NeiRa story- His first friend :)[COMPLETED] - Page 9

Santosh

@Santosh99

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Posted: 8 years ago

What do I say.
This. was. beautiful.
I'm speechless to be completely honest with you.
The story was so simple.
But the best part. The emotions - so
beautifully expressed.
Really beautifully penned down!!!!
Now update soon!!! 😆

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-harini-

@-harini-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Santosh99
What do I say.
This. was. beautiful.
I'm speechless to be completely honest with you.
The story was so simple.
But the best part. The emotions - so
beautifully expressed.
Really beautifully penned down!!!!
Now update soon!!! 😆

Santosh!! That was such a beautiful comment 😲 Thank you so much 🥳 Updating the last part now :)

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-harini-

@-harini-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

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Sapna

@kenika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

This is beautiful... 😳 finally ragini and nachiket confess their love...
you are a beautiful writer 👏 👏 and thank you thank you thank you thank you so much for pm 😊 😊 Edited by kenika - 8 years ago

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loveleen3

@loveleen3

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Harini, sweetie, this was adorable, beautiful, innocent and lovely! :D
Your writing is fantabulous. Brilliant!
I have always liked the 'realizing you're in love' part the most in any love story but not every writer gives it much importance. How you write Ragini's POV when she realized, made me all giddy. <3 I've enjoyed reading this story so much! Thank you so much for writing! :D

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-harini-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: kenika
This is beautiful... 😳 finally ragini and nachiket confess their love...
you are a beautiful writer 👏 👏 and thank you thank you thank you thank you so much for pm 😊 😊

Kenika 🤗 Thankyou very much for your kind words 😳 They mean a lot to me. I am very happy that you liked this story :) And please don't mention it,no problem-Pm's I mean :)

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-harini-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: loveleen3
Harini, sweetie, this was adorable, beautiful, innocent and lovely! :D
Your writing is fantabulous. Brilliant!
I have always liked the 'realizing you're in love' part the most in any love story but not every writer gives it much importance. How you write Ragini's POV when she realized, made me all giddy. <3 I've enjoyed reading this story so much! Thank you so much for writing! :D

Yay Loveleen is here!🥳

Oh my! It feels amazing to read such beautiful words from you!! 😳 Thankyou very much from the bottom of my heart 🤗 I am super duper happy that you found this good!! 😃 and I am so glad I found such wonderful people here :)

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Santosh

@Santosh99

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Beyond beautiful..
I slowed down so many times when I was reading it.. because I just did not want it to end..this was so lovely, warm.. comforting almost.. aaah the comfort of true love...
Thanks For writing this story 😃

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imagine43

@imagine43

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

This was indeed a beautiful story of friendship and love, Each given equal importance and described with equal sweetness. I was dying for them to fall in love, and when they did, it was nothing less than a dream.

Your writing is full of innocence, freshness and surprises. It doesnt let the mind wander, while reading and keeps the reader glued to the mood.

Thanks Harini for this warm piece.

Lastly.. Kiss kyun nahi karvaya yaar?

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