[~MRS. FANGURL*~] ~ REVIEWS THREAD # 2

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teja21

@teja21

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#301

lovely updates

thanx fr d pm dear

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#302

Wow

It was an emotional update

It started on a sad note but it finish with a smile on my face and also Asad and zoya 😉

As they say never judge a book by the cover

Raina had a thought life a past so horrid ouch

But then her husband came like a guardian angel for her

So she did had bad intentions with Asad at the beginning

And still wanted him after she learnt abt zoya and was jealous he never pay heed to her

But after learning his story she changed her mind and became a genuine

Aww so she was ill too and she die

So she dragged him to shut him up and end her pain

So guess she overdose on nuts and sleeping pills and brought an end to her life

So asya morn her death but in the end it brought them closer

So Asad never overstep he took his time and be his sweet romantic self

Until the first anniversary where he gifted and she thanked and he asked permission and it was granted and to took him and her all the way to a heavenly paradise

Love it

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1056084

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#303

Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments, I read each and every comment and extremely happy. Thanks for taking time to write beautiful comments.

Will reply to all the comments on Thursday, extremely stressed and pressurised with Exams.

Take care and keep smiling..

-MNsTrous

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#304

I am actually really very speechless with these two chapters bro

Loved them to the core

Cannot say much about part A as I am still in a big shock reading the update

Crying is not my thing, but the update actually did made me cry

Rania had to go through so much in life

And then her soul rests in peace. Her story just describes that sometimes life is just so unfair to many!

And then the next part where asya are trying to get over rania's death but sometimes it's so weird to even think that how can someone just not be there anymore😭

Then zoya's conversation with alisha where she gets to know that alisha failed

Just hope that alisha does not take some drastic step. Hope she gives life as well as herself a second chance!

And then finally asya take their relationship to the next step and become husband and wife in true sense.

Indeed an update full of revelations and emotions

I seriously had to compose myself from al the crying before writing the comment but I actually find this as the most heart touching chapter of the story

The poems were amazing and a treat to read helping the characters describe themselves in a way only poems do!

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter but at the same time really very sad for it's end. But as it's said that all things have an end.

Would be looking forward to know what happens in the last part and the epilogue

Please try to continue soon bro😛

And all the very best for your exams. You will surely excel with flying colours 😳

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#305

Awesome chapter
Raina was really a strong women
Such woman requires lots of respect and love
Asad was kind enough to support her
But alas the loneliness does finishes a person

Asad and zoya finally became one
It was so hot
Finally they are back together again

Next one is the last chapter..??
What..? I still can't believe this is gonna end..:(
I'm gonna miss this..:(

Hope you'll write another story after this..:)

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For me to know and you to guess :)

@-Awaari-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#306

Im speechless after this update

Raina ...or Soobiya didnt deserve the life she recieved, but hope death give her the peace she deserves.

Zoya's turmoil is justifiable, the person who took the place of Maria in minutes got away in front of her in minutes and that'd definitely be heartbreaking

And I really Hope Asad and Zoya is able to recover from all this and heal with LOVE

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aleena

@aleenaansari

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#307

Vry nyc update...
Luvd it...
Finally zoya accepted asad fully..
Nd also confessed her love...
Eager to read more...
Do continue soon...
Nd all d very bst 4 ur xams..

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Jalpa

@kadia717

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#308

Res

Unres...

Helloo tedhe medhe tamater flying mamu motu khitpit buttery hiipppooo...

kya halchal hai...!!!! maze me..??? Jaldi books close karo...

Jolly queen ne unres kar diya finally😆...come on...get up and dance: tenev nev nev nev..

Now coming to the update...

awesome both part...

one part was totally emotional and another was romantic...

pehle rulate ho and fir hasate ho...kabhi nahi sudhroge aap...😊

But really rania's story was very sad...I was like zoya...Guilty..coz i also cursing her...

Asya's broke down on rania's death, well understanding, coz asad knew her story and zoya had just witnessed...and that rania's poem-amazing...

and o o...asya romance-lovely...No comments..😆

And now about alish...plz usse bhi mat mar dena...😆

Bye bye...I dnt think ab zyada der hai update ki...😆

Urs,

J...a

Edited by kadia717 - 9 years ago

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1056084

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#309

Thank you everybody (especially those who commented) once again. Your words really touched me and it means a lot for me as it feels my work is respected.

Will reply to each and every comment as soon as I get free.

(Probably will reply in installments so please don't feel sad if I didn't replied to your comment first. Replies will be in FCFS order.)

Second and most important announcement.

Looking that most of you are really sad about the story's end, I can plan to continue season 3 (Chapter's 16 to 20) just for you guys.

For that I will be posting a Poll to assess my active audience.

Everything will only be decided if I get a good response.

I'm somewhat sad and demotivated finding that out of >100 PM's I send out the response is only <20.

And the readers who really comment after reading is <12.

If I get 25+ readers who are willing to really read and comment then I will promise the extension of this story by removing the epilogue and extra shots and providing much entertaining and full length chapters.

I think I deserves at least 25? Do I?

And being fair, no proper response, is like no TRPs lol..

Matlab show ends on a good note... Soon...

Thank you so much and free hugs! Lol!

-MNsTrous