RaYa SS :Kaho na Pyar Hai part 13updated on page 18 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

part 12
thank you so much first of all for continue the story. .. it really a good that u back finally... so now moving on next... on story thanks to KK she called Priya I thought they would hide it from her to save her as Ram's life got destroyed by Ashwin but they actually considered their live n bring back Priya kn home... AK did right thing to telling whole truth to Ashwin's dad I forgot his name sorry... but he decided to sand Ashwin away but will be be quite after all this I don't think so I guess he will back fire... let's see time will only tell... OMG Ram knew abt he has become drug addict but AK asked him to choose between Priya n drugs he chosen Priya hope her love n family support bring back old Ram soon... now waiting for next update plz do continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
as krishna ji said Ram will able to give out his addiction of drugs for Priya and every member will help him so is his father.
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Posted: 9 years ago
kavyaa...where r u? update kyu nahi kar rahe ho?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello frnds I know I am very late, and I am so sorry for not updating but now I am updating.

Here is next part Hope you like.I am sorry for mistakes.

Part 13

A new day with a new promise for Ram to get out from the mess that is going nowadays in his life. Ram is following everything that is suggested to him for leaving the habit of drugs. He spent time with his friends and in office also, He try to keep himself busy.

Slowly slowly time passed and now ram is fully recover and life is going smoothly for all and dadi also come to live in KM.

One fine day in temple dadi meet someone in temple and they talked for sometime.

Dadi to person : I want to ask something from you.

Person : ji please say na what I can do for you??

Dadi : I am thinking that agar apki beti ki shadi mere bade pote Ram ke sath ho jaye toh...if you don't have any objection.

Person : Arrey ye to hamare liye badi khuskismati hogi agar hamari beti apke ghar ki bhau bne.

Dadi : isme mere pote ki photo aur biodata hai agar apko pasand aye toh.

Person : ji bilkul and ye meri beti ka biodata and photo .

Dadi : apse milkar acha lga agar umeed krte hai bachoo ko ristha pasand aye?????

Person : ji bs ab toh yhi ichaa hai.

They bid bye each other amd leave for respective home.

In Kapoor Mansion

Dadi : Ram...Ram...Krishna...yha aao .

Ram and Krishna ji come.

Ram : ji dadi boliye kya hua hai.

Dadi : mene tera rishta pakka kr diya hai.

Ram : totally shocked...WHAT???

Dadi : ha yhi decide hua tha a kit ere liye rishta mein tay krugi.

Kishna ji : but Ma ji...??

Dadi : kya hua???

Ram : ha dadi decide ye hua tha ki rishta aptay kregi but mene kha tha ladki mein pasand karuga or rishta apt ay krogi.Mein nhi kar ye shadi ap un logo ko mna kr do.

Dadi : ek baar dekh toh le???

Ram : jb mujhe shadi hi nhi krni toh dekh kr kya kruga. I am sorry Dadi.and sit on couch.

Krishna ji watch it and shocked to see priya photo.

Krishna ji : Ma ji yhi hai vo ladki...

Dadi : ha Krishna tum batao kaisi lgi isko toh pta nhi h kuch dekha hai nhi aur shadi nhi krni theek hai mein mna kr deti hu.

Ram : ha please ap mna kr dijiye and give phone to Dadi.

Krishna ji : Ram ek baar dekh toh I am sure tujhe jarur pasand ayegi.

Ram : Come on Maa u know na... fir bhi...

Krishna ji : sternly Ram see just oknce...

Ram : ok give it to me and he see just once to photo and look toward his dadi and maa and say dekh liya bs mujhe ye ladki... hold on he again see the photo and smile broadly pasand hai.

Dadi : kya kha tune tujhe ye pasand hai khi tu majak toh nhi kr rha???

Ram : hug his dadi arrey nhi dadi I am serious.Mujhe ye shadi krni hai.IN his heart he say mein toh kb se wait kr rha hu.

Krishna ji: mene kha tha see it once.

Ram : thankyou Maa and dadi I love you.and leave from there.

Krishna ji : Ma mujhe apse kuch baat krni thi ...

Dadi : yhi na ki Ram is ladki ko pasans krta hai.

Krishna ji : ji but how u know.

Dadi : Rishabh already told me and I decide to make this marriage happen soon.I don't know why u were waiting????Tum Amar ko bta dena...

Krishna ji : ji and leave from there.

Ram listen this and go to rishabh room he was still sleeping.

Ram wake him up.

Rishabh : kya hua bhai mujhe kyu utha rhe ho???

Ram : hug him thankyou Rishabh you told dadi about me and Priya and you know what dadi fix our marriage.

Rishi : wah bhai congrats...chalo ab bhabhi aa jyegi toh ap mujhe jaldi toh nhi uthaoge.

Ram : Blush very hard chup kr so ja tu.

Rishi : oh bhai u r blushing abhi se hi...

Ram : bs kr so ja and leave the room.

Ram come to his room and call priya.

Ram : hello priya...

Priya : hiii...

Ram : yr tumhe pta aj kya hua dadi ne mera rishta fix kr diya.

Priya : What?????

Ram : hmm...

Priya : tumne kuch bola nhi????

Ram : yr mein dadi ko kaise mna krta mene ha bol diya.

Priya : wow aur ye news dene ke liye tumne mujhe phone kiya right.

Ram : controlling his laugh haan...

Priya : tum...baat mt kro mujhse...Ram tum aisa kaise kr skte ho u know I love you

Ram : I love u too priya but dadi...

Priya : tum baat kro na dadi se.

Ram : nhi kr sakta na...

Priya : toh mujhse bhi mt kro and cut the call.

Sudhir ji call everyone in hall and tell them about marriage proposal.

Sudhir ji : beta yha aao yha baitho.

Priya sit she is already very disturb.

Sudhir ji give her photo she see it but she didn't say anything.

Sudhir ji : thik h beta tu mujhe soch kr bta dena take ur time.

Priya leave to her room and put the envelop on table.

Ayesha : di ap itna kya soch rhi ho Kapoor's key ha se rishta aya ha ap usme bhi soch rhi ho vo bhi pta kaun hai.

Priya : kaun...

Ayesha : Arrey div o hi jo apki class mein ek irritating sa lgta tha apko but now u fall in love with him.

Priya : shocked...Ram...and seethe photo...Oh...to apka rishta aya hai.Hmm abhi batati hu apko toh wait bhaut mja aya na mujhe preshan krne mein ab dekhna mein apko jindagi bhar preshan krugi.

Priya : Papa mujhe ye rishta pasand hai infact mein apko batana chathi hu ki ye ram hai hum ek hi class mein padhte the and now I also do my job in kapoor industries.

Sudhir ji : I know aj ram ki dadi ne bataya mujhe bs mujhe is baat ka bur alga ki meri beti ne mujhe nhi bataya hum toh ache dost the na beta.

Priya : I am sorry papa.

Sudhir ji : its ok beta.You are happy na very Happy Papa.

Shipra ji : give sweets to everyone and Shudhir ji call at Km and tell them that they are happy that this marriage is happening.

Dadi : ji mein jaldi hi pandit ji se baat krke apko bta dugi engement ke liye.Mein chthi hu yeh shadi jald se jald ho now I cant wait anymore.

Sudhir ji: ji jaisa apko theek lge.and hang up the call.

Ram get ready for office and after breakfast he leave little early for office.

Ram call vikram and ask him to come office early.

Vikram also come early Ram tell him about his marriage fix with Priya.

Vikram : congrats dude...Lekin ek bta Ram.

Ram : kya?????

Vikram : Ashwin??????????

Ram : vikram yr mera mood mt kharab kr abhi we will talk later about him.

Vikram : ok.

After sometime office staff start come and everone come but priya didn't turn up till now.

Ram is getting restless.

Amar ji is observing him and he call Krishna ji

Krishna ji : ji...

Amar ji : apka ladla beta office kyu ata hia kaam krne ya apki hone wali bahu se milne.

Krishna ji : ap bhi na ab kya hua...arrrey aj uske liye itne bda din hai khush hona toh banta hai na.

Amar ji : ji jarur ap bole toh coffee date fix kr du inke liye.

Krishna ji : is se achi baat kya ho skti hai.

Amar ji : thik hai toh mein rishabh se baat krke arrange krta hu...apke ladle bte ke liye.

Amar ji call rishabh and ask him to call ayesh and tell her to take priya to venue and u do arrangements and take ram with you.

Rishabh : jiii I will do that.

He reach Hotel and tell them to arrange a romantic coffee date and call Ayesha and tell her about plan and to bring priya with her and he leave for office.

AT KI

Rishabh enter in Ram's cabin and tall him to come with him but ram deny when Rishi mention dadi he leave with Ram for office.

I think it is enough for now I type this now only I am so sorry for so much late.Sorry for mistakes.

Plz like and do comments.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvusakshi

kavyaa...where r u? update kyu nahi kar rahe ho?

i am so sorry for not updating here is update hope you will like...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update.
So the marriage is finalised.
Coffee date !!!!!!!!
Eagerly waiting for your new update.

Thanks for the pm.
Edited by Sakshiashu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb kavya but next part jaldi dena plss
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
But time plzz raya more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update...
dadi finalized marriage...
hope no more Ashwin
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow..mast update. thanks for pm. so finally marriage is fixed by dadi. Raya r happy. we r happy. next update jaldi Karo.

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