊 ...wer u skipped u said all ..m so hpy that u connected with dis ff nd gave sach a beautiful comments. ... 😃 ..aww u liked each nd every parts ...so hpy...
I will write some cute scene 😛 dont worry i will try my best...
Thanku so much from pritus ...yaiee we opened new threadthread ⭐️ ...
I was waiting for ur comments. ..actually mai pura dhayan rakhti hu who is commenting who is not... 😳
I will do update next part soon 😊

Next part is on page 4...princyu edit page no nd part...

it was a power pakced update...

Originally posted by: --pranu--

it was a power pakced update...

no words,,,,,

only

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nk and ak ka dard

mainly ek maa banne wali ki ehsaas u wrote sooo flawlessly...

hmmm abhi se u r knwing alll haa haa kya baat hain haa😆

but seriously it was justtt⭐️

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mujhe words kam pad rahi hain iss khoobsorat ehsaas jo u wrote usse xplain karne keliye

do update next part sooonnn

Aww ur valuable nd fastest comments just loved each nd every line... aww u liked each nd every parts thanku so much for liking all scenes...mujhe jo samaj aaya i wrote 😳 ..but hpy that meri princy emotional hui 😛 ..
YuhuuuYuhuuu 🤗 ...mujhe thoda thoda pata hai princy 😆 ...aww i can feel ur words in dis comments so hpy.. 😃
I will do update next part sooner soon it will be interesting 😃Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago