Originally posted by: anasuya123Hai hai hai 😳
It's just awesome yaar ...too good...I am totally in KaSum land ...I can actually visualize it and had a smile throughout ...❤️ Love you so much for writing this ...I am missing them like hell...you made my day dear ..🤗"Don't worry miss Chakravarti, I already locked the door of this green room before entering.' He chuckled. Sumona muttered "I always knew u were a creep." These lines are just fab ⭐️😳omgDialogues ,passion ,romance uff ..I think I am going to read it so many more times 😳
Originally posted by: KappumyfavFirst of all WELCOME BACK !!!! Missed you and your writing sooo much.
and the one shot ! Awww. .. .. . I loved those lines kapil said being jealous boyfriend and this is the only os where kapil himself revealed how bad it feels to see her with someone else and that sudden burst out. . . Kehne ka matlab yeh hai ke loved your new and different OS ! Not just kapil but also about sumona how she has to keep that plastic smile but she hated all that. Dialogues were as usual awesome = D
I too noticed when people ask him to give his wife or ask about her and then the look he gives is just like one of those possesive boyfriends Just love this cute jodi : )
And that kiss. . . .uff ! 😳 that was just tooo hot !!! Blushed badly 😳
100 % sure that I am gonna read the os again and again and never get bored : )
All and All loved this OS : )
Thank you sooo much for this OS : *
Lots of love !
Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18Finally I can give u my feedback..
Omgeee what do I tell u??? Everytime I read any of ur stories I am just totally awed...bt with this u actually made me realise tht I was holding my breath and my heart was pindering so loudly tht I myslef for scared when I had finished reading ur story again. ..If I had to say this was the best line or my fav I actually couldn't List one... there were sooo many abosuletly beautiful dialoges... I TOTALLY LOVED EVERY OF THEIR SENTENCE AND SURELY READ THEM ABOUT 10 TIMES just to let the effect sink in and imaging it and then move on..I so loved this Kapil tht he himself burst and wooow how he bursts. ..and thnx for portraying Sumona like tht...it was different and I loved it.And hayyyeee tht kiss... I am blushing so hard... the way it came...wooow... u doubled the Spice at the Peak and I just thought wht an amazing, talented and creative girl u r to write like tht...Seriously thank u for this!
Originally posted by: aashupwowww... one more beautiful os by you 😊 everything was just perfect situation, use of words, and obviously our kasum and sone pe suhaga our story writer 😉
keep writing and keep postingalways waiting to read your work😃
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