KaYa SS ll Yellow Light {Updated - Chapter 2 on pg. 6

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Manal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Diksha_1991
Very well written 👏👏
Eagerly waiting for next update 😳

Thank you love!

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Manal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Sokool27
Nice beginning!!
Waiting for next updates...😊

Haan.. would like to read a longer update.

Thank you!

Will definitely try writing longer updates. 😊

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Mahi78

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

That was fab.👏 I never read any OS, FF or SS excepting only one writer in MB named Lazy.😊

This The first FF I'm reading in this forum and must say you ra really a good writer. The way described the prolog and chapter one already got me hooked to you. Pls continue dos on dear.😊

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Sohini Dasgupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

This is great piece of writing Manal. Please continue soon and pm me. Would love to read further. Eagerly waiting..:)

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

interesting update
loll tarini & trisha got happy that kabir broke up with malvika 😆
who is that lady that kabir flat on their first meeting 😉
continue soon

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praneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

lovely beginning

the meet was not a very pleasant one though

hope to see the changes soon

thanks for not having richa

she has been a pain for a while

malvika dating kabir shit

update soon

pm me please

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Bun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Just was going through stories and I have to say this one managed to interests me the most! U write very well. Ur each sentence gets a proper closure and Ur choice of words is fantastic!

So this story will be in flashbacks...sounds interesting. From the prologue I can already tell that he is in love with her but obviously he moved away from her probably for her own good.

So dating back to this first flashback we can see that Kabir is still a pretty relaxed guy even if Law school has changed him...But the prologue Kabir is a more serious one... Can't wait to see this character development happening..

Please do update soon...I so wanna get to knw Ananya's character...it will be interesting...I can tell! And mostly am waiting for their meet.m..the one is present 😃

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Purnima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

This was a wonderful start...nothing beats happiness of Kabir Malvika break up...*party toh banti hai* Kabir saab 😆 ...hope u find a better match soon 😉 ...keep eyes open ...

Looking forward to see how story moves on ...& don't want to b worried abt prologue ...as of now gonna njoy flashbackflashback 😛

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Manal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai
lovely dear

Thank you so much! 😊

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Manal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Mahi78
That was fab.👏 I never read any OS, FF or SS excepting only one writer in MB named Lazy.😊
This The first FF I'm reading in this forum and must say you ra really a good writer. The way described the prolog and chapter one already got me hooked to you. Pls continue dos on dear.😊

Thank you love. ❤️

I will be updating soon-ish. So watch out for this space! 😊

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