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@fugitive this was really awsome. Loved it.
I was hoping Raman would know of the truth soon. U put it very nicely,
N i loved Ishitas side of confession too ☺️
Thank u 😊
Originally posted by: shalz_123
Anusha cudnt sleep till u updated..wa konked offf..loved it. Deatil tmrw. Love u...
Anusha
What were you worrying about? That was so well written. You kept in on the current track, and then brought in her confession and their consummation at the same time. Thats how I always thought it would go - that they wouldnt wait once they confessed 😳 😳
Loved the song too - went so well with them missing each other. And he finds out she was sleeping with his shirts. Awww.
Trust Ravan Kumar to get all angry again when she missed his calls - thank you Toshi for letting him know.
Loved it yaara. At office so cant do the emoticons for you, but LOVED IT.
Originally posted by: yhmmylife
Ann very good 👏 if you can produce in one day too good 👏👏
I liked that you showed separation tadap on both sides. Him missing her and ordering idili samabhar from 'sarvana bhavan'.is there one really there in nj? Him realizing something is wrong.Good toshiji told the truth I wanted puttar 'our hero' comeback and bajao param, not subbu 😆.After his comeback 'roj ek he shirt or alag alag' funny very funny.🤣Best was last line 😳☺️
Originally posted by: vidya_prasad
@fugitives123
hey AnushaWonderful piece of writing dearin fact i would say the best confessionvery sweet take on this lovely songishita hugging his shirt...aww"Same shirt everyday or a different one for each day"...this cracked me up😆
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