MANAN A TEENAGE OBSESSION - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...such a tragic turn of events...I literally cried after reading a post for the first time...I mean they both must be soo heartbroken...ahhh it feels as if someone stabbed your heart and uh have to live your whole life with that knife still burried in your heart...sooo painful...uh really wrote well...anyone can easily relate to the situation...great work...anyways thank uh soo much for the pm...really appreciate it...please update real soon...waiting eagerly...keep upthe great work...best wishes... :) :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally the moment is cme... when manik nd nandini meet...

awsum...
update soon...
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok read twice updates together...😊. U made it quick like zyada Rona dhona kicha nhi nd now they R gonna meet in nxt ...nandini to surely will do some natak coz she thinks its fr better bt in this duration everything changed Nt jst fr her bt bt fr both of dem ...well i totally believe ur good in showing romance ...I have seen it in ur previous work will b waiting fr it ...kuddos😉 to u ...thnks fr the PM...jaldi jaldi update karo nxt ...😆🤗
LoTs of Love ...❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 24

Recap: Suhani calls nanwn gvs her no choice bt to cm attend her wedding fr which nandini agrees n on thr other side suhani calls manik n informs him about nandini n her depressed condition manik was happy bcz he could finally meet his nandini after a long time...

IN AUSTRALIA
NANDINI IN SHOPPING STREETS
Nandini: ohhh god i cant figure out anything wt shld i gift Suhani... Shld i gv her a frame, a dress, a makeup kit, ... God... Wt can i gift her... Dn she suddenly remembers dn Suhani loves chocolate so she takes 50 types of chocolates n decorate them in a basket wrap them in a gift cover
N then she started packing her bags as the flight was fr the same night
...
IN US
Manik n entire fab 5 were packing their bags...
Manik was so happy...
...
IN RAJASTHAN
AT RESORT
Nandini reached the resort everything was different over dr actually she was feeling very nice after comming to india
She was dressed up in a red jeans white tie her hair open n red heels
Everyone over dr was a lil surprised seeing her as it was a shaadi mahol n every one were dressed up in traditional way Nandini to was feeling ockward
Suhani came frm back n hug nandini tight
Nandini turned to her n hug her back
Suhani: nanduuu i cant believe ur finally here
Nandini whishpers to herself: even i cant believe ki finally im here
Suhani: kuch kaha
Nandini: kuch nahi tum batao ki ya sab kuch kaisa hua i mean achanak sa
Ayan interupts them saying
Ayan: gusthaki kaliya maffi chahtha hai lekin hum dono ki kahani sunna kaliya waqt kaffi nahi hai ( he points towards suhani)
Nandini: ayaaan sa shadi karrahe hai... (she shouted in shock)
Suhani: sorry nahi bathaya bt sab kuch ithna achanak hogaya ki...
Nandini: tu toh rehna da bt wt abt u stupid ayan y didn't u tell me
Ayan: vooo... Actually...
Nandini: actually...
Ayan:... Hua yah ki...
Nandini gvs speak out next luk
Ayan:... Im tellong na... Ki... Suddenly he changes the direction n says ara namaste aunty ji kaisi hai app
Nandini: ayan...
Ayan runs away
Nandini: iska toh ma badh ma dheklunge
Suhani: ha dhek la na par first tu mera saath chal
Nandini: par kaha
Suhani: apne aap ko dheki hai kya phenka aagaye aur vo bhi shaadi vaali ghar Ma
Nandini: Australia ma u dont get lehenga choolis Suhani...
Suhani: i know dts y now chalo wel go fr shopping
Nandini: pehele i need to get freshup
They go fr shopping after freshen up n girls being girls spend whole day on shopping n finally buy dresses fr functions...
They returned at 11:30 in night
Suhani n nandini both were dead tired
Suhani went straight into her room as the next morning was sangeet ceremony
N nandini to went to her room
...
SAME NIGHT
At 2:30 am

FAB 5 ENTERED THE RESORT
their flight landed late so they cm in night time
There was a person to guide them into their rooms
All went into their rooms
Manik in his room was constantly thinking abt how hez gonna aproach nandini wt hez gonna tell her will she be happy seeing me... His thoughts just filled him...
Manik: relax manik jo bhi joga it will be better than u hv gone through this 6 months now relax
N he sleeps as he was tired by long travelling
...
IN NANDINI ROOM
Nandini was in sleep bt suddenly she got up as she was having hiccups she walked into kitchen took a waterbottle n drank
While walikng back to her room she was thinking
Nandini: im hidding bt im sure dr will be a day vn i will hv to face manik then wt will i do dt day hel wait fr the answers dt i cant tell ... nooo no no nandini u can't u need to be strong u cant let this happen to manik just think even if he comes infront of u wt ul do is just act dt he dosent exist s any mr n by the way y will he be here actually how cn he be here vn he is in US wooowooowoo... Nandini ur thinking to much now goo sleep...
Nandini walks into her room n lys on bed
She whishpers to herself
Hope my mrng is gonna be normal
...

How will she know dt her mrng is not only gonna be normal bt also a mrng dt shel never frgt...
...

Precap: manan will meet
...

Sooo i know u were waiting bt all i can say is sorry nt getting time
Bt il try updating it faster frm next week as il be lil free
So plzz do rply n let me know abt ur gusses n views on my Story...
Keep smiling
With lots of love
Preethi

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome just awesome
U write just awazing
Hope u continue soon
Waiting eagerly.
Keep writing
All d best
Plzzz post soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 26


THE NEXT MORNING

Nandini woke up she got ready n went n started helping the decoration bhaya in decorating the flower to the pillars bcz the decorative manager was off on the due to medical problem...

IT WAS 11:30 AM

Fab 5 was still sleeping

Manik woke up vn the suns ray disturbed his eyes n he woke up as soon as he woke up he saw the time

It was 11:45 am manik was shocked n panicked

(though manik always wake up late bt he whole night he was dying to meet nandini n he slept so dt he could meet her so hez kinda panicked fr now to wake up late)

He immediately rushed into the washroom to hv bath

MEANWHILE...

Nandini while decorating the pillar suddenly sees manik infront of her

Nandini was catching a tray of flowers bt it slipped frm her hand vn she saw him

Nandini: this cant be happening

Manik came close to her n whispers in her ear

Manik: n it is happening

Nandini: no no no no (she screams louder)nononooo

Suhani: Nandini wt happened y r u screaming n no fr wt r u okay

Nandini just realised dt manik wasn't dr she was just in a kinda hallucinations of imagining him...

Nandini: im ok im fine just gv me a minute

Sge walks into the kitchen she drinjs water while drinking

Nandini: ohhh god wt am i thinking this just cant be real or how cn i think if manik is here like he cannot be here yeah now calm down nandini... Shhh... U can face it...

She turn back n sees manik face again n turns to her first position

nandini: hez not real hez not. ..
She turns n find no one...
She smiles n walk out

MEANWHILE

Manik was ready n he went out of the room to search nandini he was searching everywhere fr her n finally he saw her in a baby pink lehenga choli heavily designed she tighed hair a light braid on her one side her earrings were long n moving on her every little smile n she had a tray filled with rose petals n she was walking in the corridor she didn't see him

Manik all of a sudden went bfr her Nandini froze fr a sec she immediately closed her eyes
Nandini thinking in her mind: relax its not him hez nt here

N vn she opened her eyes she still saw him standing n luking at her with a smile

Nandini pov: ok now u know hez not hear so carryon with ur work

Nandini just simply walked the otherside leaving him dumbstruck

Manik pov:
Wt just hpnd didn't she see me or am i dreaming dt i saw her just know... He was shocked atthe same time confused he ran behind her he started calling her name loud n louder

She stoped walking n went close near to him
Nandini: r u real...

Manik: kyu aaj kal mera bhare ma dream bhi
karna laghe hoo...

Nandini just left the place n went to terrace

Manik follwed her

They both reached terrace

Nandini: im tierd manik... Plz no mr arguments

Manik: evn im tierd nandini plzzz no.mr sacrifices

Nandini eyes were filled with tears same as manik

Nandini: i dont hv the strength to cry anymr

Manik: neithr me Nandini...

Nandini: y did u come

Manik: definitely not fr u i cm here to attend suhanis wedding she invited me...

Nandini bcm angry

Nandini pov:
How the hell he just said dt is he trying to ignore me did he just say dt like srsly my boyfriend is trying ignoring me like we met after months n he cm here to avoid me...:

She was bursting out

Manik saw it n smiled n still continued

Manik: u know wt Nandini i hv decieded now il set u free im not gonna stop u il never n even i promise as u wanted il try to moveon actually im working on it

Dts it Nandini couldn't hv anymr her eyes were filled with anger she through the plate in her hand downwards n went to manik straight
Nandini: oh really well thank u so much...fr doing this
Manik: wt hpnd Nandini u dont seem happy

Nandini pov:u expect me to be happy arghhh u idiot

Nandini: wt i dont seem happy actually ur right im a way beyond it...
N she leaves frm dr...

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Thats fr now truly sry fr late updates...
Well did u enjoy my story
Do rply n guess the story n let me knoew
With lots of love
Preethi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update .. !!
Continue soon
Ashmita18 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was really great... manik can never stop annoying and teasing her... loved it... continue soon... will be waiting... thank uh for the pm...best wishes... :) :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg! what an amazing update..
jus loved it...u penned it so well
thanks for the wonderful update
the way u write is jus outstanding...plsss update soon
cant wait more...eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hehe ..nice chp ...tht was nice manik did it purposely ...he was poking her so tht she removes all things which is buried in her...nd now after listening to him she will surely react directly or indirectly ..be even wants the same ...continue soon this time ...thnks for PM
Lots of love❤️
Edited by amrutha.shetty - 10 years ago

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