9 months equal to 9 years,I am reborn,Ishani

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Hi Guys ,my dear people 🤗I was extremely bored after successfully ,completing all my assignments and projects and doing a lot of experiments with literature on critical perspective thereby killing the essence of wonderful writers theme with my own review😆😆,I re watched the initial episodes of our show and came with an idea of giving an additional touch to Ranveer's dialogues in the Very first episode's last part,in a poetic design and style ,hope I attend to my readers to hook upon their seats and not throw tomatoes at me.😆😆
Ranveer was the outfit that adored the calcium covering epicarp,
Does my body deserve this much exaggeration with words of superlative such as the epicarp,
Hierarchy stimulated it's thoughts upon my shoulders and gave clear insight,
That never ,I will battle with the powers of the world and make economy respect my feet even through a fight,
I was born as a labour's son which was my identity,
But an enigmatic charm that explored from the angel who,I saw in the limelight made me forget my own identity,
The chirpy bird honestly will accept it's defeat after hearing the sweet smile that she pierced through my heart,
That biasly reflected my feelings as if ,I am a complete human being and I asked my turmoil to my heart,
My heart gave me a review and uttered sounds that made me remind my experience in my mother's womb,
It was a place situated by entire darkness,so was my nine years of life in this world after I was pulled out of her womb,
Nine months ,I was unaware of the glow of light,
Not even about the flow of oceans,that emits splashing light,
Evergreen ambience,I was never exposed,
Feeling lonely as ,I was made to learn patience of life from there and be composed,
Rather than the useful lesson being preached, I was entirely flushed,
But her retina threw the candela ,that pinched and gave me the utter joy that I experienced years ago,
When I was disclosing myself to understand and love my life which was nine months by time ,which was far ago,
Nine months of my enclosure in darkness was resolved by my birth,
Likewise Nine years of life, a life of pain ,struggle,chaos,humiliation was discharged by her lively view ,that came to my eyes and asked is this your rebirth,
I thought for a while ,squeezed my brain and remembered the moments of the light that made me cry while was born ,
Which juxtaposed with the tears that came out of my eyes as an impact of joy when my eyes exploded with her ,I met an explosion fiercely which Earth itself faced to be born,
My cerebrum wanted my mouth to exclaim these words to my Ishani,
Nine months in my mother's womb without anything is equal to nine years in this world without you after your sight ,after my mother's labour equally justified,I am now reborn Ishani...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Hi Guys ,my dear people 🤗I was extremely bored after successfully ,completing all my assignments and projects and doing a lot of experiments with literature on critical perspective thereby killing the essence of wonderful writers theme with my own review😆😆,I re watched the initial episodes of our show and came with an idea of giving an additional touch to Ranveer's dialogues in the Very first episode's last part,in a poetic design and style ,hope I attend to my readers to hook upon their seats and not throw tomatoes at me.😆😆

Ranveer was the outfit that adored the calcium covering epicarp,
Does my body deserve this much exaggeration with words of superlative such as the epicarp,
Hierarchy stimulated it's thoughts upon my shoulders and gave clear insight,
That never ,I will battle with the powers of the world and make economy respect my feet even through a fight,
I was born as a labour's son which was my identity,
But an enigmatic charm that explored from the angel who,I saw in the limelight made me forget my own identity,
The chirpy bird honestly will accept it's defeat after hearing the sweet smile that she pierced through my heart,
That biasly reflected my feelings as if ,I am a complete human being and I asked my turmoil to my heart,
My heart gave me a review and uttered sounds that made me remind my experience in my mother's womb,
It was a place situated by entire darkness,so was my nine years of life in this world after I was pulled out of her womb,
Nine months ,I was unaware of the glow of light,
Not even about the flow of oceans,that emits splashing light,
Evergreen ambience,I was never exposed,
Feeling lonely as ,I was made to learn patience of life from there and be composed,
Rather than the useful lesson being preached, I was entirely flushed,
But her retina threw the candela ,that pinched and gave me the utter joy that I experienced years ago,
When I was disclosing myself to understand and love my life which was nine months by time ,which was far ago,
Nine months of my enclosure in darkness was resolved by my birth,
Likewise Nine years of life, a life of pain ,struggle,chaos,humiliation was discharged by her lively view ,that came to my eyes and asked is this your rebirth,
I thought for a while ,squeezed my brain and remembered the moments of the light that made me cry while was born ,
Which juxtaposed with the tears that came out of my eyes as an impact of joy when my eyes exploded with her ,I met an explosion fiercely which Earth itself faced to be born,
My cerebrum wanted my mouth to exclaim these words to my Ishani,
Nine months in my mother's womb without anything is equal to nine years in this world without you after your sight ,after my mother's labour equally justified,I am now reborn Ishani...



These lines just stole my Heart❤️
Very Beautiful lines Jenny😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi my dear Roshini🤗
How r u dr?
THanks a lot dear😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!
The way with which you've described the aura of "Ishaani" in Ranveer's life is so ethereal and so pure.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Hi my dear Roshini🤗

How r u dr?
THanks a lot dear😃😃


Hii Jenny🤗
I m perfectly fine. What about u????😊😊😊
No need to say a Thank u. u really deserve this appreciation😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bbishveer

Wow!

The way with which you've described the aura of "Ishaani" in Ranveer's life is so ethereal and so pure.

Omg that is huge praise,thank u so much bb😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShaktiLuvsRadhu


Hii Jenny🤗
I m perfectly fine. What about u????😊😊😊
No need to say a Thank u. u really deserve this appreciation😃

I am fine re,relaxing after a lot of assignment works
Fine will get the thank u back dear😆😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice one jenni🤗
loved it allthroughout 😊❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good one C.R nice writing ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful lines Jenny (I don't know the correct spelling). 😛😛

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