New TS: Mit Gayi Dooriyan Last part pg 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys..
i was getting bored and thought to write a ts on the upcoming track i.r, the cupboard scene and then about their feeling which includes ishita confessing her love properly..
hope you like it...

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Mit gayi dooriyan

Ishita was shocked to see raman locked up in the cupboard. As her amma insisted he came up to the room to call him up and she heard his voice shouting for something she thought she was hallucinating...

Insita (st) How can raman be here he said it will be more one week before he comes back.. Ravan kumar aapne mujhe pagal kar ke rakha hai.. mujhe ab aapki awaaz bhi har jagha sunayi de raha hai... he voiced out loud...

Raman who was trying to ask for help as he was locked up in the cupboard all was sudden stopped when he heard her speak. He noticed she was speaking to herself and what he heard he couldn't help but smile. But it soon was replaced by anger.

Raman: Pagal madrasan mein sach mein yaha hun... Ishita yaar cupboard ke andar

Ishita who heard his voice now again whined

Aiyoo murgan yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe... Raman aap jaldi aajao na mein aapko bahut miss kar rahi hun...

Raman however shouted loudly: Ishita yaar mein cupboard mein hun tumhare khayalon mein nahi... darwaza kholo na... and started banging the door..

Ishita who clearly heard his voice now turned towards the cupboard and saw that someone was banging it and heard raman's voice...

Raman aap... aap cupboard mein kya kar rahe hai... aap yaha kaise aapne toh kaha that 1 more week na phir... she rushed to the cupboard...

Raman: Yeh KBC tu baad mein rak aura b mujhe idhar se nikal.. I cannot breathe yaar...

Ishita : ek second and se tried opening the cupboard but saw that it was locked...

Are raman cupboard toh locked hai she was shouting so that he can hear...

The family members who were in the hall heard her shouting and came up

Toshi: are Ishita ki hoye puttar tu itni chilla kyun rahi ho..

Ishita : Are mummyji raman cupboard ke andar locked ro gaye hai...

Toshiji: Oye tu yeh ki keh rahi hai... Raman yaha kab aaya

Raman: Are maa mein aapko baat mein batati hun ab mujhe nikalo yaha se yaar

Amma: Aiyoo Raman meine tumhe bathroom mein rehane kaliye kaha than a toh tum cupboard ke andar kyun chala gaya...

Raman: Amma mein sab bataa dunga... Ishita nikola na yaar yaha hai...

Ishita: haan abhi nikalti hun.. she turns to simmi... Jaake mera bag neelu se lakhe aana usme hi key hai..

Simmi: Han abhi layi and she went to get the bag

Raman do minute simmi bag laa rahi hai...

Raman: mein us neelu ko tho nahi chodunga.. kyaa zarurat thi cupboard lock karne ki.. usko naukri se nikaal dunga..

Ishita: Aap shaat ho jaao na raman...

Toshiji: Oye madrasan addressing to madhvi... tujhe patata raman aaya hai idhaar..

Madhvi: Mera damad mujhse kuch nahi chupata.. rumba nalla kanna usne hi mujhe Ishita kon idhar bhejne ke liye kaha tha.. she started off to tease toshiji..

 but before it started simmi came back with the bag.. Ishita immediately took out the key and tried opening the cupboard however, the key got struck and when she applied force it broke..

Ishita: Aiyoo murgan key to toot gaya ab kya ab kya karein

Raman: Are tumhara dimaag kharab hai kya.. kuch kaam toh dhanka sa nahi karthi

Ishita: are isme mera kya galti hai agar key tooth gaya.. aap na mujhe har cheez keliye tane marna hi hai

Raman: agar tu aisi harkate karthi rahegi toh aur kya karein

Ruhi and adi both interrupted in between

Agar aap dono aise hi jagda karthe rahenge na toh papa aap bahar hi nahi aayoge

Ishita: Are ha ab kya karein

Romi: bhabhi mein abhi jaake chabiwale ko lekhe aata hun

Romi gets the lock person and he opens the cupboard... As soon as he opens it raman rushes out for fresh breath... the family members are all smiling seeing him after so long..

However, as soon as he comed out his eyes only notices Ishita standing holding the crutches... and he smiles but soon replaces it with his usual angry face out of annoyance.

Ishita: aap theek toh hai?

Raman: Haan theek hun...

Ruhi runs and hugs raman: Papa.. pata hai mein aapko bahut miss kiye... ecven adi runs and hugs him mein bhi aapko bahut miss kiya papa... thank god aap jaldi aagaye...

Raman also hugs them back repeating the same... the they move to sit down in the hall

Toshiji: Lekin raman tut oh 1 afte baad aane wala than a tho itni jaldhi?

Raman: Papa who kaam khatam ho gaya toh socha sabko surprise du idhar aake...

Simmi: Bhai sab ko surprise ya Ishita bhabhi ko surprise huh... he teasing chips in

Ishita blushes listening to this and raman for a second goes speechless

Raman: chup rahe tu mein sabko hi surprise dene aaya tha..

Romi: isliye aap ne bhabhi ko akele bulvaya than a room mein

Ishita could do nothing but blush whereas raman also went red..

Oye hoyee dekho bhai kitne laal ho rahe hai aur bhabhi bhi... Bhai apne inta miss kiya Ishita ko har din toh kitne ghante baad karte the infact hume toh ek baar bhi call nahi kiya...

Raman: tu chup rahega... nahi toh chatta khayega mere se... he said blushing litt;e

Are bhai aap kyun inta blush kar rahe ho...

Ishita who was profusely blushing howver quipped in between

Raman aap ka meeting inti jaldi kaise khatam ho gaya aapne toh kaha who log nahi honge 1 afte ke liye toh

Raman: Who jaane se pehle hi katam karke jaana chahte the toh humne socha jaldi hi karlete hai taaki mein wapaps india aa sakhu...

Ishita: oh acha.. sab ache se hogaya na

Han sab ache se hogaya.. bas kuch papers sign hojayega toh hum log shuru kar sakte hai yaha..

Ishita: Acha hai

Simmi: bhai hum sab bhi baite hai yaha.. sirf Ishita bhabhi nahi... she again started her teasing

Ishita blushed and excused herself back to the room...

Are are Sharma gayi.. and they all laughed at her expense.. however two eyes were busy gazing at each other trying to fill up the missing days... oblivion to everyone present.. both drowned in each others eyes raman sitting on the sofa and Ishita standing near the stairs...


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Will be continued 

Part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/122783407


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sush...
wow dear..
It was so cute...

Haha... Raman didnt scold her here instead he actually smiled as he saw her standing...

waah waah...
so cute...
Amazing... Continue soon dear.,.
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superb update
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Sorry for being kate sush...

Super se upar part
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Wow sushu ,kaam time mai soch kar update be keya .. :-)
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So sweet sweetheart...
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awesome update
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