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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my god LM... How you do it...

I was smiling from ear to ear and had tears in my eyes at the same time..
This is by far the most beautiful momentand the most lovingly written chapter !!

Everything is perfect from the setting to the day to the clothes !!

And I just love love the vows... They were sooo perfect I wish the Cvs read this... The intensity of their love was brimming in it.. The song was superb too.
Ishani pregnant again !! What more can Ranveer ask for!! That was a perfect surprise wedding gift !!
Love the epilogue.. It is perrrfect...
🤗 ❤️ ❤️ 🤗
Edited by matsh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hmmm..finally finished reading all the 7 chapters in one go in just 2.45 minutes sitting in one place ..he he...feeling so nice.


chapter 65 was so nice..& Amba ishani conversation was so soothing & emotional as well..i loved it..& I'm glad that things fall into place much easily in India...otherwise it would have surely had an impact on Ranveer-Ishani's future... & it was nice to see them happy again with Martin,claud & Martha...& Ranveer's concern was so apt..Ishani is stubborn...but anyways can't blame her either...he he...


Ranveer & ishani's heart to heart conversations have always been delight...& the lake scene was so scary yaar..

what will i say about chapter 67..it kept me on my edge of the seat..It was so scary yaar..my eyes were filled while reading his chapter as if it was happening for real..u have mastered in this kind of writing ...Oh gosh...it s so powerful...

chapter 68 was a very emotional one..I was in tears dear...loved it a lot..the hospital ishveer conversation,it was so unexpected & very emotional one...I had several doubts about that night especially, but u cleared all my doubts in this chapter..i am glad..now I understood why Ranveer entered the highly blazed library or was he considering himself a superhero..he he..

He is a perfect father...loved it...

Dear it was amazing.. The ending was so perfect... Finally it came to an end where it began.. it can't be any better ...loved it a lot...

& dear..one more thing I wanted to say u..i really feel very sorry,not for u but for me...for the past few weeks I could not comment on time & could not appreciate ur hard work & writing that u always deserved...for u have gifted us with this amazing gift & I always took pleasure reading it...even during ur exams u kept updating the ff for us..& there were times when I was very low & reading the updates just made me feel relaxed & gave me an unknown happiness...

I remember the day when I first read the first chapter of neopolitan city...I get connected to this story instantly & felt some emotional attachment to it... at the same time I was very much impressed with ur writing skills,I was actually amazed...I felt like I was too a part of their lives & was closely observing them forgetting the fact that it was all a trance.i must credit u for this...Thank u dear for this beautiful gift...

& Obviously I want you to continue this habit of writing & love to read such beautiful stories from you...Whenever u get enuf time ,do come up with a new ones..Untill then waiting for ur new explorations..ha ha...Love u Rashida..🤗🤗


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Posted: 10 years ago
I wanted to comment on the epilogue separately..😳😳..it was a master piece dear...i must say you r a juggler of words.⭐️⭐️⭐️ ..It's just out of the world.⭐️⭐️ .the way u described everything with minute details..i just loved it...i am still letting the words sink in..those phrases those words,those vows & promises... so nicely written...jus loving it.i m not able to express how i'm feeling now..i wish i could ever write like u or atleast closely enuf.u guys r my inspiration..keep it up dear...& the song u chose,that was really very meaningful...⭐️ .

so this was the surprise ..their final wedding day & another good news from Ishani...😳😳 loved it.
...as i have already told you i never liked to read romance genre,i simply did not like..but after reading ur ff i suddenly got so much interested in romance genre...he he...😳😳
Once again thank u dear...had a gr8 time reading it..😳😳
Edited by _priyaa_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow LM it was awesome... I don't have words 👏 👏 I just loved it ishveer wedding ,there vows, 😳 😳 😳 all the details.. Natasha' s dialogue 😳 😳 everything. A perfect ending! It was great to read this beautiful story . But I m gonna miss it 😭 😭 😭 it had become a habit to read a masterpiece every alternate day...
I hope you will come with another wonderful story. I want to read more of yours not just i, i m sure everyone wants this 😊
Sorry for my idiotic reply I Just want to tell it was great 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
LM 🤗🤗
thank you for giving us the bliss of such a beautiful FF , love you a lot 😳
as i always say you are a brilliant writer and will always remain one 👏👏⭐️

This journey was wonderful for me as well , first i was a secret admirer of this FF , then i started to make appearance , naturally how can anyone resist to praise a wonderful writer like you 🤗
then i became your die hard fan , and now a crazy fan 😆
sometimes i missed to comment early , sometimes i was busy but most of the times whenever you messaged me i tried to arrange atleast 1 hr. of free time to visit LM's dreamland 😆🤗
your chapters have been a pleasure to read , always 😃
i read your 72nd chapter & the epilogue , and as usual i got mesmerized , i will not give any review this time as these 2 were gems and i certainly have no right to appreciate such beautiful things
but ya 1 thing i wanna say is that ishveer's words ( technically your words 😛) brought tears of happiness in my eyes , can't even imagine that these 2 fellows can be this much happy in their life , the imagined scenario was eternal , was totally lost
the cherry on the cake was obviously one of my favorite songs and for the first time instead of bella & edward , ishveer were on my mind 😳this is a 'made for ishveer' song after tum hi ho 😳😳
forgot natasha 😛 she is indeed very cute , i even tried to picturize her ...she's adorable really😆😳
LM deary , you gave me a suitcase of memories with this FF 😃
how i wish i was a publisher , i would've not wasted a single sec. to try to publish this master piece , but unfortunately i'm not 😭
from now on if somebody asks me give a list of my fav novels , it will be - da vinci code , alchemist , angels & demons ,the fault in our stars , NEAPOLITAN CITY , diary of a young girl etc . etc.😆
lots of love ,
shweta 😃

Edited by Katniss07 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MM123456

Dear LM

OMG ❤️ ❤️ Give me a moment , I need to find words

My heart is beating like crazy , tears are running down from my eyes , I have romantic song playing and watching the rain from my window Gosh this has to be the best ending EVER ❤️ ❤️ It was so beautiful and magical and my heart is beaming of hapiness ❤️ (that 's what u say right ?)

The wedding was beautiful , every world of these two stole my breath away ❤️ ❤️ Every world of these 2 touched my heart 😳 The vovs , their love , her dress , Ranveer 's cuteness, dance , pregnancy etc everything was so perfect.

No one could rewrite there story this beautiful LM ,and you gave us such a beautiful story 🤗 🤗 Milliones thanks would not be enough LM

What more is it for me to say , I just don't have any words anymore for your brillancy LM . And that is a huge thing because I am a chatterbox 😆

Love you so much LM , you are my favourite author and never let me down. Just makes me fall in love with your story more and each time I don't think I can love you more than I already you keep proving me wrong.

Love you , always ❤️ ❤️

Love from an emontional

#yours1fan

MM

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Oh dear MM! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so, so happy that you loved it so much! ⭐️⭐️
God, the atmosphere is so romantic! Day DreamingDay Dreaming And I can totally understand the thrill of reading a romantic chapter in such an atmosphere; it's electrical. ❤️❤️ And after reading your review, I feel like someone has given me a potion for Euphoria. ☺️☺️
As long as each and every aspect of this chapter touched your heart, I consider my job well done. 😃😃
Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 Your reviews have been always instrumental in me pushing my own limits in writing and exploring new things right from the start. ❤️❤️ And a million thanks would fall short for thanking you all for the support and unconditional love that you all have given me. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
I love you too so much sweetie! ❤️❤️❤️
Edited by LadyMeringue - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: xx_MATSH_xx

LM

What a beautiful ending my dear
All the way from chapter 1 to the Epilogue
It was a fantastic journey
Im sad that it came to an end
But..every stry has its ending right
😉
Im going to get this all printed so i can read it like a book

#Your No.2Fan
Ash

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Thank you so much, sweetie! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked this update! ⭐️⭐️
This journey has been pretty extraordinary for me as well. 😳😳 I think right now, I'm the saddest of all that this beautiful journey did come to an end, but as you said, every story has its ending as well. 😃😃 And what makes it worth the while was the fact that I could touch so many hearts with it. ❤️❤️
And once again, I cannot stop blushing. ☺️☺️ Love you loads, sweetheart! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Whoo wow that ws breathtaking update 👏 👏 👏
Dis update ws really a surreal moment fr us 👏
Nd wht a perfect tymng here our mad ishveer r gtng seprtd or sumthng and here urs r unitng 😳
Dere ws vows were extraordinary 👏 👏
UU left speechless wid dis update 😭
Nd song ws perfectly awesome 👏
I thought Martin ll b her best man givn d scenario frm d strt 😉 😉
Natasha is way too cute 😳 😆
Another baby 😲
Are dey compensating for serials also or no control after 9 months of pregnancy 😉 😃 😆
BT overall a beautiful fairy lyk update I cn actually imagine ishani nd dat wedding venue nd ya lakeside venue ws certainly vry meaningful 👏 👏
Thnx a lot dear fr dis beautiful update nd I hv already said hw mch ur ff meant to me 😕
BT I jst remember a line tht wht goes around tht comes around hope u get tht 😉

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Thank you so much, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 I'm thrilled that you liked the update so much! ⭐️⭐️
The show-IshVeer have officially lost it. 🤢🤢 Even though I hear that there are pretty much some good lollipop episodes coming up, which do tempt me to watch the show, those two are mental gonecases. 😆 And as a fun trivia, I've been planning this chapter since Chapter 25. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
I'm so happy that you liked the vows. 😃😃 Those vows were something that came pretty easily to me and I could actually imagine IshVeer speaking them in my head. 😉😉 The song was the cherry on the cake for me too. ⭐️⭐️ Two months back, Reemz gave me the link to this song, and ever since I heard it, it's all I could think about to be honest. And this song is made for IshVeer. ❤️❤️
Yes, who better to be Ranveer's best man than Martin and Ishaani's maid of honour than Claudine?😛😛 Yep, Natasha is a doll. 😃😃 And yes, another baby. 🤣🤣 I wasn't intending on it, but it just sort of felt like the best thing to write. 😛😛
There is one fun trivia coming up in a few day's time as to why I chose the lake for their marriage. It's a pretty crazy thing that I've stuck on to right from the start, but I've co-ordinated events accordingly as well, so I have to share it with you guys. ⭐️⭐️
Oh yes, I totally get you. 😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: OnlyIshveer

First sry for late reply and your each chapter are awesome 👏 👏 in one night I read 20 chapters..great effort writing 73 chap is not easy task hats off 👏 apart form Ishveer martin Martha Claudine beautiful characterizations.. The way ranveer ishani solved their problem are super and I too love book u gave importants to library really very nice 👏 and the last part beautiful ending for eternal love story.. ❤️ thank you so much for wonderful chapters 🤗 do write more 😊

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Thank you so much, dear! 🤗🤗 I'm so glad that you liked the whole FF. ⭐️⭐️
Yes, Martha, Martin and Claudine are perhaps three of my best creations so far, and I'm immensely proud of them and the way they turned out. 😳😳 I've always wanted a sensible IshVeer who could solve issues like a mature couple rather than the way they show them in the show, and I'm glad that I could put that across. 😃😃
I'm a book lover and a library lover, so I had to give my best over here. And given that the entire FF is themes around the library, I had to give it my best shot. 😎😎
Thank you so much once again, sweetie! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: matsh

Oh my god LM... How you do it...

I was smiling from ear to ear and had tears in my eyes at the same time..
This is by far the most beautiful moment and the most lovingly written chapter !!

Everything is perfect from the setting to the day to the clothes !!

And I just love love the vows... They were sooo perfect I wish the Cvs read this... The intensity of their love was brimming in it.. The song was superb too.
Ishani pregnant again !! What more can Ranveer ask for!! That was a perfect surprise wedding gift !!
Love the epilogue.. It is perrrfect...
🤗 ❤️ ❤️ 🤗

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Thank you so much, dearie! 🤗🤗 I'm so, so, so glad that you loved the epilogue! ⭐️⭐️
This chapter was by far the most 'in love' that I fell with, because for once, IshVeer had their perfect day, with everything perfect. 😳😳 They finally completed the lap of their story that they strived to complete in all those years, and they became each other's forever in the most beautiful day that nature could provide. 😃😃
Those vows are something that came so naturally to me, it was surprising. Yet, it suited IshVeer so perfectly that I had to keep it. That song is something I've had in mind for the epilogue ever since Reemz gave me the song. It's perfectly made for IshVeer. ☺️☺️
Yes, that was indeed the most beautiful surprise gift that Ishaani could have given Ranveer on their wedding day. ❤️❤️
Thank you so much once again, sweetheart! 🤗🤗

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