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      Mohabbat...ki adhuri kahani

Ye kahani hai do pyaar krne walo ki jo puri hoke bhi adhuri rh gyi...


Phase 1st - this story is continuation of kaisa ye pyaar hai 

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phase 1 - kaisa ye pyaar hai



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Mohabbat...ki adhuri Kahani


 part 11 on page 1

part 12 on page 1 (blog)

part 12 on page 9 (IF)

part 13 on page 16

part 14 on page 24

part 15 on page 31

part 16 on page 41

PART 17 ON page 50

PART 18 on page 57

PART 19 ON PAGE 67

PART 20 on page 73

PART 21 ON PAGE 88

part 22 on page 92

part 23 on page 102

part 24 on page 111

PART 24B on page 113

part 25 on page 117

part 26 on page 129

Edited by priya_21 - 7 years ago
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Mohabbat...ki adhuri Kahani 


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part 11



Next morning, priya don't want to go , left mahi alone, but she 

have to go, her father waiting her...

She hurriedly left for kitchen make milk for mahi & take her to the 

room...

Priya : Mr. khurana

Maan sleeping peacefully on couch, her voice break his sleep...

Maan : ha

Priya : ye priya ka milk hai

Jb wo uthe toh usse pila dena

Ab uska fever utar gya waise toh

Par koi problem ho na

Toh mujhe call kr dena

Mein usse smjha dungi

.

Ab mein chalti hu

.

Mujhe aapse kuch puchna tha

Maan : bolo

Priya : mahi ki mumma kaha hai

Maan want to tell her, you are her mom, but not know why geet 

behaving like this...before saying anything, he want to confirm 

this, she is my geet ...

Maan : wo hume chodke chali gyi hai

Priya : wo ase kaise chod ke jaa sakti hai aap dono ko

Aapne rauka nhi honga unhe

Maan : rauk hi toh raha hu

Par tum smjh kha rhi hu

Priya : aap kya kh rhe hai

Smjh nhi aaya mujhe

Maan : leave it

Tum jaana than a

Jaayo

Before going priya kissed on mahi forehead, then she left...

 

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Kya  baat hai priya beta

Aap aaj khush lag rhi hai

Priya : pata nhi dad

Par jb bhi Maahi se milti hu na

Dil ko ek sakoon milta hai

.

Na jaane

Asa kyun lagta hai

Hum dono ek dusre ko jaante hai

Pechante hai

.

Dad

Asa kyun ho raha hai

Mere sath

.

Dad : priya bte

Mahi kitni yaari baby hai

Usse toh kissi ko bhi attachment ho jaayengi

.

Aur kuch nhi

.

Aap ek baar budget check kr lijiye project ka

Sb thik lage aapko

Toh final kr dete hai

.

Priya : ji dad

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Priya : ye Mr. khurana khud ko smjhte kya hai

Maine unhe kaha tha

Mujhe mahi ke bare mein batate rahe

Aaj subh se sham ho gyi

Ek call tk nhi kiya

.

Maahi thik toh hongi na

.

She calls him...

Priya : aapne mujhe call kyun nhi kiya

Aur aap is waqt hai kaha

Meri zara maahi se baat karwaiye

Aap kuch bolte kyun nhi

Maan : misthy relax

Priya : mera naam misthy nhi hai

Priya hai

Kitni baar kahu

.

Maahi se baat karwaiye

Maan : wo abhi yaha nhi hai

Priya : wo choti si bachi ase kaha jaa sakti hai

.

Kya huya usse

Maan : wo thik hai

Priya : toh wo aapke sath kyun nhi hai

Maan : mein office mein hu

Aur wo

Priya : wo ghar pe

Aap usse asi halaat mein ghar pe chodke office aa gye

Too bad

Maan : meri baat to suno

Priya : aap zara aaj ghar pe aaiye

Mein batati hu

She cut the call...

   .

He smiles hear her bossy voice...

I know you are my geet , Miss priya

.

He call pinky and said send maahi inside...

 .

Miss priya, tum meri misthy ho

Aur tumhe ye sch manana honga

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Priya reached to khurana Mansion and asked for mahi from daadi...

Priya : namastey

Wo mujhe mahi se milna tha

Daadi : namastey

Kya aap hume batayengi

Aap hai kaun

Priya : ji

Mein priya Sighaniya

Daadi : koi rishta hum sbke sath

Priya : nhi

Par wo maahi

Daadi : Miss priya

Don't take me wrong

Aap yaha bs ek project ke liye aayi hai

Fir kuch dino mein wapas chali jaayengi

Mein nhi chahti

Maahi ko aapki adaat ho jaaye

.

Baad mein takleef maahi ko hi hongi

.

.

Usse ye manana hi honga

Ab uski mom kbhi wapas nhi aayengi

.

Priya not know why her heart feel heavy hearing, mahi mom never come...

.

I hope you understand...

Priya : ji

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Maan : daadi geet aayi thi na

Daadi : phli baat wo geet nhi hai

Aur ha

Priya yaha aayi thi

Maan : aapne kuch kaha daadi

Daadi : ha

Sch

Maan : daadi kaisa sch

Daadi : yhi

Wo humari family se dur rahe

Maan : ase kaise kh sakti hai aap daadi

Maahi : d..ad.a

Maan : maahi aap daadi ke pass rahiye

Dada abhi thodi der mein aate hai

Daadi : maan

Maan : daadi please

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Part 12

 

Maan call on her cell, but she not picking...then he call in hotel, and get the answer, madam not reached to hotel...

After searching her on delhi streets, maan come back to house after 3 hours...in this between he talk to Dr. sushant too, but don't get appropriate excuse to ask him...

Mujhe kitna majboor kr diya hai tumne geet

.

Mein tumhe kaise dundu

Kaise puchu tumhare pass

.

He picks babaji murti from car...

Geet ye tumne hi rakhi thi

.

Flashback in

Geet ye tum meri car ke sath kya kr rhi ho

.

Aapki car maan

Mujhe toh laga tha

Jo aapka hai wo mera bhi hai

.

Geet mera wo matlab nhi tha

.

Aaj mujhe sb smjh aa gya hai

Mein abhi daadi ko complain krti hu aapki

.

Par usse phle baby ko batayungi

Unke dad hume apna nhi smjhte

.

He tries to touch her, but she pushes him...

Shone asa nhi hai

I love you so much

.

Liar

.

Mein tumhe kaise yakin dilayu

.

Mujhe ye nimbu mirchi lagane do

Aur ha ye babaji ki murti bhi rakhne do

.

Waise mere pass koi dusra option hai bhi nhi

.

Aap khehna kya chahte hai

.

Jo tumhe krna hai wo kro

.

Love you maan

Flashback out

Geet aapko bhut maanti hai

Please help me

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Posted: 8 years ago
nice part... dadi turn rude... but this will help geet aka priya... to gain her memory back...
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Originally posted by: SHRADDHA2102

nice part... dadi turn rude... but this will help geet aka priya... to gain her memory back...


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Posted: 8 years ago
daadi word really hurt priya😭 
maan is finding her in all places but i m confuse how he come 2 know that she is in KM garden ðŸ˜‰
they are going on family dinner without daadi😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice part... dadi turn rude... but this will help geet aka priya... to gain her memory back...
Waiting 4 next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely parts priya felt a connection with maahi ever after dadi asked her to leave she couldnt go without seeing her maan thinks she is his mishty n gone mad seeing her missing aww now they will go for dinner nice parts thnx 4 updates