Dil Manta Hi Nahi... (Another of my take on the ME) AzMa Scene

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I went into AzMaland again while watching the ME AzMa segment... *sigh* but this *sigh* is a good *sigh*


Azaad sat in his room, thinking and worrying about Mahira. He recalled the pool incident.

"I hope she is ok", thought Azaad. "Why did she say that the water was pulling her down? That was weird. Is she only just scared of the water or is it that there some strange evil force wanting to harm her?".

He shook his head thinking he was being foolish. "Who would want to harm her?". He shook his head again and looked around him and was shocked to find himself in front of Amaad's room.

"How did he get here?" He wondered looking around him. His heart began to beat faster. He turned to leave...to get back to his room but it was like his feet had a mind of their own...they refused to move...they seemed to have grown roots. He finally gave in to his feet, to his heart...and his hands trembled as he placed on the door handle...













As he gazed at her, totally lost in her...

Mahira stirred...grasped his hands and held it tight on her chest. Azaad was panicked... "Did he wake her up?". Mahira opened an eye and gave him a cheeky grin... Azaad was embarassed at being caught gazing at her... He was tongue-tied... Mahira pressed her cheeks against his hand...looked at him long and hard... Azaad started shifting...and just when he thought he couldn't take it no more...she gave him the sweetest of smiles...

Mahira got off the bed and said "Wait here...don't move..." and walked towards the washroom...glancing backwards towards Azaad...to make sure he hadn't moved...

As she wasn't watching her steps, her feet tripped on the uneven patch of the rug...and was about to fall..She quickly regained her balance...stopped signed Azaad with her palms and glancing back at him said..."Stay put...I've got everything under control...don't move from there" and disappeared into the washroom.

Azaad smiled to himself... With a heartfull of pain, he thought to himself "she brings joy into mylife but I know I will only bring horror and pain in hers. I must leave and get away from her as much as I can..."

As he got up to go...the washroom door opened and

"I knew you would try to leave...so I tried to hurry as fast as I can" pouted Mahira.

Azaad looked up and his heart leapt. He sat back on the bed with a whoosh. His eyes could not believe what he was seeing... He blinked...No she was still there...

Mahira had changed into a black saree...and was looking absolutely breathtaking... Azaad found himself finding it hard to breathe... She started walking towards him and stopped just a couple steps from her. She twirled...and he gulped seeing her back...

"How do I look?" she asked... He couldn't speak...it was like his mouth was full of cotton...

She twirled again...and he wondered... "where did the back part of the blouse go?". Her back was bare...and she had a tatoo... and she was turing towards, she lost her balance and fell plomp onto his lap.

Mahira was as shocked and embarassed as Azaad was...She tried to get up but his hands, involuntarily held her tight, hugging her hard against his chest.

Mahira started wriggling on his lap. Azaad tightened his grasp and said "Stay". Mahira stilled, glancing up in surprise and their eyes-locked... (o mere yaara...)

"Ummmnnn, Hulk"...came the unwanted voice through the fog in his mind...

"Hulk???"


*stuttered


P.S. please forgive my grammatical and spelling mistakes


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beekay1 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Did try a new format... Let me know if it worked... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG!!!!!
THIS IS EVERY KIND OF BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!



Beekay love!!!! WOAHHH!!!!!



Amazing stuff my friend! Love love loveee!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fantastic work..i cudnt see ME,was busy at my sis bday..waiting 4 repeat...
bt here in ur os i watched azma scenes rather than only reading...its awsm..beautiful.
azad miya to gaya kaamse..ab mahira ki baari..
i lk it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: farz_parachute

OMG!!!!!

THIS IS EVERY KIND OF BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!



Beekay love!!!! WOAHHH!!!!!



Amazing stuff my friend! Love love loveee!!


Thanks Farz...

Waiting for your take on the ME too 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

fantastic work..i cudnt see ME,was busy at my sis bday..waiting 4 repeat...

bt here in ur os i watched azma scenes rather than only reading...its awsm..beautiful.
azad miya to gaya kaamse..ab mahira ki baari..
i lk it.


Thank you...

Yes...Azaad's monolgue was beautiful...
Sherni_Jerry thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow fantastic
just so gorgeous looking post
just AzMa

thnx a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG !! WOMAN ! THE HELL U CAN WRITE !
BRIMSTONE AND HELLFIRE 🤣🤣
okkie ! this is my first impression. actuall review coming next .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ethereal.Surbhi

wow fantastic
just so gorgeous looking post
just AzMa

thnx a lot



😆😆

Didn't see anything else but AzMa...
Watched the entire epi today for the first time 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The format is nice...the pictorial helps imagining more vividly. but only one problems, words are so tiny I had to scrunch my eyes to read them...that too on a large monitor screen and that too with specks ! think of those who r reading in on cellphones ! 😆
I am like Mahira chasmeywali !

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