OS : The Last Goodbye - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one...wonder why they did not keep in touch...new beginnings...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It takes immense courage to write a story where arnav and khushi don't end up together. So kudos for that. Don't be disheartened if there is not much response. We are used to give years of Arshi craziness. Of course it pinched my heart to not see them together. But I do agree that life goes on and not everyone gets what they want. It doesn't mean it's a sad ending, yes. You have a very good writing style. I likes it very much. Keep writing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I liked it ...
very REAL.

Its so relatable too cos often 'first love' doesnt always culminate into a happily ever after. But life n love find their way back into our hearts. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
That was beautiful
Expect the unexpected 😉
Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: InvisibleSmile

This was just extremely beautiful. The ordinary of life was brought forth with such gentle provocation that by the end of the story I was not sad, rather content. They had their phase, now they are settled in their own lives. The choice to let was theirs just as it was to hold on.


Beneath the fragile skin, and the beating heart, all we're searching for is to belong. To be accepted, and to be loved.


What a beautiful comment on this lovely OS Shriya.

Life is not always about grand passions. Happiness can be found in gentle care as well. You have shown that in a very real way in your story :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
wow, Beautiful story...

shitty..facts of the life...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Most of the romantic real life stories do not end happily thereafter.

Only fortunate ones are granted their wish.

Hi, I love this OS

Love
Anna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
I loved it a lot,
But just a lot not more than that, coz somewhere in my mind, sorry didn't want to hurt you, but cant live with them being separated!!!!
But discounting this, was a lovely story,
Unlike what I was feeling that I would be in tears, I ended with a smile!!!!
Good Job

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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
This broke my heart so bad. So bad.
I dont know what to say, the more i read the more it broke my heart.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it. Though the ending was not arshi but it was a satisfied feeling about their happiness

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