3poems on the kheer scene,Dhani's avatar,soap bubble scene.

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Hi guys ,I am back with my poems this time,I have attempted three poems this time,hope u guys like it.
My very first poem is on the scene were Dhani gives kheer to Viplav,I loved that kheer so much 😳😆 and loved the way he consumed the kheer ,hence I have thought to expand my poetic ideas on that particular scene.
POEM 1# THE DELICIOUS MEDICINE APPLICABLE FOR LOVE DISEASE.
Was that milk which was added to it,
No ,it was snow melted by God poured from heaven was mixed in it,
I can't ever believe if it comprises of Kaju or pista,
But it is a cuisine of her purity's holy manifesta,
Is she do it by adding sugar ,
Or just crushed loads of honey and creams to prepare a exotic variety of sugar,
That even the tasteless buds in my mouth ever discovered ,
Would ever fail to praise her for her awesome prepartion,
The kheer is the one which makes me hard to patch up her destination,
It is a delicious medicine made by the angelic hands,
And when it reaches my mouth my voice box assumes as if it has been pulled up by beautiful hands,
It gives pleasure to my glottal,
As it is a made by love who is my life's immortal,
It smoothens my voice,
It adds musical notes through it's splendid power to my voice,
It adds more flavour to the taste buds on my tongue,
Which I will ever like to have it as a possession in my tongue,
It is a medicine,a lovely medicine,
A medicine which itself stands as an oxymoron to medicine,
A delicious one which is an apt one,
For providing me a relief to a disease typed one,
No this medicine provides the soothing pleasure to my lovely disease named as love,
Can this kheer extend my love,
Ya it has that magic quality,
Because it's origin is from the hands of the pure girl of pleasant fertility,
A extension to a disease if a medicine can ever provide in this world,
Then it is the delicious kheer made out by her own hands which stands as a muse to all those type of medicines yet to originate in this world.

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POEM 2# THE FEMINIST VOLCANO THAT ERUPTED WITH FIRE.
The Sun that rises in the East,
By now was stuck in a chaos and fails to rise in the East,
The sweet chirping of the cuckoos just haulted for few seconds,
They were forsaken by something which gave them complete distraction for few seconds,
The clouds that moves in the sky just spread their path,
Because a totally different expierence,they have faced in their path,
They started pouring drops of life giving water,
Which was the exaggeration of water being suspended into holy water,
Because of the blow that came out of her words,
The ultimate outcome of her words,made even the words of the world wordless,
She was in a turmoil,until she heard a few magical words,
Which made her step on to the land of determination,it was the words,
Of Viplav tripathi,who can even make stones to move by his speech,
Can' t he make his lovely one embedded with the hope of faith by his motivational speech,
Her strength was the sublimity of holy god's inspiration,
Which made her blow out words to fly the evil and stand as an inspiration,
She is a lioness,a sherni of Banaras,
Who made the holy temple even more filled with sanity and re named the city as Sanity filled holy ,boldness compiled Banaras,
Her actions were bold,
Her words were bold,
Her eyes emitted hot intense fire,
The Pandit was burning to fumes in that fire,
Dhani a lady,a Vidhwa,who was like a soldier,
Her shield was her self confidence that made her the perfect soldier,
Her in born talent of perfect boldness was a brewity,
Until he the master of emotions ,instigated power into the short version of Viplavphobia /Rakshasphobia of boldness personified brewity,
She was volcano,who erupted for a brave reason,
That caught attentions,grabbed our interest as it had a powerful questionare reason,
The land welcomes it's Sherni ,Dhani,
Who made the holy temple ,the house of God ,extremely divine by her bold avatar and got the name Banaras ki Dhani,
She made complete privilege to the safedians of their gang,
Who are supported by Viplav who is now the teamleader of the gang,
Her prejudice made us fear not,
Made us feel unhappy no not,
But made every living being happy,
Her performance's needs an applause ,as it was the extreme avatar that made each and every one happy,
Which was fullfilled by the claps of our Vakil,Viplav tripathi,
Dhani u girl u r so bold and one day u will overtake Viplav Tripathi,
That is after u join in his life as Mrs.Viplav Tripathi.
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POEM 3 #THE BUBBLES OF EXTREME DELIGHT.
WOW!! just look at the bubbles in their faces,
These are the instant outcome of their joyful faces,
They both look pretty with this dressing,
A dressing made of soap,which acts a cleanliness dressing,
Essential for removing all the past dirty things from their lives,
And provides them a clean and a pure life which is on the way to fill love to their lives,
These two gorgeous souls,
Are heavenly souls,
Who are going to get merged under one,
That is through the relationship of love which is a holy safed one,
These bubbles stands as a testimony for the care they have for each other,
That too a complete unrealized love in one of the other,
How it is so may be the question of u folks,
But Viplav tripathi's eyes will save my words from u folks,
It can sense those magical effects of mesmerization,
Only when he meets the eyes of the safed beauty who is upto the skills of mesmerization,
Viplav's nerves feels her soo much,
Which made him to play with foams that gives soothing ice cool pleasure soo much,
They were completely lost in themselves,
Playing only within themselves,
And forgetting the world that stands as a barrier,
I f they develop feelings for each other harder,
Can life ever create a barrier for these to people,
Whose hearts are like the hearts of two innocent children whom the world rejoices as the sweetest people,
Their love is going to be the true love,
A powerful love,a holy love,
A romantic expressions personified love,
When developed in it's final stage,
And with the soap bubbles that proves their friendly stage,
The heavenly God will claim their love as the final stage of all the love stages,
Which will stand as a stage that will be ever explored by scientists and astronomers,
As it is a sublimity of pure personified and dignified lovers.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg di usually your poems leaves me speechless but this time even the title you gave was splendid .. 👏👏
POEM 1# THE DELICIOUS MEDICINE APPLICABLE FOR LOVE DISEASE.

Just loved these lines di 😳😳
Which I will ever like to have it as a possession in my tongue,
It is a medicine,a lovely medicine,
A medicine which itself stands as an oxymoron to medicine,


POEM 2# THE FEMINIST VOLCANO THAT ERUPTED WITH FIRE.

This title was the best of all..Omg thus holds such a power di 👏😳
Her in born talent of perfect boldness was a brewity,
Until he the master of emotions ,instigated power into the short version of Viplavphobia /Rakshasphobia of boldness personified brewity,



POEM 3 #THE BUBBLES OF EXTREME DELIGHT.

This was a sweet tittle 🤗

These bubbles stands as a testimony for the care they have for each other,
That too a complete unrealized love in one of the other,

Of all a awestruck : fantastic job di 🤗
Do write more di 🤗
Edited by Guruvishva - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for writing these lovely poems Jenny.
I am surprised that that kheer scene which took only a minute made you write 3 poems. Only ppl with romantic eyes and souls could feel it the way you did. And the way I felt it after reading your heavenly words.🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: awida

Thanks for writing these lovely poems Jenny.

I am surprised that that kheer scene which took only a minute made you write 3 poems. Only ppl with romantic eyes and souls could feel it the way you did. And the way I felt it after reading your heavenly words.🤗

Ohh thank u soo much Awida di 😳😳 u made me soo glad by ur comments,thanks a lot di😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Poem 1
What a wonderful description of kheer. I want to eat kheer now right now but I cant because I'm fasting. Not fair jenni.
Poem2
I loved how you described the effect of dhani's outburst on nature. Not only viplav but even nature was awestruck. And I agree viplav's words whether in a speech or otherwise can never be ineffective they touch your heart. So dhani bani sherni
Poem 3
What a cute one. Seemed like two innocent kids were playing with the bubbles. Of course their friendship is pure and surely one day it will change into divine love.
Amazing work jenni enjoyed all the three poems.
Now next that hand holding scene?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Jenny⭐️...these poems are just mind blowing..you never fail to amaze me🤗...whole time reading your poem just make me wonder " WHAT IF SOAP, KHEER REALLY HAVE FEELINGS😳" ...
"Was that milk which was added to it,
No ,it was snow melted by God poured from heaven was mixed in it,
I can't ever believe if it comprises of Kaju or pista,
But it is a cuisine of her purity's holy manifesta,
Is she do it by adding sugar ,
Or just crushed loads of honey and creams to prepare a exotic variety of sugar,
That even the tasteless buds in my mouth ever discovered ,..."

this is just
" Her performance's needs a applause ,as it was the extreme avatar that made each and every one happy,
Which was fullfilled by the claps of our Vakil,Viplav tripathi,
Dhani u girl u r so bold and one day u will overtake Viplav Tripathi,
That is after u join in his life as Mrs.Viplav Tripathi..."
these lines, really a awesome avatar of dhani👏👏 as for bold lines "☺️"

and no words to describe beauty of soap bubbles scene and the way you put this in poem❤️❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Omg di usually your poems leaves me speechless but this time even the title you gave was splendid .. 👏👏

POEM 1# THE DELICIOUS MEDICINE APPLICABLE FOR LOVE DISEASE.

Just loved these lines di 😳😳
Which I will ever like to have it as a possession in my tongue,
It is a medicine,a lovely medicine,
A medicine which itself stands as an oxymoron to medicine,


POEM 2# THE FEMINIST VOLCANO THAT ERUPTED WITH FIRE.

This title was the best of all..Omg thus holds such a power di 👏😳
Her in born talent of perfect boldness was a brewity,
Until he the master of emotions ,instigated power into the short version of Viplavphobia /Rakshasphobia of boldness personified brewity,



POEM 3 #THE BUBBLES OF EXTREME DELIGHT.

This was a sweet tittle 🤗

These bubbles stands as a testimony for the care they have for each other,
That too a complete unrealized love in one of the other,

Of all a awestruck : fantastic job di 🤗
Do write more di 🤗

Sweety ur comments are always as sweet asusual ,I really feel so happy after having ur comments,luv u load dr🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow Jenny, your poems are simply beautiful. My personal fav is the first poem on the kheer scene, you've described Viplav's emotions so well in your poetic verses! You're getting better and better! Great job, keep writing👏
Edited by --SudhaS-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesom yaar. So good.👏
Each and every line is so nice.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..! Jenny 👍🏼
All these poems are so meant for ViDha..! Loved all 3 but bubble part was simply terrific ..! ❤️

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