Wow. Frankly speaking I loved this story. For the topic you chose.
Infatuation, crush and attraction in teenage days are common. But it indeed needs to be handled and guided so that the person don't end up thinking that it's love.
I kind of felt for Preet. I understand and support Maan for how he handled the situation from his pov but somewhere I hoped he shouldn't have been so rude and straightforward. This could embarrass Preet and make her uncomfortable around him forever now. Had he dismissed her politely and gotten Geet to explain things to Preet then maybe Preet wouldn't have been so hurt. The only reason I understood Maan's behavior was cos he was shown as a private person from the start.
MG story was heartwarming. Maan's love, loyalty and dedication towards Geet was really sweet. He was so possessive about his moments and his life that revolved around Geet and his daughter. Usually people are possessive about other people this was different as Maan was shown possessive about his privacy which meant only for Geet. It was a good change.
Enjoyed reading this one. I really loved how you showed Preet's infatuation. From the books to the girl talks and then witnessing with her own eyes the love Maan has for Geet. All this things led for her to think Maan is the ideal partner and husband which further went on to the dream of having him as the one for her. I loved the flow.
Looking forward to the next part. Hoping Preet understands Geet and doesn't get offended.
-Sanjana!
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