NeiRa story- His first friend :)[COMPLETED] - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Santosh99

Harini! ðŸ˜ƒ

          I am so sorry for being late with my comments 😲 i just         re-read this and seriously and it feels even better than the             first time! I loved the way they celebrated the birthday of                                               'N'.😉

          The flow of this story is just perfect and the way you             describe each emotion and feeling makes it so real. Thanks                                 for this lovely!😊


Thanks a lot for this amazing comment Santosh :) Re-read ðŸ˜² thankyou :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
Wow you update i thought you forget this 
Awsome update  harini 

I loved all part but my most fev part was 

He just looked at her Activa and then her.
"You are scared for your life?",she asked,chuckling.."I have been driving for four years now, you can trust me"

"I do but.."

"Are you shy? Omg are you blushing?"

"Fine stop pulling my legs now"

Waitting for next part update soon 
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Thanks Harini for the update. It's so sweet
Loved reading the part where N is afraid of sitting on the back of the scooty.😆

Pl update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb updates! This story is so different and interesting.

What beautiful writing ! Each and every incident was very well described.

Update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
This was awesome, perfect continuation of the story. The Marine drive was fun, warm and personal. I have a hard time believing they are still just friends.. There is romance written all over, in every little incident, but N & R are simply being idiots. (Sorry if I am being impatient)
Finally, the best part I think was exams being over and N inviting the gang to his place.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: AsEnAth

Wow you update i thought you forget this 

Awsome update  harini 

I loved all part but my most fev part was 

He just looked at her Activa and then her.
"You are scared for your life?",she asked,chuckling.."I have been driving for four years now, you can trust me"

"I do but.."

"Are you shy? Omg are you blushing?"

"Fine stop pulling my legs now"

Waitting for next part update soon 


Haha Thankyou so much. Happy you liked that part of the update :) will update soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Harini for the update. It's so sweet

Loved reading the part where N is afraid of sitting on the back of the scooty.😆

Pl update soon.


Thankyou so much for reading :) haha I liked writing that too. Was able to imagine N well there ðŸ˜† will update soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Santosh99

Superb updates! This story is so different and interesting.

What beautiful writing ! Each and every incident was very well described.

Update soon...


Thankyou Santosh. Your comments are always nice and never fail to motivate me :) Thanks for reading :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: imagine43

This was awesome, perfect continuation of the story. The Marine drive was fun, warm and personal. I have a hard time believing they are still just friends.. There is romance written all over, in every little incident, but N & R are simply being idiots. (Sorry if I am being impatient)

Finally, the best part I think was exams being over and N inviting the gang to his place.


I want them to have little moments for themselves :) They will fall in love dont worry ðŸ˜ƒ There will mostly be only one or two more parts to this story so that will happen soon :)