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Nice chapter. Liked Meera and Mohan's interaction. Mohan is opening up little by little. Loved the way arnav was teasing Khushi :-).
Nani, Amma and Bua Ji are a three amazing ladies - with so much heartbreak immersed into their lives yet they prove life goes on, you learn to smile and live .. I do keep on wondering if each of them are thinking the same thought about Khushi but afraid to voice it...Whatever Khushi and Arnav decide to do.. I hope these graceful ladies retain their friendshsip. A support system so strong comes once in a while..Khushi fights her emotions with such a strong will...but there is not despair at her failing but almost childlike glee, hence why she reminds her self act like an adult !!Mohan has inherited Arnav's heart of gold.. It's admirable to read how with such ease he tells Meera to call his Papa as Papa as he has bestowed half of Arnav to her.. Most children would not share toys without persuasion. He's the real hero of this chapter :-) Meera brings the best out of him and he has the most to lose if Meera returns home..."'In one moment we make a decision, the next moment presents a second chance to rethink that decision..and then comes the point where we have to stop thinking about the what ifs..."
When reading your story I have to remind myself repeatedly - it's a story..yet the characters feel so real, they hurt we hurt, they cry we cry , their happiness is ours too...So take a bow for such creativity... Engaging your readers - I also give credit to Choti desi and Chokri ASR - their stories too bring their charcters alive. You read the words and walk away thinking this could be me or you...What would we do?Happy Mother's Day !!
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