ArShi OS: Night of Shadows, City of Joy

Srijanee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

You call this random? This was such an awesome OS... The beginning of a friendship, secrets... getting to know a stranger... Just waow... Prams yaar seriously u shud write more... Please... REQUAASHHTTT😃

P.S. We are meeting this December, that's it... --_--

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Srij😳

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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

You call this random? This was such an awesome OS... The beginning of a friendship, secrets... getting to know a stranger... Just waow... Prams yaar seriously u shud write more... Please... REQUAASHHTTT😃

P.S. We are meeting this December, that's it... --_--

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Srij😳

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

That's an awesome one dear...very unusual one too.

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luvbug

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

hey mav...this is a wonderful piece... very beautifully written...absolutely loved this arnav 😃...

though they have their own worries to sort out...this was just perfect...

wish u would continue writing 😊

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RainyDays

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

It was so heartfelt and bittersweet (much sweeter than bitter).

Its often digressed, the impact on the children due to the changing factors in their parents life.Keeping it inside is the most heavy weights one can carry around. Here, a companion to each other, Khushi and Arnav, so quietly, in the dark of the nights, attempt removing some traces of darkness from their lives; bringing some brightness into each other's lives.

Their conversations were amusing and chucklesome to read!

Certain parts just hit the target - "I've made my sacrifice. Its your turn now."

Its always a pleasure to read your stories,whatever be the size. The surroundings are very descriptive and recognisable.

Thankyou for sharing the randomest work and letting us,readers, enjoy the writings 😊

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1chilly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

I don't think this is in any way fair .

You cannot possibly stop here.

I WANT MORE.

Such a lovely story.

I fell in love with the characters.

The simplicity of the characterisation.

A sad Khushi and a happier Arnav.

And the music in the background.

Loved the play of words.

And Khushi smiled in the end.

Wish you'd write more.

And make your readers smile!

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Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

You paint such vivid images with your words. Love how subtly you show Khushi's bond with Payal, her go to person and her shield. And the slowly burgeoning awareness for Arnav. Someone to share the solitary songs playing in her head.

A pleasure to have read this OS. A joy for the senses :)

Thank you Charu for telling me about it <3

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