"Na Umar Ki Seema Ho
Na Janmon Ka Ho Bandhan"
Beautiful lines.. kahan se dhoond ke laate ho aap yeh lines.. !! β€οΈβ€οΈ
Raman ka entry..hahaha..classic it is π€£
'he was Raman Bhalla and his pacifier was only Ishita'.. kya kahoon is line ke baare me.. mind blowing π€ͺ π€£
Ishita and her calm attitude towards his words..so opposite to her usual self.. π π
She surely is upto something π π
There is more surprise or i can say shock in store for him.. bechara Raman π² π²
Ruhi entry and her cute complaint about her Ishima being late.. π€
But Ishita ne mana kardiya Ruhi ki request ko..π² π
How can she..!! ??
Next its Adi..and she said no to his request as well.. π²
Raman wants to question her and not getting any privacy.. π²
She signed cheque without checking it.. π
And when asked about it madam refused to do the work and left the room without giving answer..
Same ignorance even after dinner..
Raman toh confuse hogaya π π² π€£
Kya dialogue hai..chain se jine toh nahin diya..ab chain se marne bhi nahi degi .. π€£ π€£ π€£
Ishita the drama queen.. did everything and later she is praying to God.. π π
But jo bhi kiya achha kiya..Raman deserved such treatment from her side..
How can he hide anything of so much important from his wife.. π² π‘
The next scene is brilliantly written di.. π π
Such an emotional and an eye opening scene that is.. π
So much effort you have put to understand the characters.. and analysis of donon ka situation is superb.. π€
The way you presented the turmoils of their heart and mind is brilliant.. π π how could you do this di..!!? π€
I can't point out one line from this scene and give my opinion about it..if i do that it will be one more OS.. π
Each and every line is worth praising.. π€ β€οΈ
(at the end )
Ishita : Mission Successful
Raman : lesson learnt
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'Main pagal hoon kya jo tujh jaisi khatarnak sherni se panga lunga ' this is one of the favorite dialogue.. π π€£ π€£
Khatarnak same as you.. π€£ π€£
'Jab yamraj bhagwan badi mushkil se himmat karke tumhe lene aayenge na darte darte toh sirf main, Ruhi aur Adi nahi balki unke bachon ke bachon ke bachon ke bachon ke bache bhi tumhare saath honge'
Its a mind blastingly hilarious line.. π€ͺ π€£ π€£
At last 'Kuch bhi' aa hi gaya Ishita ke muh se..
All in all a beautiful, emotional and an heart touching OS π
Di love you π€ π€ β€οΈ
Originally posted by: aarohi26
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Unres...finally. I think this one is my toughest unres till. You know I am editing my comment 3rd time. Yup whenever I edited it, it got deletedπ‘ ab aap samjh sakti ho ki main kitna irritate hui honge. Anyway chadoo usko, and back to your os. Ek min...pehle na I am very annoyed with akshu di. Actually I am not annoyed but she always unres before me ππ and I became second one π but I know this is our lots of love for you petal Didi πaww sabse pehle toh so sorry for this late reply...then so sorry to hear about ur problem in commenting...shayad yeh OS tujhse gussa tha for late comment islie tujhe comment nahi karne de raha tha...ok sorry bad joke i knowlolll akshu se gussa yeahhh i am so happy πpar you dont worry pehle res kiya toh kya hua unres toh ab tak nahi kiya na...she will be the last to comment so you win πChalo while reading your title, obvious, lyrics and sound of melodies late jagjit Singh ji came in my mind. I am not very find of gazals, actually I used to avoid gazals but this one is really a beautiful one and while reading this, I was thinking yaar yeh pankhu di ne aisa kaisa title choose kia? Kahi kisi ko ludhkaaya toh nahi hai? π² But then I recalled are yeh toh ludhkaane wala dept hi nahi hai. π And I proceeded πlolll ludakana word cracked me up...well i dont like ghazals from any other singer but JagJit Ji was or rather still my all time fav...some of his ghazals are just beyond words and this hothon se chulo tum is one of the bests...waise maine yeh title socha nahi tha...pehle pura OS likh liya...title bhi de diya...phir yeh ghazal sun rahi thi toh socha yahi title kyun na de dun..it was anyways suiting here so de diyaWaise sacchi bolun toh I really enjoyed rkb broom pitaai. As normally wife's apne husbands ko sirf bedroom mein hi maar paati hai but she is one who beat her hubby in front of public twice π but you are rite actually this track needed to be a sensible ending but we know that our cvs are not intelligent like us.πlolll bedroom mein pitai π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£ main toh kitchen mein karti hu with belan and karchi π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£Uff!!!!! Poor bacche...kaand pitaaji karte hai aur bhugatte bechaare bacche hai. Mujhe toh kabhi kabhi Raman ko dekh ke samjh mein hi nhi aata yeh CEO kaise bans????????lolll jaise Ishita dentist ban gayi waise hi yeh CEO ban gaya farzi degree se π€£π€£π€£π€£π€£Rkb is tadpofy for wifey attention but wifey is on full revenge mode. " chain se Keene nahi diya kam se kam Marne toh de " was mast diπshukriyaPoor ishu...she is guilty for her behaviour with kids. It is really difficult for any mother to act rude with her children unnecessarily. U really penned thi very well. πaww thank you so much...this particular section was my fav πππFinally...man is back in action after lots of waits...oh god I seriously don't have words for their emotional scene. It was awesome di. Raman was just chattering same thing again and again and not even ready to listen her and she finally able to realise him that he is completely fine was took gud di. Lots of hugs to you di for this. You know in one scene when she kept her hand on his mouth and stopped him to say something was just wow di...the most beautiful scene.thanks a lot Aarohi...i have this big smile on my face right now while reading and replying to ur comment...thanks a lotAnd here comes the peaceful ending where they both were sitting wit each other, in each other arms. Pulling each other legs but making promise not to hide anything from each other was brilliant di, sometimes this kind of heart to heart talks are needed in between couples.absolutely...such talks are very important and needfulDi this one is heart touching os, dealing with emotions of a wife who is dependent on her husband, a husband who loves his wife but scared for her what will she do without him. Thanks di for this wonderful piece and so sorry for. delay and love u always pankhu di. Will soon update my other res alsoπawww thanks a lot...this was totally random but i didnt know sabko itna pasand aayega...thanks a lottt...i love you dher saara...loll yes i am waiting for ur other comment but it is ok take ur time
Originally posted by: ishra123
Brilliant update
I can't stop imagining.
I am speechless.
Yhm forum is lucky having you
You are the best writer.
Loved it.
Love you Panku did.
Thanks for the awesome update & on.
Originally posted by: -DivyanKaran-
Pankhu Di..I'm speechless.
I don't have words to appreciate your great effort in writing this amazing story! It's the BEAUTY of LOVEβ€οΈ <3.
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