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Shivam...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#891

Originally posted by: Riya_16
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Yeh bhi achha...hai...I'll give you full credit...This OS is going to a product of all the LakshMilians!!

Core concept by Riya...
1) Setting suggested by Tha and Ranju😳
2) Scenes suggested by Sru, Manas, Swati, Shivam👏

Baki members...plzzz...contribute...

hey i just thought of one more scene

In continuation to manas's scene , when urmi is running behind laksh when he pulls her choti , a deadly snake bites her and laksh sucks the poison out ,

Laksh then fainst due to sucking of poison , urmi worried , but later regains consiouness as poison effect wears down , after all he is shesha's avatar

Edited by shivam030291 - 9 years ago

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sugunmanas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#892

@shivam
they are 10 and 13 years kids🤣
yeh kuch jyada nahi hoga kya😃
but nice idea😉
lagta hai maha episode ke bohut gehra asar pada hai tujhpae😆
sorry if my words hurt u😃

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Shivam...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#893

Originally posted by: sugunmanas
@shivam
they are 10 and 13 years kids🤣
yeh kuch jyada nahi hoga kya😃
but nice idea😉
lagta hai maha episode ke bohut gehra asar pada hai tujhpae😆
sorry if my words hurt u😃

🤣Yup , My brain is totally cross wired right now -

Credit goes to SKR CV's , they are bringing such a drab plot that i have to be content with my wild imagination.

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sugunmanas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#894

hai phaslae tumse na jane kyu
mein ne Lakshmila proulouge update kardi aur dekho koi nahi hai😭
subah padh lena guys
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4578242/hai-phaasle-tum-se-na-jaane-kyun-new-ff

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sugunmanas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#895

Originally posted by: shivam030291

🤣Yup , My brain is totally cross wired right now -

Credit goes to SKR CV's , they are bringing such a drab plot that i have to be content with my wild imagination.

i have no prob with ur idea if they are adult Lakshmila
Ri ne kaha ki woh kids hai
issliyae mujahe odd laga
par acha idea hai😃

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Shivam...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#896

Hey Riya

I am quoting an extract from Scion of Ikshaku regarding Urmila's physical description.

May be you can use some in this or any future Os you make

Lakshman instinctively looked up to see Urmila, even as Ram stood up to receive the

prime minister of Mithila. The two women climbed down swiftly but Lakshman

remained rooted, entranced by the vision above. Urmila was shorter than her elder sister

Sita, much shorter. She was also fairer; so fair that she was almost the colour of milk.

She probably remained indoors most of the time, keeping away from the sun. Her round,

baby face was dominated by her large eyes, which betrayed a sweet, childlike

innocence. Unlike her warrior-like elder sister, Urmila was clearly a very delicate

creature, aware of her beauty, yet childlike in her ways. Her hair was arranged in a bun

with every strand neatly in place. The kaajal in her eyes accentuated their exquisiteness;

the lips were enhanced with some beet extract. Her clothes were fashionable, yet

demure: a bright pink blouse was complemented by a deep red dhoti which was longer

than usual " it reached below her knees. A neatly pressed angvastram hung from her

shoulders. Anklets and toe-rings drew attention to her lovely feet, while rings and

bracelets decorated her delicate hands. Lakshman was mesmerised. The lady sensed it,

smiled genially, and looked away with shy confusion.

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Riya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#897

Originally posted by: sugunmanas
hai phaslae tumse na jane kyu
mein ne Lakshmila proulouge update kardi aur dekho koi nahi hai😭
subah padh lena guys
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4578242/hai-phaasle-tum-se-na-jaane-kyun-new-ff

mai abhi padh rahi hoon...tu ro mat!😆

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Shivam...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#898

Originally posted by: shivam030291

Ok , i will mail u

Swati i have mailed you the ebook , do enjoy the reading.

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Riya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#899

It is a good Idea...may be I'll tweak it a little bit..by showing that the snake that bit Urmila will return at Lakshman's behest (read meditation) and suck out the poison by itself..and Urmi gets to witness Lakshman's divinity for the very first time!