OS ISHRA: CHOTI SI DUNIYA - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
super update!!!
loved the way the story as been written!!!

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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

thanks dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sush_rddt

super update!!!

loved the way the story as been written!!!



thanks dear😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
wow its awsum...thanx for this os
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Bahut Hi Khubsurat Os Its Mindblowing..this One Is Best Jo Bhi Story Aapki Padhi Unme Se
Keep Writing Like This
Raman Ruhi Ki Bonding Bahut Hi Khubsurati Se Likha..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Beautiful update.
Beautifully written.
Love Ruman.
Love it.
Thanks for the beautiful update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
aww beautiful 
loved it
thanx a lot
i really wish u continued
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Thank u dear
You made my day

Yesterday i quit yhm
and today i got this

cvs destroyed it

anyways my yhm is on this forum

hell with ekta and her shagun


coming to update
superb
mindblowing
super romantic

keep writing such OS more
loved whole concept

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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Totally awesome os rido.
Treat toh sweet hai ridoo.
i enjoyed the whole buffet.
The way ruhi take test to both raman and abhi ,the way raman give all correct answers.it means alot...ruman are the father and daughter duo..

keep writing and entertain us..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
I wasn't expecting such an awsum treat
So as per us command I am bound to write a looong comment over it
Soo abhi leaving a preg ishu
After 7 yrs VN ruhi was six
N after ptm asking of her father
N portray a man hu wasn't abhi
As ruhi asked but was so like raman
Finally RU n raman met VN raman safe her from falling
N kissed her as ishu said
Little girl consider him as her father.n raman being kind hearted did wat he shud du till now I really like da story
But VN ruhi fainted n I get to know ruhi has a hole inher heart nw DAT was sad
Raman spend sum time vd her n a short span of time made a large space in rooh heart n ishu 2
Finally raman had to go back but cudnt
N purpose ishu
N finally dy both confess dre luv n got married
Yayyy luv it
Ishraru routine a cute one as usual lazy raman not want to get out of bed n instead pull ishu over him cute
Finally ishraru went fr shopping
N abhi followed
Wants to take ruhi back
But da way ruhi asked questions
N Raman answered all correctly
Abhi was defeated yippee hurray
Tight slap by a little girl
But raman had to listen DAT ruhi isn't his daughter but ruhi is only his n DAT ruhi proved only luv raman RU bond a lot
Finally ishu delivered a baby boy 
N dre family complete 
Dre choti si duniya
Such a perfect one luv it
Beautifully written
Awsum 
Can't fish out a perfect word fr it
Soo luv u loads keep writing