SWARON OS : FORBIDDEN TEMPTATION - Page 2

god whenever i saw this scene or remembered it i always has goosebumps
n u penned it jst like that
i can feel that pain
im totally speechless

its lovely...  loved it...  keep writing more... 😃

I love this scene
My all tym favourite scene ind3
Love SwaRon
N abt OS
Really amazing os
U write so well
Superb
Short n cute os

this is beautifull os..

u wrote it amazingly...

even I also wanted this scene on vrushan...

I love ur all work...

kese likhti ho yr itna amazingly...

keep it up dear...Edited by renu_vrushan - 8 years ago

luvly...
after dis scene I actually started luvng swaron...
dats y I luv it more...
glad u wrote an os on dis scene..

I'm so happy you posted 🤗

Beautiful os

Loved it.

kaise likhte ho yaar itna accha

U knw I soo wanted to see vrushan on it..nd u wrote it..dat too so beautifully..thank u fr writing this..

Loved this - "he is not my temptation... he is my peace.."

 

Superb OS
Loved it <3
Very well written 👏
Sharon's feelings were protrayed beautifully :)
VruShan performing this scene would have just been perfect <3
Keep writing!

Gooshhh i still remember this scene 😭

Absolutely brilliant piece of work ...n yeah I too wanted a flashback of dis scene wid vrushan bt nevertheless u fulfilled d wish n I cud only imagine vrushan in dis scene as it was so beautifully penned down