MANAN FF-FRIENDSHIP:A CONFUSION? ch 35/Page 130(25/05) - Page 50

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Posted: 9 years ago
ONE MORE SUGGESTION FROM U GUYZ
(I AM SORRY FOR BUGGING U LIKE THIS, ..I JUST WANNA MAKE SURE THAT I DONT DO ANYTHING THAT TAKES AWAY ANTHING FROM THE STORY FOR U GUYZ)

Ok! So, please lemme knw whether you want this or not. I was thinking of something, like some future twists and stuff, and Maddy came to my mind. I know a lot of people dont like him, so I am confused whether it will be a good idea to bring him or not.

So, yeahh...plzzz lemme knw...waiting <3
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Posted: 9 years ago

Sorry for late commenting!!
It was amazing!!
Finally they are a sweet romantic couple!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
loved it
good one
cont soon
U can add passionate moments of kyy2 also in between
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Posted: 9 years ago
love the ff very much

ITS AWSM

Awsm
Pls pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved ur ff yaar...read all parts in one go dear...and it is very nearer to my heart as it is very practical and very realistic...any one can relate this story to their lifes...my fav character from this ff is alya...she is soo bubly and so pure and childish...loved alya and nandini bonding...and the confession near nayagara falls is an epic and no words to describe that feeling...waiting for further updates dear...and sent U buddy request...plz accept it and send me pm for ur further updates...
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Posted: 9 years ago
NOTE:

guyz, I am extremely sorry to make you wait so much. I myself wanted to update asap cuz taking too long between such crucial updates takes away a lot from the entire feeling. But I am helpless. I have exams going on, and over that, getting 2-3 hours of sleep at max, it is draining all the energy from my body. I thought of trying to write a quick update, i even wrote one down in 45 mins, but I realized it was not good enough. As a writer, I do not wanna give you something that I myself am not content with. I cant even express how bad I am feeling right now. Just a request, please wait for 2-3 more days. I will update asap. Promise!

Thanks. Lots of love <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
No problem.. Take your time.. We just want a nice update, that you never fail to give.. Apart from that all the best for your exams and sleep well.. We do not want our writer to fall sick now, do we? So will be waiting for the update.. 😊😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's completely fine take ur time nd update
All the best fr ur xams
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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER 23


Nandini was confused what happened to Manik all of a sudden. She also sat down right beside him.

Nandini: " Manik..." Manik turned his face away. Nandini already had tears dwelling up in her eyes.

Nandini: " Manik...plzz look at me...what happened?"

Manik: " Nothing.."

Nandini: " Please look at me na.." She had him face her by putting her hands on his face.

Manik: " Kisiko marne ki kucch zyada jaldi hai na..." Nandini understood why he was mad, now. On one side, she was happy because she could have asked for a better person who loves her that much. On other side, she was feeling guilty for making him sad. Unknowingly, tears rolled from her eyes onto her cheeks.

Manik saw her tears. He was actually really mad at her, her words pierced straight through his heart. But her tears made him forget everything. Manik put his hands on her cheeks and wiped the tears away.

Manik: " heyy...dont cry.." and he hugged her.

Manik: " I am sorry" Nandini broke the hug, Nandini: " No, Manik! Why are you saying sorry? I am sorry. I should have said what I said. Trust me, I didn't realize it...I just.."

Manik: " I can understand. Its just that I cant even imagine not having you in my life. Please never ever talk about leaving me ...and dying?...Just never...plzzz"

Nandini: " Promise Manik! Kabhi nhi kahungi. Bas tum gussa mat hona kabhi..." she said it with the cutest face anyone can ever have.

Manik smiled and kissed her on her forehead. His kiss and his warmth, made her feel calm. She closed her eyes feeling his lips on her skin. After the kiss, she opened her eyes.

Manik: " Thand bohat hai..." and literally fell on the pillow , and made Nandini do the same.

Then he covered themselves with blanket, only their faces visible outside.

Nandini: " waise Manik , you still have not told me . How did you know that I wanted the confession to happen at Niagara falls?"

Manik: " I actually did not know. I wanted to confess my love for you here, because I needed a place that could match upto, umm...may be match, but a place that is close, to ur beauty...but u r too beautiful man.." Nandini blushed at this.

Manik: " wait...so...u also wanted the confession to be here? Wow, this is what you call Made for each other.."

Nandini smiled and held his hand while entwining her fingers with his inside the blanket.

Manik: " Waise Ms. Perfect, when did you realize that you are in love with me?"

Nandini: " Umm...I don't really know...I felt there was something deeper than friendship between us at times...but then the next moment, I would tell myself to stop overthinking...I feel like its been forever.."

Manik: " Hmm.."

Manik: " Same here. But you know, I was kind of scared. "

Nandini : " of me?" and she laughed. She found it funny , if he was scared of her.

Manik: " aha, no! Not you. I was scared of breaking our group which means the world to all of us."

Nandini was confused. How was his confession gonna make their group break.

Nandini: " What do you mean Manik?"

Manik: " Wohh.. I don't know if you know or not...but Alya..."

Nandini: " Alya?"

Manik: " Alya...she had feelings for me...like more than friendship.."

Nandini was shocked. She thought Manik did not know about it. She was looking at him with a face like she was given the biggest shock ever

Manik: " I know its kind of shocking...so you didn't know?"

Nandini: " No no...I did! She told me, in fact."

Manik: " then, why are you so shocked?"

Nandini: " Cuz I thought you did not know. Wait, so you knew about it? She told you?"

Manik: " Yeah I knew it. And no she did not tell me. I remember, her talking to her teddy and confessing all that. I heard it because I was at the door. But she does not know that I know."

Nandini: " Yeah, she does not. So, why didn't you do anything about it?...I mean...like what was your reaction? .."

Manik: " to be honest...I was confused for sometime...Like, I didn't want to hurt Kiddo...She is very sensitive, but at the same time, I knew that I didn't have any feelings for her...It was ...hard.."

Nandini squeezed his hand.

Nandini: " and..you did not tell me?"

Manik: " I wanted to...but, It was just complicated...I thought the best way was to make sure that I don't change my attitude and my love towards her, while trying to kind of ignore what she felt...I did not want her to feel that she has done a mistake my loving someone, who did not love her...You know what I mean?"

Nandini: " I can understand...Manik! You know, you are the best friend ever. Only you can put your friends' feelings before anything else.."

Manik: " Aha, no! You deserve that title, not me! ...You know Nandini, she really means a lot to me...like she really does...but its not love, at one point, I actually tried to make myself feel that I could love her...I thought I didn't know whether you loved me or not...and there was Kiddo who I didn't want to hurt...but I couldn't...I always loved you...dil nahi maana..."

Nandini: " I love you.."

Manik: " I love you too..."

Nandini: " Manik, even I love her a lot...she is like my own child...like I wanna pamper her...wanna be there for her even when she goes through smallest of the things.."

Manik: " I know Nandini. That is why I was scared of ruining your friendship with her, and of course, mine too. So, I had to stay quiet and behave like I never knew anything.."

Manik: " but you know what...I take the responsibility of finding the perfect guy for her...A guy who would love her so much more than I could ever give...Regardless of anything, I will always be there for my kiddo.."

Nandini smiled, and Manik did the same. Then, Manik realized how he had been talking about everything but themselves all this time. He switched back to his romantic mood.

He left her hand, and pulled her closer by putting his hand on her waist.

It shocked Nandini, because it was all of a sudden.

Manik: " accha...enough of the talks...we will have lot of time to do that..." and he moved his face closer to hers. Manik was clutching her skin, which made her shiver. Manik made his way to her neck.

He gave her countless wet kisses there. Nandini was moaning his name, which made him go crazier. He gave her some lovebites there. Nandini was lietrally digging her nails into his body.

She was loving his wild yet gentle romance. As Manik was kissing her more and more, he forgot about any limits or anything else. He just didn't want to stop.

He slowly moved her dress down her arm, making her entire skin on her shoulders visible. He could not control it anymore. His wilder side took over. He was kissing and biting her like anything.

Nandini's heart was beating so fast that she could not even say Manik properly. She was lost in his sweet torture.

In her mind, Nandini knew that things were getting out of control, and they needed to stop before they lose their senses, but his touch was addicting. Her heart was not ready to listen to her mind at all, all it wanted was Manik. As Manik tried to move his body so that he could reach her back and kiss her there. He felt something pulling his back. He realized Nandini was wearing a chain, that had a locket and it got stuck in his shirt, He tried to untangle it, but it just would not.

On one side, that locket was taking forver. On other, Manik could not take it anymore. He wanted to touch her, to kiss her...and to feel her...

Manik: " Damn it..." Nandini finally realized that Manik was trying to untangle her locket from his shirt.

Nandini: " Manik..."

Manik: " Its not coming out...God...ok...wait.." and he removed his shirt , making his muscular body visible. Nandini was literally staring at his body, those perfect abs.

Nandini( to herself) : " Nandini...stop staring at his body shamelessly..."

Manik again slipped into the blanket . He went closer to her earm kissed her earlobe...

Manik ( whispered into her ear) : " Don't worry...its all yours.." This made Nandini blush.

Manik took her hand and put it on his chest. Nandini was literally shivering. She was losing all the control over her own body.

On the other side, Nandini's shivering hand on his skin, was making Manik lose all his senses. He slowly moved back, and stared at her beautiful face. Her eyes were closed, and cheeks were all ready because of blushing. He went closer and brushed his lips against hers, while closing his eyes to enjoy the feeling.

Nandini could not take it anymore. She wildly entered his mouth and their kiss went on, which seemed like forever.

God...I did it...yayyy! Aha, guyz I am sorry if its not good. But trust me, I am one of those shy people when it comes to physical proximity. Writing this update has been the hardest so far, because I did not know how to word it...if its not good, just forgive me...I asked you guzy whether u wanted more romance, I got mixed answers, so to make it fair, I included both types in the same type, at least I tried to...I don't know if it came out be like that...

One again, Thanks for all the love...<3

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Please update with more romance of manan eagerly waiting

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