Arhi TS: What the....... Just Imagine !! Part 2 on page 17, note pg 26

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bellacoolio

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

🤣

What just happened here! What an unique, twisted concept! Couldn't stop laughing at all!!
And the best part was the Vadhu dakshina!
Loved it!!!!

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IPK007

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Congratulation on a stellar debut, Kavi🤗 May your excellent pen never run out of ink!

What a delightful concept! Read it with a big grin on my face. You have a flair for comedy it seems and the gender role reversal you portray is hilarious! Would have enjoyed it even more had Arnav been the one to bear the pains of pregnancy and labor...haha...JK.

Besides the entertainment quotient, I could discern a vein of satire on society, gender roles and stereotypes. Nicely done :)

Loved reading it, dear, and looking forward to more!

Happy writing 😊

Love,

Jenny.

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MDTharun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

I knew , you had that writer spark in you . Looks like return of our show has boosted your confidence .Well congratulations , you have become an author Kavi akka 😃

''What the '' , this is just the apt title for this TS

Arnav kumar Gupta 😆 , the name itself is hilarious .Arnav has become KKG & Khushi has donned ASR's avatar . If men and women exchange their roles in reality it becomes quite funny . Men slogging in the kitchen and women working to earn bread for the family (idea itna bura nahin hain )

Nice take , loving it

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Vanhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Shit, I'm late... 😡

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As Mami says, latewa res and latewa unress, hello hi bye bye!! Maaf kijiye Jiji Ji.

But let me make it up to you with a bone crashing hug for the smooth transition from being the Best Reader to Fantastic Writer

I knew the basic idea of what it is going to be. And I was expecting some ROLFing when you finally decided to share this awesome piece but still, it stumped me at the way you've crafted this masterpiece, incorporating every emotion a girl of age usually undergoes. Not to mention the tension filled air that surround's a girl's family while awaiting for "That" call from the guy's family.

So, let me start with the basics...

Poor Arnav Kumar Gupta and poor his half-burnt Jalebi's. Akka, you didn't mention the state of these otherwise delicious sweets and by that, I take it as Arnav is as good at making as Khushi used to be??? But still, you being a writer now calls for piles of these and I call all your readers to join the party 😆 😆 😆

But on a serious note, how serious the situation is that you've covered beneath these hilarious moments. Does any man out there understands our plight? Leaving our whole family to live with a stranger and his, so much that changing a bride's name has been an age old tradition, altering our very own identity for someone whom we don't even know.

I loved the part where they both felt attracted. Despite everything, in any situation Khushi and Arnav always end up drawn to each other, doesn't they? But this made me think of the situation of the family when they saw Khushi in the Kitchen in order to make it up to the upset Arnav

Jokes apart, now, as they are seriously worried about the "dowry", all I can say is, don't worry Arnav Beta. Khushi is not like other "women" out there and your wife Ji will say no to that.

In the meanwhile, let your family pamper you as much as they could while you're still a "Kumar"

Every Momma's proud moment... 😆 😆 😆

Finally, the day is still young and Kavi Akka, I'm counting on you to read some Bromance in the night while Arnav shares his worries with Aakash...

(Image credits goes to Google and uploaders)

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DDC1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

LOL, LOL, LOL..ITS A HOOT. I wish this was the reality for all the pigs out there! You didn't miss anything including making jalebis...

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Uthra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Arnav Kumar Gupta 🤣

Vadhu dakshina 🤣

Where were you all these years hiding this excellent talent.

Res

Lol

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cheesemad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Edited my comment on page 2:)

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amaypranay

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Awesome and hilarious.. Kavi 👏 👏 👏

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Archna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Kavi what the! What was that I just read😆. All the time I was laughing and my mind keep on thinking, what if this happen in this world? And I laugh some more.

When I start read I find arnav making jalebies, I thought I must have make some mistake in reading or understanding but god this was true 😆. Arnav indeed making jalebies like Khushi and he is going to his sasural after marrying Khushi 😃. And his name make me roll over. Arnav Kumar Gupta, ultimate🤣.

You really got interesting idea of writing first time. 👏

Poor Akash has to work in clinic and then work in home, still his in laws are not happy😆.

Let's see what happen next.

Thanks informing me about your story.

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Aiyooo...yeh kab hua😲 our IF Best reader turned into a writer...par yeh hua bahut hi acchhaa hai.😛 I always read your comments in the various stories...and now here I am reading a story by you.

I so wanted to have this custom when I was getting married...wanted my husband to become a ghar jawai(punjabi hun na isi liye Jawai hai)...not wanted to change my last name too...hamare dil ki pukar sun li tumne.

Coming to the update...seriously hilarious!!!

With his name Arnav Kumar Gupta I can't stop laughing dear...Just imagine...he is making tons of Jelabi's😆.

Our Indian society needs to change drastically.

What is this Vadhu dakshina🤣

My heartiest congrats to you on this wonderful delightful hilarious and awesome concept and for your first story.

Waiting for the next chapter.