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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update. beautifully written. loved it.
maaneet are thinking of each other. both are at peace after long time.
they both understood that opposite person is also in pain like him/her.
feeling sad for geet.
is maan going to meet geet in office...
waiting for next update:-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
very nice part
maan n geet going through same pain n loss

waitng fr maaneet meeting
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Posted: 8 years ago
Each has their own shares of pain.
Nice ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Geet told elders about her thinking
Feeling sad maan lost everything one by one
Waiting for next update 
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Posted: 8 years ago
congrats for new ff
part 1-3
nice updates...
maan n geet both are in pain...both are alone...
maan is married to ragini but both are so far...
geet n maan both lost their baby...so much pain...
maaneet met but chehra nahi dekh paye hope phir se mile but pehchan payenge kya!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update loved it both were in pain
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Posted: 8 years ago
hey 
new reader
nice concept
loving to read it
update soon ...
waiting to know 
how will story goes forward???
 
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: harmeenchawla

hey 

new reader
nice concept
loving to read it
update soon ...
waiting to know 
how will story goes forward???
 


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: envi

Nice update

Geet told elders about her thinking
Feeling sad maan lost everything one by one
Waiting for next update 


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Posted: 8 years ago




Part 4

He feeling unknown calmness, happiness today...after losing daadi and own child...he always feel his soul died...but today he feel little strange...why he smiling without any reason...

He remembered in old days he always smile like this...but after knowing daadi have cancer...one by one, he lost in darkness...

But why today, now I have nothing left for lost...

Yes, now he feared with happiness...after happiness always knock on the door i.e. sadness...

.

Maan don't think more

Sayad yaha ki hawa mein kuch khas baat hai

                  ***********

.

Geet : sohan ji

Aaj sb bilkul time pe kaise

Sohan : delhi se boss jo aa rhe hai

Suna hai

He is very punctual...and want same with the employees

Geet : hmm

.

 

Everyone busy in checking the files and owns self... Yes own self, mostly girls ...

Geet : nisha

Your eye linear faila huya hai

Nisha : what

Oh no

.

Geet tu ye file smbhal

Mein apna make up thik krke aayi

Geet : ye nisha bhi na

Bilkul typical ladkiyo ki tarah hai

.

.

Sayad mein bhi thi kbhi asi

.

She said to own self and get busy in work...

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Geet : tasha where is TDS file

Tasha : madam yhi thi

Geet : really yhi thi

Toh kya usse

Ye table kha gyi

Ya fir chair

.

I want file in next five minutes...

Tasha: yes madam

            *********

Geet going to conference room taking files, she lost so self in checking the papers of file and collide with someone...due to sudden collide she lost balance and files fall down , before she touch floor...he held her in own secure arms... Due to fear she closed her eyes tightly...his voice make her open the eyes...

He : are you ok Miss

Geet ; thank you

He makes stand her properly and left into conference room... She collects the files then goes behind him and asks.

Geet : Mr.

Aap yaha kya kr rhe hai

.

He sees towards her, his gaze making her uncomfortable...

Geet : dekhiye

Aap ko jisse bhi milna hai

Mujhe bataiye

.

Par aap yha ase

Conference room mein nhi aa sakte hai directly...

.

He : kyun

Tasha enters in room running...

Tasha : madam file

Sorry for late

Geet : hmm

Now you go

Tasha : good morning once again sir

And sorry

He : hmm

Geet : sir

She mummer, but its loud enough to hear...

He : tasha you may go

Tasha : yes sir

He : hello Miss

Geet : geet

He : hello geet

Am Maan singh khurana

Owner of this Company

Geet : sorry sir

Wo mujhe pata nhi tha

Really sorry

Maan : pata bhi kaise honga

Jb mein formally sbse bahar mila

Tum missing jo thi

Geet : sir wo mein bs file

Maan : for today its enough

Now show last two years project finance detail

Geet : ji

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Both lost in work... firstly she show one completed project detail, then two ongoing...he check randomly some bills, she explains all detail, calculation of service tax, deposited tax details... He happy to see her work...

Maan : good work geet

Here we going to start one more project soon... uski details mein tumhe thodi der mein mail kr dunga

I want all papers ready in one day with quotations...

Geet : ok sir

Maan : last time mein jb aaya tha

Tum nhi thi yaha

Kbse join kiya hai tumne

Geet : sir two years

One year as Assistant accountant

Aur jb sir gye

Maan : ok

Now you leave

And sent HR & admin department head

Unse khehna

Jitney bhi new joining hai

From previous two years

Detail leke aaye sbhi employess ki

Geet : ji

          *******

Geet : its 2'o clock

Oh god

Time ka pata hi nhi chla

.

.

Tasha : madam

Aapka lunch

Geet : tasha baad mein

Tumne kr liya na lunch

Tasha : ji

Geet : now you go

Make c form lists

Tasha : ok

            ********

From past two hours she continuously reading the mail and making paper according this... She sits for few minutes and closes her eyes...

Darkness is better from that light, where we smiles for society but nor for own...

Ye andhera khi acha hai

.

.

What happening to me

Kuch pal ki mulakat us anjane se

Kyun baar- baar meri ankho ke saamne aa rhi hai

.

.

Hello geet

Am Maan singh khurana

Owner of this Company

.

.

Inki awaaz us ajnabi se milti zulti hai na

.

Sayad ha

Aur sayad nhi

.

Geet waqt km hai

Aur kaam bhut

               ********

Maan : sohan

Appoint any one secretary for temporary basis...

Sohan : sir temporary basis pe kaun join krna chahenga

Maan : fir tum staff mein se hi kissi ko appoint kr do

For short period

Jo bhi ye kaam karenga

Usse extra bonus mil jaayenga

Sohan : ok sir

Mein kuch candidates short list krta hu

Yaha ek baar sbse discuss kr leta hu

Maan : wo tumpe depend krta hai

Mujhe parso tk ye kaam complete chaiye

Sohan : ok sir

              ********

At 7 o'clock

He going toward lift and notices one cabin light is still on... He enter in cabin and sees geet lost in work totally...He can see, she looking so tired and little pale now...

Maan : geet

Geet : sir aap

Maan : tum is waqt yaha kya kr rhi ho

Geet : sir

Wo kaam

Maan : tumne time dekha hai

Geet : oh its 7

Wo sir time ka pata hi nhi chla

Maan : now you go

Baki kaam kl kr lena

Geet : ji

Maan : if you want I can drop you

Geet : thanks sir

Mein chali jaayungi

Maan : hmm

            ********

Pari : mom

Bhabhi aa gyi hai

.

Baat kro na

Mom : geet

Tumse ek jarrori baat krni hai

Geet : ji mom

Khiye na

Mom : mujhe 10 thousand rupees chaiye

Geet : kya huya mom

Achanak itne paise

Mom : pari ka college manali trip jaa rha hai

Geet : pari

This year possible nhi hai

Abhi toh maine Tumahri College fees bri hai

Aur ghar ka expense

Pari : dekha mom aapne

Bhabhi ne mna kr diya

Aaj bhai hote

Toh kya wo apni gudiya ko kissi bhi cheez ke line mna krte

Mom : mujhe pata hota geet

Tumpe hum boz hai

Toh mein apni job kbhi nhi chodti

Geet : mom asa nhi hai

Pari ki fees ke liye

Maine 40000 rs already loan liya hai company se

Aur salary toh almost home expense mein

Aapki medicines mein

Aur  bhi kitne kharche hai

Gahr mein

Mom : bs yhi sunana rh gya tha ab

Geet : mom aap hi dekhiye na

Trip kitni mehngi hai

Mom : 5000 hi toh maange hai college walo ne

Geet : par aapne 10000 kha abhi

Pari : bhabhi nyi jagah jaa rhi hu

Aur bhi toh kharche hai

Shopping nha kru mein kya

Aur aapke liye bhi toh kuch laayungi na mein

Kyun mom

Mom : geet tumhare pass ye week hai

Tum kr sakti ho ya  nhi

.

Nhi toh mujhe hi kuch krna padenga

Geet : mom aap kya karinge

Mom : kya kr sakti hu mein

In hatho mein bs ye sone ki chudiya hi toh bchi hai mere pass

.

Jo bhi tha

Wo sb toh dev ki padhai aur uski shaadi mein lga diya

Geet : mom please

Mein koshish krti hu

Mom : hmmm

              ***********

Precap : do ajnabee fir se milenge

 


Edited by priya_21 - 8 years ago