[~MRS. FANGURL*~] ~ REVIEWS THREAD # 2 - Page 32

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

OH MY GOD!

hehe.. 😆

I am so happy that you thought about it bro.

Me too happy as usual.. but even if I dont plan to extend will think something small...

I really wish that you get even more than 25 readers who want you to continue the story

hmm thankoos... but I highly doubt ... mostly planning to write some other thing or shut down writing business for few months.. *becoz its life changing phase*

But count me in and also at the top of the list

hehe I know.. and as always 😆

Coz you know the over excited fan I have always been of your stories😉

yup yup fangurl!! 😆 🤗 hmm smiley sista you always succeed to bring a smile on my face no matter so stressed I'm ..😊

Really looking forward to the future of this story 😊

hmm high chances that I will be ending this FF...becoz I have already completed epilogue and extra shots scene lists now changing the plan will be wastage of efforts..

Originally posted by: kadia717

Res

Unres..

Hehe me too finally replying 😆

helllo flying motu hiiippooo

Hello Jolly Queen Cookie Pie Sista...a😛

My fav dialogue : sry for being late...this time extremely late...😆

Hehe exams the na isiliye no need to say sorry.

i knew it, asad will dance on behalf of zoya...

Hehe..! Easy guess tha but surprising tha na.

that was very lovely...

Yup it was cute as well as lovely.

U should put romantic song for making it beautiful instead of poetry...but its alright...

Hww hww.. Actually I could have but this is the first 100% my own work story.. Isiliye didn't added.

zoya ko wheelchair pe hi rakhake dance karana tha na, asad ko easy rehta...😆😆

Lol but romantic steps nahi hosakte the.. Imagine the proximity. Lol

and that beautiful dialogue: asad hai mere liye that to with wink...😳 lovely...

Wink wink Hehehehe. Yup it was cute.

finally asya ke bich kuch to hua...romantic scene😳...*no comments*

Lol comment 😆

Dreams ke base par likha hoga ye sab..only u know what i mean...😉 well written...

Hmm frankly if I say yes then? 😆 I'm not that unromantic Hippo 😆

Urf...that rania...well she consider asad as his bro...thank god...13 chappy me hai, so 12th padhte waqt to gussa aaya tha uspe...

Hehe yes.. She is a nice soul..

and again zoya asad ka jagda...urfff...

Jahan pyaar wahan jhagda as usual

and that aayesh scene...its good zoya helped her...

Yes.. It was.. Side track just to make Zoya understand she is not the only one with problems.

and then...great tamater...well jab zoya ke saath koi nai hota, tab najma hoti hai...she is such a caring and matured girl and naughty as welll...love her...👍🏼

Yup she is.. Lovely bubbly matured tamatar. Lol. But she acts as true sis.

she made zoya understand the relation of husband and wife...hehe didnt expect ki najma itna sara samjayegi...ab zoya ko bhi ese mature bata do...har choti baat pe kisi ki advice milti hai and then decision leti hai to make it alright...

Hehe.. Najma is big baccha.. No comments but our Zoya is naive choti bacchi samjha karo karnaame dekh kar hi 😆

And finally secret revealed...hehehehehee asad-rania : bro-sis🤣

Wow bohot hasi aaying kyun?

zoya ke doubts clear ho gaye finally...

Yes. Finally hehen

so it was happy ending of chappy 13 i guess...and mera comment bhi end here😆

Yup happy ending happy ending. 😆

well written both chapter...but ab aage kya hoga...zoya will apology to asad...right...

Aage ka padhlo Chapter 14 out. 😆

continue soon..

Formality right? 😉

Urs,

J...a

Urs loving bro

Flying Motuu Hippo 😆

Originally posted by: anuv6

i LUVD it..

Hmm so glad you loved it. 😛

i'm little Late t...bt when i read...LOTTERY😊

Buahahah lottery! Omg! Btw its ok if you are late it doesn't matter.

i thought u wrote about raina onlyinitially, bt as the story movd ...awesome,amazing with ASYA.

Hmm.. I didn't wanted to give Rania story more chapters space so I added it all in one go.. But yes.. Asad was a integral part of whole chapter except that Rania story was narrated. And then surprise! Asya's 1st anniversary and all those lovey Dovey moments which we were craving for lol.

the way u made raina's story...unexp, i mean u effortlessly change her neg shade into positive with sympathy...wow its really good.👏

Glad you liked it. Hmm I had already told at Rania's introduction that she is a unique character and Will change all the thoughts.. And she will die in story. She was a strong soul and had recreated herself with Asad's love as a brother and Zoya's purity made her envious but in a positive way
i cant believe the story is going to be end...i'll miss it.😭

Aww don't cry sista. Every beautiful story has a end. But I'm planning something to bring smiles on everyone's faces.. Its just that my life is going through toughest times and I want to shed some responsibilities and tasks in my life.

bz this story... which i always expectng update and honestly the first story which i properly followed.

Oh that's so good to know. Thank you so much sis.

i'm a silent reader first,bt later i cant stop myself from commentng...

Hehe I know. 😆
do write more...😊
UPDATE soon

Hmm.. Still (Chapter 15 A & B - Epilogue - Extra Shots) left. We still have one month for this story's end.

Once again thank you so much sis for your comment. It really means a lot.
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LUV ASYA (KABHI)

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Updates was Awesome

Hmm thank you so Asif bhai. 😃

First one was emotional.

Yup Rania and her story

Rania suffered too much in her life.

Yup bad destiny and her inability to understand people. Her teenage and twenties were horrible and dark phase of her life. But in the end she proved a strong woman.

She was on last stage & eat dry fruits.

She somewhat killed herself instead of killing the people she loved bit by bit. If she had gone for treatment she wouldn't have lived but she would have witnessed herself dying bit by bit but her loved ones dying every day

For that she gave Asad a sleeping pill.

Yes because Asad slapped her and stopped her knowing her plans. But she drugged him to make him unsuccessful in his plan to save her.

Finally her soul rest in peace.

Yup.. With lesser pain she died and lesser pain she gave to her loved ones. But she wasn't really right in doing it. I wished she fought till the end.. But her story ended a kind of happy ending.. Dying after seeing Asya happy together.

After the emotional part, a most awaiting part.

Hehe Yup.

Asad wished her their wedding anniversary

Yes.. And zoya had almost forgotten being depressed all the time thinking about Rania

& she lifted all the restrictions.

Yes finally..

They become one in all senses.

Yup

Poetry as usual was beautifully written.

Special thanks for that Asif bhai

Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm

Next update in mid June.

Your welcome. 😳

Originally posted by: fatima30

Rania's story was so sad...

Yup sadly it was.
Asya moments were so romantic
Hehe no comments. 😆 it was hot.
I hope Alisha does not do anything silly...
Hope so.. Me too Hehe.
This is a really nice and different story.

Thank you so much sis.. It really means a lot..

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Originally posted by: ayat20

Nice

Thank you so much sis 😊

Felt bad for raina she has gone through a lot n that such a death

Hmm sorry for making you feel bad but that was all about her story.

Really felt bad

Sorry. About that. 😉

N finally asya first anniversary n all goes well between them

Yup finally they are happy and everything is good between them.

n hope alisha is safe

Hope so.. She is Heartbroken at the mement and needed support. Hope she is fine. (actually that precap was just to keep everything else in the next chapter secret lol)

N all the best for us exams

Thanks for the best wishes. 😛

And thanks for the awesome comment it really means a lot. 😊

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

nice..