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Posted: 8 years ago
For Arjun & Anjali
After reading the chapter, I was quickly checking to see if Khushi knows any other unmarried girls as part of her life. Last time could have been a novice mistake but this time she has bested herself by actually making the proposal for another girl. Some may think it as funny, some may call it dumb and some may call it innocence.  But, I call it realistic. And that is what your stories are, grounded in reality and nurtured by the facts of life. Not all princesses in reality are waiting for love and not princesses all can recognize their knights in shining armor.

Talking about knights, I am glad now that Anjali finally saw the shine on Arjun's armor and Arjun could finally see the beauty in the princess that was awake (not sleeping) and right in front of him.

The best part was that the confession actually came from Arnav, the third guy at the party😃. The story for me went something like this - a friend pushed you down a pit and when you reached the bottom, you just realized that there is a pot of gold right in front of you. Now, all you have to deal with was to figure out a way to get that pot of gold to the top. Now that Anjali and Arjun figured out a way to reach the top and also figured that each of them is a pot of gold for the other, I am guessing the extra brightness setting is auto tuned for them, for the rest of their lives.

Before I get carried away with the A's any further, I have to express my surprise at the relaxed nonchalant talk of the sisters. For all the silence Payal takes around with her, I am slowly realizing how much of that is forcibly self-imposed. She does have a lot of deserving things to complain but, beneath all that silence, I am glad with her attitude of "take them in stride". Even if, especially if, it involves her little sister. It may be the new times, but the rapport of the sisters makes me focus more of the smiles rather than the freckles.

Just when I thought, it would be hard to remove the smile from my face on this chapter, you had to do the proposal😡. It was a positive sign knowing that his involvement extended to her personal family issues. But the bang she exploded could have tested anyone's patience. Shutting her up maybe the right thing for now. I belong to that crowd who believe that when the doomsday is closer, then so is the end😉.          

That cliffhanger is a harder one to hang on for two weeks. So a sneak peek is a small lifeline we expect for the sake of survival🤗.

Edited by bhavali4RR - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lovedrops






<font size="5" color="#990000">Wow my 5000 th post dedicated to SBH.</font>


wow..congrats..keep rocking😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update dear loved the conversation between arjun and anjali.. And arnav got a shock of his life.. Here he was planning to make khushi his but seems she is planning something else.. Hope he denies her without hurting her.. Please update soon Edited by sweetydoll32 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res
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How could you tourture us with that blast? How could I wait for two weeks with that cliffhanger? 
But, I do understand, life comes first... 

I feeL sorry for Arvan, but Khushi being Khushi, she wants to find a good match for her sister, who else is better than her Dr. R Ji...😆

Why do I get a feeling that Arnav would go alone with proposing Payal just to prove a point to Khushi...he badly wants Khushi to know how he feels and he wants her to share the same feeling? When Anjali question about Khushi not being jeasouls of her, Arnav was in a turmoil.. 😭

Happy for Arjun and Anjali...😊

Poor Dr. R Ji, I am sure he will be going through the same turmail as me. Me waiting to findout the outcome of his blast and he trying to come up with a master plan to confess his love...

Will he blast Khushi for trying to play match-making? I hope Khushi shares with Lavanya... So, that she could put some sense in her bestyyy...

Anxiously waiting to find out the outcome of Dr. R Ji's blast...

 

Edited by SharuAG - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
What should I say after reading this update Deepthi. I am trying very hard to compose myself to write how I felt reading it. Your every story deals with social problems. Especially the problems the women are facing in real world. The sad thing but the bitter truth of the society is.. People around the women in difficulty will judge them without knowing the complete truths. Society often punishes poor girls for the mistakes of others. In that process some women will become weak and lose their self confidence. But many women are not weak as the society thinks. They are strong enough to fight for their rights. And they are strong enough to show the world what they are capable of. You are showing that kind of strong women who is fighting with whole duniya. She came out of the shackles of her kameena husband and stood strong now without showing her weakness to the world. You are amazing and brilliant showing the strong facade of the women in the form of Khushi. An innocent woman who was leading her life in the interpretation that her life in bed of roses, suddenly found that her life is bed of thorns covered by the sensitive rose petals. 

In her fight to get rid of those thorns she found a strong support in the form of Dr. R. He gave the strength to fight for the justice. She got her freedom back. But this society will it leave her alone. When she is trying hard to forget her painful past.. when she is tuning her mind to life she chose... why the people around her kept reminding her past. Why they are taking Khushi's past as bahana for rejecting Payal. They are two different people. What Payal's mistake. I think as Payal said.. they are taking Khushi's past as just a bahana for rejecting Payal. In this world.. A middle class girl should have money or beauty or she should be highly educated with some conditions applied.. to get married. Don't know when the fate of the middle class girls will change. Let's hope the day will come soon. 

Payal is so matured to think that Khushi is not the reason for her fate. I really hope she gets a right person as her partner after all these painful rejections. I think someone very nice is waiting for her.. its the matter of time that they meet. 

And what is that idea struck in Khushi's muddled mind right now. I really hope it is not what I am thinking. Her mind always thinks in the direction that she is not suppose to. And who is that listening their conversation. I think it is Sashi. 

Finally ... Mmm.. it is Arnav then who broke the news. From now onwards I decided to not try to break my head figuring out yours teasers. My poor little brain.. it did loads of excercises to think still it couldn't guess it right. I think i am completely thinking outside the box.. when you are twisting things inside the box. And viceversa. One day I will definitely will invent a mind peeking instrument. It will be easy to invent the machine than figuring out your one line teasers. You are truly amazing dammitt..

Ok.. finally they confessed their love.. Arjun and Anjali.. as Di said.. I should pat you and Arnav for clearing the hesitation clouds in between the cute couple. I really think that Arnav told Arjun the truth because of Khushi. I pity him.. he is completely unaware that another big blow is getting ready to hit him very hard. 

Arjun was hiding his feelings from Arnav too. Anjali at least told her feelings to Arnav. Arjun should have sensed her feelings. Becasue women are always very expressive. They cannot hide their emotions. May be he was afraid to even notice her feelings towards him. Anyways all is well in between them at the end. But .. Are you serious about it. Did they.. Really Did they.. OMG..

Poor Arnav his heart is in so much pain that Khushi didn't feel any possessiveness towards him. More than the feeling that khushi misunderstood his and Anjali's relation.. he felt bad that she didn't even feel any possessiveness. By the time he is feeling that the heaviness of MU was off.. another weight is getting onto him. 

Ok.. Now started the arrangement of blowing a dynamite inside Dr. R's heart. If I think from Khushi's POV.. she is thinking that Dr. R will be a good partner who can understand her and make her happy.. becasue she thinks he is very good person. Becasue she doesnt know that Arnav has feelings for her. And she would never think that someone will love her to that much extent after knowing her past. When he said Shut Up.. I really pity him. How much he will go through. He much more patient he has to be with her. Dealing with arrogant persons is very easy... But dealing with such innocent person is very tough. In TVK it was very easy to Arnav to handle Khushi. But this Khushi is too hard for him. I really hope Arnav will deal this situation well without losing his patience. Only Khushi can think of hooking up Payal and Arnav. How could anyone give away Dr. R to someone else. 

You are steering the story very well. I am really awestruck after reading the update. Naaku chaala chaala baaga nachindi Deepthi. Kaani papam Arnav meeda jaalesindi. But I know he will come up with something mind blowing plan to win her. 

OK No update next week .. understood.. Will be waiting for the next update.. will miss SBH until then.




Edited by lovedrops - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali


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Thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago
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The most inspiring thing about you is that instead of weaving a fairytale, you show us the mirror of reality. The way you wrote about how matchmaking is like an exhibition is truly commendable. Many people don't realize that a man for whom his wife is first a showpiece to impress him is really not worthy of their daughter and the guts of the grooms family to point a flaw in a girl is absolutely loathsome. 
Genuinely happy for Arjun and Anjali. Their story has begun with the help of Dr. R Ji. He gave tem the nudge they needed and realization dawned soon.
The last part...ufff us ke baare mein kya kahun...
Khushi is seriously on a match making expedition. But I ain't angry on her, think her a fool or accuse of being ignorant of Arnav's love because the atmosphere she has been raised in doesn't grant easy marriage for a woman for the first time as in the case of Payal let alone second time and that too after being divorced, having several miscarriages and then being unable to conceive. So the thought of someone loving her is almost imperceptible. However, Arnav's anger was justified at it's own place, the pent up frustration came out as anger.
Will wait for the nest update.
Edited by IpKkNdSaRunArHi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry for the late reply akka, I was so busy with my interview and traveling. I wished my stopover at DFW was long, so that I would have met you. I got job in Tulsa OK, so I will be much closer to you. 

As I expected, Payal got rejected again, Khushi feels guilty for her being the reason. Our society is so cruel in these matters. No matter what happens, the women gets blamed at the end. Payal is vexed with the whole process and I would be in her place. I can't believe Khushi just asked Arnav to marry Payal, Moor Dr. Rji, Here he wants to impress little sister, but that sister bring him ristha of her big sister. I hope Arnav says his feelings to Khushi in next update, because it is getting out of control. I hope Arnav searches someone good for Payal (ie. Aakash)

Finally Arjun and Anjali are a couple. My guess was right, He is the one who blurted out eveything...All is well that ends well. 

Can't wait for the update after your break. Will be waiting for you. 

Pinky. 


Edited by Pinky.Raizada - 8 years ago
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Wow anjali and arjuna finally confessed. 
What is with Kushi always paring arnav with others. 
This girl. 
Then shut up..  super reply.. 
Waiting for your updates dear.