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parthsha

@parthsha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#661

It awesome mawara i rrally likr nandini charachater a alot manik to hero hai hi loved it waiting next asap plzzz😊

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#662

Yeah,
only Nandu can do things like this,
lovely,
beautiful update dear,
continue soon n take care.

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jashanpreet

@yash7717

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Posted: 9 years ago

#663

Amazing update...
And Manik and nandu's kiss was just out f wrds I can say...
Keep writing
Update soon

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rimi

@elsaanna

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#664

👏😳😊

thanku maw...for this superbly awesome update..

manik following nandu from day 1...she knew...

wow...tht accusing wala moment...to kiya q nehi"...beautifully written maw..

their kiss,was intense man...

nandu didn't want to let him go..

making out like a bunnies now friends...ha ha ha..manik ki self talk was hilarious..

so they are friends now..

cabira...such a teaser..

church mein jane k liye itna sara tym...majnu manik..oops only friends..he he he

finally cabir help him..

tht cute rahul and Lilly wala moments.aww so cute..

church moments was so blissfull..

"mere hisse ka bhi prayers kiya karo na"...so sweet..

rose petals...running session..everything is awesome..

awesome update...itne busy hone ki baad bhi updates dene k liye thanks,bohot sara..

i know that feeling little bit..

I'm also half blind without my heavy number wala spectacle..

don't worry..u did it very well..

God bless you...

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Prabhleen Arora

@7APK

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#665

Wow !!!! Fabulous Part ...
First Kiss then Friends ...
They are following the reverse cycle ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon... 😳

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MaNan_Angel

@MaNan_Angel

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+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#666

You are an amazing writer "Bella"..!!!
Seriously... I was not firstly took this blond thing very well, but now i think it will make them fall for each other..
Ty so much for giving amazing storylines always...

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Sandhya098

@Sandhya098

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Posted: 9 years ago

#667

Hey manwara😊awesome, fabulous, amazing... U penned every emotion beautifully... I was feeling each n every thing as it is happening in front of me... Wow their first kiss yippee n now they are friends...manik surprise was amazing...n their game... Manik ne yeh kya pooch liya... Manik n Cabir Italian is superb 😆...n manik thoughts whenever he is with nandu was super..

Mere pass tho words hi kam pad gaye hai to describe... U r an amazing writer...

Keep writing...

Eagerly waiting for the next part...

Love u loads...

Sandhya098