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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#411

Fab update dea. ...

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

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Suprabha

@shaanmaan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#412

Mindblowing update
U just nailed it
Too good

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Alishakhna1998

@Alishakhna1998

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#413

lovely update
nandini's drunk scene was damn hillarious
poor manik, he has to bear alot
nd cherry on cake...Policeman scene😛

do continue soon
waiting

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cute03sweety

@cute03sweety

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#414

Awesome
Update
yaar
mazzaaa
aagya
ab jaldi
se
inka
1st
special
Wala
kiss
kara
do
plzzz
can't
wait
bohot hogya ye
kiss miss

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#415

awesome update...

another kiss-miss and public kiss...

loved the police wala drama...nandu drunk was the best...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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priya

@priya_sejwal

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#416

Wowww...such a Awsummm fantastic superbbb update

Nandu cute prank haha...lovely

It was amazing day...first morning nandu tried to wake up him haha thn he decided to give treat...thn film her love for srk haha n thn dinner thn again public kiss n phir nandu ne jo badla lia it was hilarious haha i can't Stop laughing... i thought usne sch meim drink kr li but it was her prank..haha loveDDD it

Thank uh for pm

Update soon...

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angel_110

@angel_110

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#417

wow..it was such a long n awesome update..hats off to ur amazing writing skills...loved the update alottt...😊

poor manik couldn't sleep whole night becoz of smurfy's fear.. hoping nandu wil figure out a way to make manik and smurfy friends...

uff nandu tickling manik wid dat feather n in return he pouring water on her..not knowing his very own nandu is teasing him..was way too cute scene...

and and and... the scene where manik tells nandu dat his bum is not paining..infact he is all fine and can run in Marathon and do shaka-laka-boom boom" was hilarious...i was laughing holding my stomach wen i read dis scene..it was damn funny..

manik decribing girls as parts of technology...gosh...den he kissed her to stop her from shouting... and as expected...got slapped in public in return..his bad luck..

the dance sequence was superb..full bollywood style...

nandu complaining him abt y he always kiss her in public was cute...

the scene where nandu and manik are flirting n teasing other was a treat to read..enjoyed it alott.. bt again a kiss miss.!!??😡... chalo fir bhi thik hai...will wait for dat...

continue soon dear..😊

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sri_valli

@sri_valli

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#418

wow...amazing and looong update...u R such an amazing writer...loved each and every word of ur update...nandini left smurfy at home for manik who can't even slept the whole ngt bcoz of that dog...😃😃😃...liked the types of girls description...like seriously how can U get ideas like these???in each episode ur coming with different ideas...the day out was full of fun for nandini and torture for manik...maniks puishmebt was awesome and very funny...drunken nandini was always a fun to read...policeman add fuel to the fire ha ha ha...at last nandini ROCKED and manik SHOCKED 👏👏👏...again a miss kiss......plz make their fiss kiss a memorable one ...i have very high hopes on U about this...😉😉...stay blessed and plz keep writing...

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moitrisha

@twinklingstar99

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#419

u r an amazing writer dear...just loved ur ff...its just a complete packaga...comedy,romance,action sb kch hai..just loved it...loads of love ...continue soon..