Arhi Tiny Tales 7: Second chances

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Rotten, my love.. this was an excellent one.. a track that has a great potential of becoming more..more that just this tiny tale..Very few get second chances as you have remarked and those who get it are the real lucky ones. I can feel Arnav's guilt and his love and need to throw away those sad ones and fill time with few beautiful moments..absolutely splendid..

And yes for a change, I would love to get Khushi's POV on few emotional tales like this where Arnav ain't at fault.. maybe Khushi is.. And yeah I would love to read something on Arranged Marriage again..after the first one! A sequel to it? Arnav's feelings on the dish she prepared or how his relation progresses after he telling that he has diabetes..

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Awesome... So true .. Life rarely give second chances ... If any one get they should grab it with both hands as asr did

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Kalhara

@Kalhara

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

I am not at all disappointed dear.. I am so happy that you not only penned down it but also narrated amazingly... Thank you sooo much.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

a very beautiful one shot 👏

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

This is perfect and I cannot believe that you used to score less in your English essays. You write absolute beautifully that makes me want to read more. And this one is an absolute beauty - This is the way I wanted IPK to go on after the kidnapping track. Khushi losing her memory and Arnav feeling guilt for the way he treated Khushi. Absolute beautiful read. Perfect

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

This one was lighter than other coz this one had hope. Hope for a better future. Hope to rebuild, relive and correct the past. That's the best use of the second chance that life has offered, and I'm glad that ASR is going to make the best of it.

About your note, I love happy ending, and even hough I accept you writing as your experiments and a taste to reality where happy endings not always happens, isn't indulging in arshi world our own imagination and I turn we can at least have happy endings in our imagination. Right?

Likewise these are your imagination, your creations rotten and your liberty as how you see and write them.😊

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awroneema

@awroneema

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

aweee...a true raizada ...mauke pe chaukaa... 😉

i luvd this one...😊

but isnt it ramanchi to hide the truth..wat if payal ne bata diya toh...! asr bedroom se nikal dia jaoge!😆

PS... u scored poor in english writing? Poor...!! u mean POOORRR!!... CHaal jhooti...sry...

u must tag ur stories to ur teacher...nd go on total filmy...iss talent k kimat tum kya jano teacher babu!!😳

PPS...u can write whatever the brillent mind of urs leads u on u...happy or no happy...but the thing is u r a damn good writer..nd give us DDLJ typ stories...matlab...jo saalon tak k liye dimag mai baith jati hai..nd u r wishing to keep the impact for few moments!... thus the tragedy ends pop up on my mind in the ungodly hours nd AD ka satya nash ho jata hai!!... i swear...CHANGE is such an xample.. though i LOVE that story..i cant stop crying over it till now whn ever it decide to pop up on my mind!! itna achha likhna jaroori hai kya! 😉

PPPS. dishkiaw...dishkiaw...WMB kaha hai !!!!😡😡😡

Edited by awroneema - 9 years ago