IshRa SS- Forever and ever after_A NOTE (Pg 72)-The End (Incomplete) - Page 2

Congratulations on your very first story in this forum. I am so glad that you put this up.

Come again, will you? You aren't good with words, you aren't good with expressions, and you aren't consistent enough, yada yada... The thing you've put up doesn't talk in your defence, opposes you ferociously... That was so good. So GOOD! And the fact that you jotted this down in some mere hours is commendable.

The mystery is there, the apprehension is there, the angst is there... This was one of the most intriguing part for a first chapter that I've ever came across.

Everything was picture perfect between them, then what made their worlds shatter suddenly! They're tearing themselves apart. Of course, Subbu-Shagun is the reason. Morons!

I can see this thing coming in the show itself. So, this is quite precise.

PS1: Aww... I'm special you say. And I am having adrenaline rush, again! I can't resist flattery... Uff!🤣

Now, you'll face the consequences, you'll be editing if I write something someday.

PS2: Regular updates hun?!

PS3: There was a serial synonymous to this, and that totally sucked. No offence meant to anyone whatsoever. So, I am hoping you change the title. Or, better you can replace that bad memory with good memories of this SS.

PS4: Only one emoticon in two long post by Shalz... How very phenomenal is that!🤪

Ae Loh let me do the honors...

Oh Yeah, did I say I Love You🤗

Originally posted by: yhmmylife

Res

Awesome Shalz 👏👏

What lie did subbu tell 😲 bcoz of which this mess is there.

Raman will not leave shagun.

But first he has meet Ishita and clear the MU.

Update fast 😃

I liked how you used yesterday scene in the your SS.

Originally posted by: beckysharp

Shalz, baby. Reserving for comment !😛

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Shalz, babes, if you ever say you don't have the talent to write I Will take the next flight to Kolkata and smack you on the head ! Beautifully written ! Eagerly waiting for the next update ! Don't make us wait for long !