[~MRS. FANGURL*~] ~ REVIEWS THREAD # 2 - Page 33

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

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Like usual your works are something perfecta and adorable.
Loved it

Originally posted by: teja21

lovely updates

thanx fr d pm dear

Originally posted by: anopama

Wow

Hehe thank you so much sis for the comment and review. it really means a lot.. 😛

It was an emotional update

Yup.. Rania's part was too much but it was how her story was formed and the way it will effect Zoya and Asad life.

It started on a sad note but it finish with a smile on my face

Hehe yes.. Glad it gave a smile on your face. Mission accomplished!

and also Asad and zoya 😉

Hehe.. Yup.

As they say never judge a book by the cover

Hmm this line touched me.. Thankoos!

Raina had a thought life a past so horrid ouch

Yes it was.. She was an innocent soul who was crushed in the ugly world but she stayed strong and stepped up in life with a though to prove the world her life wasn't a failure.. Due to it she always craved for real love and asad was the one who understand her and supported her by giving the respect she deserved as a woman.

But then her husband came like a guardian angel for her

Yup an old man but a gentleman with a need of someone to fill the emptiness in his life. He saved her respected her but never loved her like a husband.. The age gap and horrid past always made a huge distance between them. Rania stayed with him like a caged princess. Happy in her home sad in her heart.

So she did had bad intentions with Asad at the beginning

Yes because of Asad's true loving behaviour and the respect he gave for her. And the concern and affection he showed. Asad is a lovable person and anyone can fall for him.

And still wanted him after she learnt abt zoya and was jealous he never pay heed to her

Jealousy and envy... She wanted love.. She was love hungry. She never new love doesn't mean possession but freedom. So to acquire Asad she had bad thoughts for Zoya.

But after learning his story she changed her mind and became a genuine

Yes.. For the first time her heart started beating for asad and that functional heart felt his pain and also it was that coincidental point where she came to know her life is too short to give happiness she dreamt with Asad... Asad's story made her love an obsession and being a true lover she stepped back respecting the love of Asad and zoya

Aww so she was ill too and she die

Yes.. She was... Undisclosed disease and at last stage but probably something related to abdomen. She was also allergic to beans and nuts but she loved them. Though she had previously sustained the allergic actions with high dose of intravenous painkillers but probably those painkillers made her stomach organs vulnerable to deadly dangers. She used the trick to end herself knowing that She couldn't withstand the allergy once again.

So she dragged him to shut him up and end her pain

Yup exactly. Asad did his best to make her understand, slapped her for her stupid plans but she did what she wanted.

So guess she overdose on nuts and sleeping pills and brought an end to her life

The nuts and that drink did. She took medicine to lessen the pain but her organs failed.

So asya morn her death but in the end it brought them closer

Yes.. Asya mourn her death because she had made a place in their lives.. But eventually she died by bringing them closer. Forcing Zoya to end her conditions

So Asad never overstep he took his time

Yes. He had given his word the night if their marriage and asad is a man of his word. He never wanted fulfil his desires by force.

and be his sweet romantic self

Yes.. Though he is extremely romantic.. Which made Zoya amend her conditions from time to time he never left being in his said limits.

Until the first anniversary where he gifted and she thanked and he asked permission and it was granted and to took him and her all the way to a heavenly paradise.

Hmm yes.. He was waiting for the right moment to ask her permission. He wanted to end all doubts in Zoya's mind and prove he is clean and purely loves her. And also it was enough time for Zoya to become comfortable with Asad and adjust him in her life. She accepted him whole heartedly. Breaking all her conditions.. She had loved him all stages of her relationship with him.

Love it

Hmm glad you loved it.. And thanks a ton for a beautiful comment.

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

I am actually really very speechless with these two chapters bro

Loved them to the core

Hmm first and foremost.. Big wala sorry for delay in replying... Actually life is messed and today it was exam. So I decided to delay the replies and do it when I'm free..

So now coming to your comment. Umm.. Thank you so much sis smiley Sista.. You comment never fails to make me smile. So glad you loved it and enjoyed it. Speechless? 😆

Cannot say much about part A

It was heart breaking one. Sorry about that but I had informed way in advance and also about Rania's death thingy when she entered.

as I am still in a big shock reading the update

Hmm I understand. Hugs.

Crying is not my thing, but the update actually did made me cry

Aww extremely sorry Smiley Sista. I didn't meant to.

Rania had to go through so much in life

Yes.. Bad destiny or cruel world... Made her suffer.

And then her soul rests in peace

Yes.

. Her story just describes that sometimes life is just so unfair to many!

Yes exactly.

And then the next part where asya are trying to get over rania's death but sometimes it's so weird to even think that how can someone just not be there anymore😭

It was very painful for Zoya and asad as well. Rania had made a place in their hearts.

Then zoya's conversation with alisha where she gets to know that alisha failed

It was unexpected and shockingly sad. Zoya tried her best to support her but Alisha failed because of not nice preparation. That earthquake thing had not balanced and calmed her mind in the past 3 months. She was mentally disturbed while her exams

Just hope that alisha does not take some drastic step. Hope she gives life as well as herself a second chance!

Yes hope so.. But actually I gave it more and unnecessary focus because I wanted to hide everything else in the last Chapter of this story lol .

And then finally asya take their relationship to the next step and become husband and wife in true sense.

Yes.. Its been while year and in between I forgot to mention Zoya didn't celebrated her bday because of the grief.. She had warned everyone not to celebrate her bday because of Rania. So asad thought it would be best to treat her at anniversary and love can heal anything. So yes they broke all their conditions and all.

Indeed an update full of revelations and emotions

Yes. Because story is winding up slowly.. I dont want to put too much on last Chapter.

I seriously had to compose myself from al the crying before writing the comment but I actually find this as the most heart touching chapter of the story

Hmm extremely sorry for making. You cry. I knew. You will. Cry. So I added so. Many warnings and prior announcements to make. You and others ready for it. Sorry. For. All the tears. And agree it was heart touching update.. A little more than that of Maria's one.

The poems were amazing and a treat to read helping the characters describe themselves in a way only poems do!

Special thank you so much for appreciating my poems as well. Yes sometimes poems speak better.

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter but at the same time really very sad for it's end.

Next chapter Chapter 15 A and B sometime in mid June. And plz don't be too sad. Either I will extend till 20th chapter or will have (Fangurl Reboot or Fangurl Chronicles) a sequel where only light hearted and funny moments of Asya from different stages of their life. It will be like bunch of one shots or two shots in a form of FF. Hope it will rejoice you and everyone sad.

But as it's said that all things have an end.

Especially good things have to end. Lol.. Actually good things are good because they end else they will bore you and stress you.

Would be looking forward to know what happens in the last part and the epilogue

Hehe that's the tip secret. Only the most keen readers can guess what was Zoya's dream and that shall turn reality.

Please try to continue soon bro😛

Exam time sis.. But wait till June mid.

And all the very best for your exams.

Thanks for best wishes.. :) means soo much.

You will surely excel with flying colours 😳

Hehe InshaAllah

Originally posted by: cutie15

Awesome chapter

Thank you so much sis for the comment and appreciation it means a lot. 😳
Raina was really a strong women

Yup she was.
Such woman requires lots of respect and love

Indeed... She was an innocent soul.
Asad was kind enough to support her

Yes.. He was... She acted as his elder sister
But alas the loneliness does finishes a person
Exactly and sadly true.
Asad and zoya finally became one

It was so hot

Yup Zoya accepted him and broke all conditions. Hehe hot. 😆
Finally they are back together against
Yes finally and happily 😳
Next one is the last chapter..??

Hmm not exactly but last Chapter with Chapter number lol we got (Chapter 15 A & B - Epilogue and Extra Shots)
What..? I still can't believe this is gonna end..:(

Aww plz don't be sad.

I'm gonna miss this..:(
Me too.. I'm already sad but due to life probs I'm planning to wind it up.
Hope you'll write another story after this..:)

Probably but no promises.

Once again thank you so much for reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: laks_vish

Awesome...beautifully written

Originally posted by: aleenaansari

Vry nyc update...

Thank you so much sis for the comment and appreciation it means a lot.. 😃

Luvd it...

Glad you loved it 😳
Finally zoya accepted asad fully..

Yup finally.. 😆
Nd also confessed her love...

Yup.. It was the right time for her to do it and she was confident with her man.
Eager to read more...

Hehe next update in June 2nd week. Hopefully.
Do continue soon...

Ohkay.. 😆
Nd all d very bst 4 ur xams..

Thanks for best wishes 😳

Originally posted by: kadia717

Unressed at 43.😃

Originally posted by: kadia717

Res

Unres...

hmm finally me too lol

Helloo tedhe medhe tamater flying mamu motu khitpit buttery hiipppooo...

hello jolly queen cookie pie sista...a

kya halchal hai...!!!! bad.. not well maze me..??? lol yup 😆 Jaldi books close karo... done .. till saturday 😉

Jolly queen ne unres kar diya finally😆...and flying motuu hippo bhi 😳come on...get up and dance: tenev nev nev nev..hmm you dance if I will dance the flooring will crack 🤣

Now coming to the update...hmm 😎

awesome both part...thankooos!

one part was totally emotional and another was romantic...hehe yes... according to storyline..😛

pehle rulate ho and fir hasate ho...kabhi nahi sudhroge aap...😊 hehe kya karein buri aadat hain na!😆

But really rania's story was very sad...yup it was indeed... I was like zoya...Guilty..coz i also cursing her..hehe i told everyone at the beginning of her character that you ppl will be shocked and will change your mind and thinking about her at her end.. .

Asya's broke down on rania's death, yup it was painful well understanding, hmm coz asad knew her story and zoya had just witnessed...yes.. and that rania's poem-amazing...hmm really thankoos..

and o o...asya romance-lovely...No comments..😆

lol.. *cough cough* >> no comments 😆

And now about alisha...plz usse bhi mat mar dena...😆 woh toh next update mein pata chalega.. waise bhi in the end every character's story which is not satisfied will end but on which note it is to .. dekhte hain if alisha will live or not...

Bye bye...I dnt think ab zyada der hai update ki...😆

hmm just 2 small scenes and one medium scene left ... ek bhi poetry add nahi kiya hai abhi tak.. want to write a signature fangurl poem but lets see if i get enough time...

Urs,

J...a

take care,

urs loving bro

fmh 🤗