ISHRA TS: tumhare bina hum bhala kiya jiyegay epilogue: pg30 oct/12 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ruhi_ishra

Wow
wow
From where you get such ideas
Interesting
Looking forward to raman reverse psychology trick
superb dear


thanks dear
ideas?? thanks to all of your motivation dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: mayraa

Fantastic start Rida...

First meeting me hi Raman ishu pe fida😳
They are married and expecting a child...
But still she is arrogant to him
Like Raman's positivity...


thanks dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Suprb
im loving this arrogent ishu and sweet raman..
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Hey, that was so so so so so nice
Mazaa aa gaya
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
its awesome dear continue soon. And thnks for this update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
This is really interesting..
Awesome Update
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Tumhare Bina Hum Bhala Kiya Jiyegay

Part 2

Raman takes ishita to ice cream parlour...

Raman: so which flavor of ice cream you want???

Ishita: don't you know??

Raman: I know... Chocolate flavor... but I have asked this question from my baby... and smiles...

Ishita: he does not want ice cream... I wanted to eat..

Raman: madam my baby wanted to eat ice cream you don't eat icecream at night...

Ishita made a sad face... says: tum baby kay liye muje yahan laye ho

Raman: haan tumhare liye thori... and controls his laugh...

Ishita thinks: liar... kehta hai I love you ishi... but he only love his baby...

Raman: tell na which flavor???

Ishita: nothing... I want to go to home...

Raman: excuse me madam... yahan baby ko ice cream khani hai so wait... till I bring ice cream... Ishita make faces...

After some time raman comes with a tray of ice cream...

Ishita: itne sare flavors???

Raman: haan baby kay liye... Pata nahe usy konsa flavor acha lagy... eat na and tell me...

Ishita glares at raman... raman make her eat the ice cream with his own hands...

After enjoying the ice cream, both heads to home...

ISHRA ROOM:

Ishita was waiting for raman as regularly raman makes ishtia sleep while patting her head... but raman was not coming to room... ishita was feeling that raman is ignoring her...

She goes to study room and finds raman reading...

Ishita: I want to sleep...

Raman: go to room...

Ishita: you also come...

Raman: I am reading na...

Ishita: baby is not letting me sleep...

Raman gets up and holds ishita hand and goes to room make her lay on bed and start caressing her tummy...

Ishita holds his hand and places them on her head...

Raman: what??

Ishita: you always pats my head so I can sleep

Raman: I am making my baby sleep... You said na he is not letting you sleep...

Ishita: you only care for baby...

Raman: I care for you both...

Ishita: you only love baby...

Raman: yes I love my baby so much and thinks: my two baby one you ishi and other my lovely child...

Ishita glares at raman and put her head on raman lap and again places his hand on her head and says: make me sleep...

Raman chuckles and pats her head... She difted to sleep in no time... While raman lovingly sees her... places a kiss on her forehead...

Raman: kitna gussa karti hai baby tumhari mumma... and places kiss on her nose...

Time was passing, ishita enters in her eight month... raman was ignoring ishita but yet always there for care... ishita was sensing the change in raman... her behavior was also changing soft towards raman

MORNING:

Raman gets busy in getting ready for office... ishita was waiting for him at breakfast table...

Raman was leaving for office without breakfast...

Ishita: raman...

Raman: haan...

Ishita: atleast eat breakfast...

Raman: I am in hurry...

Ishita gets up take a sandwich and wraps it with tissue paper and hands it over to raman...

Ishita: eat it... While driver driving...

Raman smiles...

Ishita: bye...

Raman goes on his knees and kisses tummy and says: bye baby... take care... sorry papa will be late... So sleep and eat at time...

Ishtia frowns as raman only wishes bye to baby not to her... when raman gets up ishita hugs him and says: bye take care...

Raman: bye... Take care... and leaves thinking: see ishi you are changing you are becoming my ishi... not that ishita... my showering of love was not changing you but my distance is changing you... I am waiting when you say those three magical words to me...

Ishita: whats happening to me??? Why I am acting liking this ???

EVENING:

Ishita was waiting for raman to come... door bell rings.. she goes to open the door... find her amma at door...

Ishita: amma... her face fell as she was expecting raman to come..

Amma: haan ishu mien... wo raman kuch dinnon kay liye out of city gaya hai na to us ne muje kaha kay mien yahan ajaon... Tumhare pass...

Ishita: raman out of city gaye hain???

Amma thinks: gaye hain... To raman theek keh raha tha ishu is changing... warna itni respect to kabhi raman ko nahe mili... Bus hamara plan theek say poora hojaye...

Ishita: amma...

Amma: haan

Ishita: muje to raman ne nahe bataya...

Amma: wo busy tha... bhool gaya hoga...

Ishita: busy thy?? Apko phone kar liya apni biwi ko nahe kar sakty thy????

Amma control her laughs thinks: acha to janab biwi ban gayi hain...

Amma: andar nahe bulaogi

Ishita: aona amma

Amma: kaisi ho???

Ishita: fit and fine...

Both goes to raman room and sits on bed...

Amma: ishita I wanted to talk with you...

Ishita: bolo na amma

Amma: kiya socha hai ishita... Your pregnancy has left only two months... phr kiya karogi

Ishita was silent...

Amma: bolo... raman ko aur apne bachy k choor dogi???

Ishita gets up and turns her face other side...

Amma: okay I understand you does not love raman but does not even you love this child????

Ishita has teary eyes...

Amma: ishu... Dekho tumhari life mien agar kisi ne tumhain dhoka diya it does not mean kay raman bhi un jaisa hoga...

Ishita: all men are same amma...

Amma: no ishu... raman is different... He is responsible caring loving infact he is best... He truly loves you...

Ishita: appa aur subbu bhi yehi kehty thy

Amma: tum raman ko apne appa aur subbu jaise *** say mat compare karo... raman heera hai

Ishita: agar raman bhi un jaise hoye to

Amma: tum negative side kiyon dekh rahi ho... Aisa nahe hai... tumhare appa ne agar muje chora to wo unka faisala tha... Theek hai unhain laga kay wo mujse pyaar nahe karty... Akhir tum bhi to uhi ki tarhaan kar rahi ho

Ishita shockingly sees amma

Amma: aur nahe to kiya ishu?? Tumhare appa ne bhi muje aur tumhain chor diya pyaar kay liye jo unhain kabhi nahe mila tum bhi to raman aur iss bachy ko pyaar kay liye choor rahi ho...

Ishita: amma

Amma: aur nahe to kiya... Subbu wo tumse pyaar nahe karta tha he wanted to have the wealth you have... he was using you... But raman he is different ishu... Ye janty hue bhi kay tum usy choor dogo wo tum per har waqt apna pyaar nichawar karta rehta hai...

Ishita sees amma

Amma: tum aise nahe thi ishu... appa ki wajah say tumne arrogancy ka makhota apne chehre per liye... ye soch kar kay ab koi tumhain dhoka aur dukh nahe pohancha paye ga... Phr bhi subbu ne tumhain dhoka diya... Samajho ishu aagar tumne raman ki kadar na ki to zindagi tumhian aise zakham day di jo kabhi bhar nahe pain gay...

Amma: tum raman jaise sachy insaan ko dukh day rahi ho... galat kar rahi ho... Agar raman tumhain choor gaya na to kabhi tumhain sacha pyaar nahe mily ga...

Ishita was in deep thoughts...

Amma: so jao...

Ishita sleep thinking about raman how he constantly confessed his love and now raman is ignoring her...

AT HOSPITAL:

Ishita opens her eyes she was laid on hospital bed... Her amma was sitting beside her... she was feeling weak...

Ishita: amma where is raman???

Amma was silent...

Ishita touches her tummy finding baby is not there... she ask: amma baby??? Kahan hai???

Amma: raman lay gaya baby ko... You have not changed your decision na... you are left alone... I said you na ishita...

Ishita screams : NO...

She runs in hospital to find raman...amma tries to console her...

Ishita: amma raman should have waited for me... I love him amma... How can I live without him and our baby... He said that he will be always there for me... Muje ghar jana hai...

Akalay na jaana,
Akalay na jaana, hamay chor karr yoon
Tumharay bina hum bhala kya jiye gay


Akalay na jaana, hamay chor karr yoon
Tumharay bina hum bhala kya jiye gay
Akalay na jaana

Ishita sits in taxi... she was thinking how many time raman has bring the smile on her face when she was feeling too lonely... raman was always there for her...


Diya hosla jisnay jeenay ka hum ko
Woh ik khoobsurat saa ahsaas ho tum
Jo mit ta nahi dil say, tum woh yakeen ho
Hamesha jo rahti hay woh aas ho tum
Yeh socha hay hum nay, kay ab zindagi bhaar
Tumhari muhabbat ko sajda karay gay

Akaylay na jaaa, hamay chor kar yoon,
Tumharay bina hum bhala kya jiye gay


ishita reaches home and finding raman madly... She was crying and praying that bring raman back in her life...she wanted to see her child... She wanted to love raman and her child... She remembers one time how she said that she does not want to see and hold this baby in anger...she was crying uncontrollably...


Fasana jo ulfat ka chera hay tum nay
Adhoora na rah jaye, yeh soch layna
Bicher kay zamanay say paaya hay tum ko
Kahi saath tum bhi naa ab chor dayna
Yehi hay tamana
Yehi iltijaa hay
Aur iss kay siwa hum bhala kya kahay gay


Akaylay na jaaa, hamay chor kar yoon,

Tumharay bina hum bhala kya jiye gay

She collapse on floor and cries...

She screams: come back raman... I love you... I want to hold and love our baby... Kahan ho raman???? I love you...

That's it I hope you all will like it waiting for your lovely comments and response... I recommend you to listen this song original track by ahmend rushdi its lovely track...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
amma ishu convo was fabolous
itni jaldi delivery
must be a dream !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Nice plan by Raman..
Amma sensed her thoughts & give her a good talk..
Subbu..Ufff😡
Is last sequence a dread?
Cont soon Riddi..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
beautifully written
too emotional yaar
thanks a lot

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