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Originally posted by: Shruti240

hey...



i came to know abt ur ff through my friend...

she told me to read...



firstly I started reading it...

I was so amazed due to ur writing skills...



I read so many gf's Nd trust me so many...
that ffs are very romantic...



Nd some hav common path or we can say storyline..


bt when I started to read ur ff...


I felt that ur storyline is totally different..


ur story has all the emotions...

anger
possessiveness
love
affecting
hurt
emotional
loneliness
happy
content
Nd lot more


I feel all emotion in ur ff...




writing romantic stuffs it's normal...
u can write ur feeling in romantic way...



bt writing such a dark thing...

it's commendable job...


the way u write all the emotions Nd justifying it with perfect wordings...


that's beautiful...




some people criticize u Nd bash u...


they don't know... how to write such emotion with perfect wording...



the way u write we readers easily connected you...


the way portray the character of manik...
it was tough..


when it comes to me..


I m nt able to justify my feelings in words properly...

coz feelings is the thing u cn nt described in words u need to feel...


bt the way u write Nd described it's beautiful... commendable job...

as I said before...
to write romantic stuff is very easy...

bt to write such strong emotion with character... that's was fabulous...



the things which manik says to nandini for apology thing...


that was beautiful...

I knw he did make big mistake...

Bt he is sorry for that...



being a manan fan...
I want happy ending...



u knw... I read ur whole ff in 2 days..


I didn't sleep..


my mum was yelling on me...

bt I was like...

I want to read this by anyhw...



so... want happy ending...



Nd the people who bashed u...
I hav only one thing to say...




" do u hav a ability to write one chapter... not whole ff... only one chapter... "



u r such a fine writer...



plzzz... don't end this ff...


I want to see how u write the romantic stuff...


coz u write beautifully Nd portray this dark emotion beautifully...
so how will u write romantic stuffs... looking forward to read it...



I knw u ll killed it like this..


waiting for ur next update...


we want happy ending...



do PM me... if possible...

think on it which I said abt romantic stuffs...


I knw u will stand by on my expectations...

Feeling so overwhelmed by your comment and glad u like it or about the bashing i really doesn't its a part of writing so i just don't care anyways romance is something little difficult for me wese i have another fiction one night stand with a stranger you could try it has romance but not mushy i can't write that but yeah will try to give good romantic parts in devils as well or it has to be end can't help it i don't have story to show or others stories to work on so don't have another option anyways thanks for the awesome comment 😊 will pm u in next one 👏

hi aashna...
when are you going to update dear
waiting eagerly for the update
plss update

Very nice update

I was crying while reading! Enough of their fights give us happy ending plzz!:)

This story is really amazing I want a happy ending...happy ending ...

Exams are going on that to back to back rest time i give to my os so don't know when i m going to update 21 April is the last date of my exam but i will try to drop a update between this can't promise after my exams i will be regular for you all

Dear Ashna,
First of all, good luck with your exam ... First and foremost, please dont worry abt update rather concentrate on your exam.

Sorry i am really late commenting.. What to say.. wow.. the way Manik wrote the letter.. shit ... Forget Nandu i had tears roll down .. 😭😭😭😭

I loved the the way you showed Nandu's father's revenge.. Yes hehas every right.. to make Manik suffer the way he suffered bc of his doll was suffering.. 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡.. meri dad hote to manik ab tak murder ho jata.. bloody moron..

Yaar i know its nearly the end.. but i wanted to see manik proving himself a little more to nandu regarding her and AVNI.. how manik tarad tha hain in log ke liye.. and hau jata hain.. you klnow.. after all its your story.. so as you wish you can complete but what a change of events.. I really want nandu cry her heart out and wo vi in front of Manik and manik will nothing and juts kiss her at the end.. and say i love you .. UFFF love love love love love to you. babe.. Exam khatam karke aoo.. no issue..

Superbbb and emotional
want happy ending
i want nandini should forgive manik
She should give him a another chance
The pic is really cute
Plzzz continue soon
Waiting

Hieee dear
I started reading ur story only a few days back n i completed it bcz ur story is sooo beautiful.
I was not having a account in this group so i could not comment or like 😭
👏
Ur a mazing writer.
Just fab.
I have read many ff,os, etc but 4 the first time i felt badly like commenting
& plz dear HAPPY ENDING bcz if v regret for u falts then u need forgiveness. 😃 😳
May they b a family 4ever hamesha... 😉