OS ISHRA: CHOTI SI DUNIYA - Page 4

Originally posted by: sksharmin

lovely...

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Totally awesome os rido.
Treat toh sweet hai ridoo.
i enjoyed the whole buffet.
The way ruhi take test to both raman and abhi ,the way raman give all correct answers.it means alot...ruman are the father and daughter duo..

keep writing and entertain us..

Originally posted by: -RKB-

Bahut Hi Khubsurat Os Its Mindblowing..this One Is Best Jo Bhi Story Aapki Padhi Unme Se
Keep Writing Like This
Raman Ruhi Ki Bonding Bahut Hi Khubsurati Se Likha..

Originally posted by: ruhi_ishra

Thank u dear
You made my day

Yesterday i quit yhm
and today i got this

cvs destroyed it

anyways my yhm is on this forum

hell with ekta and her shagun


coming to update
superb
mindblowing
super romantic

keep writing such OS more
loved whole concept

Originally posted by: ishra123

Beautiful update.
Beautifully written.
Love Ruman.
Love it.
Thanks for the beautiful update
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Amazing update

raman accepted ruhi as her daughter 

loved it 

Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN

I wasn't expecting such an awsum treat

So as per us command I am bound to write a looong comment over it

Soo abhi leaving a preg ishu

After 7 yrs VN ruhi was six

N after ptm asking of her father

N portray a man hu wasn't abhi

As ruhi asked but was so like raman

Finally RU n raman met VN raman safe her from falling

N kissed her as ishu said

Little girl consider him as her father.n raman being kind hearted did wat he shud du till now I really like da story

But VN ruhi fainted n I get to know ruhi has a hole inher heart nw DAT was sad

Raman spend sum time vd her n a short span of time made a large space in rooh heart n ishu 2

Finally raman had to go back but cudnt

N purpose ishu

N finally dy both confess dre luv n got married

Yayyy luv it

Ishraru routine a cute one as usual lazy raman not want to get out of bed n instead pull ishu over him cute

Finally ishraru went fr shopping

N abhi followed

Wants to take ruhi back

But da way ruhi asked questions

N Raman answered all correctly

Abhi was defeated yippee hurray

Tight slap by a little girl

But raman had to listen DAT ruhi isn't his daughter but ruhi is only his n DAT ruhi proved only luv raman RU bond a lot

Finally ishu delivered a baby boy 

N dre family complete 

Dre choti si duniya

Such a perfect one luv it

Beautifully written

Awsum 

Can't fish out a perfect word fr it

Soo luv u loads keep writing

Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Lovely one rida
Its so beautiful
Ishru bond is good
Ruman r so adorable
Abhi is disgusting as ever
Lovely

Originally posted by: sulochana90

aww beautiful 

loved it

thanx a lot

i really wish u continued