Ishra ss:my first love (updated part 28-pg78 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start
really liked it :)
Please PM me if u can
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Welcome to the forum Pari
Wonderful start 
I think Raman is in love with the same girl in the photo - Just a guess
Well continue soon
Waiting for Ishita's entry 
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Mein ne kabhi nahi socha tah ki meri writing ko itna responses milenge
Thnq so much guys for all d cmnts and likes
Thanq al for ur encouragement
Love u al
Scrol down for d nxt part
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<font size="2">Part 2

Toshi ji"kaisi hai puttar?"

Raman was silent, he could not understand what his answer was,his heart was saying not to loose the oppurtunity but his mind was warning him not to be selfish.Not knowing what to say the only words he got from his mouth are "unki taraf se kya jawab hai ma?"

Toshi ji "toh iska matlab tere taraf se ha hain"

Raman "ma mein ne aisa kab kaha ?jo mein ne poocha hain uska jawab dijiye"

Toshi ji"unki taraf se bhi ha hain puttar"

Raman"kya?".Raman was shocked,surprised,elated,confused and what not.

Toshi ji"haan puttar, iss rishte mein sirf tumhari aur us kudi ki haan ki jarurat thi,us kudi ne bhi haan keh di ab tu ne bhi haan kehdi toh bas rishta paka aaj shaam ko ladki dekhne chalenge"

Raman"aaj shaam ko?"

Toshi ji"haan puttar,mujhe pehle hi patha tha ki tujpe mera emotional drama kaam karega isliye mein ne pehle hi un logon ko tayaari karne keliye kehdiya"

Raman"ma aap din ba din choti banti jarahe ho"

Toshi"meri shikaayat badh mein karna. ab jaldi jakar tayar hoja"by saying this toshi ji goes from raman's room

Raman sits on his bed thinking about the past hour events,he can't understand what his state was...was he happy?...yes he was,was he sad...no he was definitely not, he got the answer but he was confused...yes,he got his answer,he was confused...he can't understand why did she accept the proposal?,he had many questions
Was she forced by any one? or Was it her own decision? If yes then why?
He opens a folder in his cell in which there were photos of his first love,his jhansi ki rani...he opens it and watches them.it was his daily routine,by seeing the pics he went down to the memory lane</font>
FLASH BACK:

Raman 2 mahine mein humara final year complete hone wala hai lekin ab tak tu girl frnd maintain nahi kar raha hai,not done yaar came his frnd amit's voice

Raman"mein ne tujhe kitni baar kaha hain yaar mujhe ye girl friend ke matter mein koyi jald baazi nahi karni, mujhe aisi ladki chahiye jo zindagi bar meri saath rahe"

Mihir(raman's best frnd) "toh chalo hum vo ladki tumhare liye doondh ke denge"

Raman "arrey duffer,voh koyi cheez hai kya jo tu mujhe doondh ke dega,girl frnd doondne se nahi pyaar karne se milti hain"

Amit"toh karle pyaar"

Raman"pyaar koyi cheez nahi hain jo chahne se ho jaye,pyaar ek ehsaas hai jo kabhi bhi kisi waqt bhi hosakta hain aur mein us samay ka intezaar karunga jab woh ehsaas mujhe bhi hojaye aur us ladki ka bhi jo mujhme voh ehsaas jagayegi"

Mihir"kya patha bhai voh ehsaas tumhe ko aaj hi hojaye aur voh ladki tujhe aaj hi mil jaye"

Raman"tu kabhi nahi sudhrega,humesha duffer hi rahega"

Amit"par voh bhi sahi hain raman,shayad voh ladki tumhe mil jaye aur waise bhi aaj kuch 1 year ke students join huwe hai, shaayad udar voh ladki tujhe mil jaaye chalo mere saath "by saying this amit and mihir pulls raman with them to the ground without hearing to him.

They show many girls to Raman for which raman gave them many deadly looks and many reasons for not liking the girls

Amit"agar aise hi chalta raha toh mujhe nahi lagta tujhe voh ladki kabhi milegi "

Raman"dekha beta mein ne kaha na girl frnd doondne se nahi milti

While raman was saying this mihir saw one girl running or we can say running by snatching her frnd's cel phone...she was in white chudidhaar,her hair open and was laughing while running

"bhai voh ladki kaisi hai?"asked mihir while pointing towards the girl.Raman and Amit turned to see the girl

Raman"sundar hai"

Mihir"wow bhai kam se kam kisi ladki ko toh beautiful kaha,toh ye ladki fix"

Raman"nahi!!!!!! sundar hona kafi nahi hai,ladki ka dil bhi sundar hona chahiye"the very next moment he saw the girl running towards his side and bumps into him while seeing back.Raman holds her through her waist and saves her from falling down,...raman sees her hands which caught his shirt tightly so that she doesn't fall and her eyes which are shut tightly out of fear and murmurs sorry without opening her eyes...raman chuckles at the sight and the next moment he heard her frnd asking "ISHITA tu teek toh hai na"for which the girl in his arms gets up and starts running again without even seeing his face,the next moment he hears his frnd asking

Amit"kaisi hai?"

Raman"kaun?"

Mihir"voh ladki"

Raman"cute hai"

Amit"toh fix?"

Raman "bilkul nahi!!!!!... cute hona kafi nahi hota manners bhi jaroori hai jo usme bilkul nahi hai, usne mujhe takar mari phir bhi mein ne usse bachaya lekin usne thank you bhi nahi bola"

While talking all this they saw a crowd near by they went there jo see what was happening

Mihir"bhai udhar dekho voh ladki"
She was shouting on a guy and went away when the guy asked for a sorry from the girl beside her, Amit asked a guy what the matter was for which the boy said that the guy was teasing a girl and the girl was crying when she saw that she scolded the guy and made him to say sorry and made sure that he don't tease any girl.the trio left from there

Mihir"toh kaisi lagi bhai"

Raman"kaun?"

Mihir"voh ladki"

Raman"achi ladki hain"

Amit"toh fix"

Raman"bilkul nahi,dekha use jhansi ki rani hai aisi ladki mujhe kabhi set nahi hogi,ab yeh topic chodo aur chalo class agar late honge toh voh devil humein maar degi"the trio leave to the class...in class raman can't concentrate on his class the only reason for his distraction was ISHITA yes the only thought he gets in his mind was her beautiful face,her laugh when she was running,her cute antics when she fell in his arms and her jhansi ki rani avtar

Raman s.t"yeh tujhe kya horaha hain
raman baar baar tujhe wahi yaad kyu aarahi hain,hey maata rani yeh kya horaha hai"

Raman"mihir"raman called mihir silently so that he does not get caught by his lecturer

Mihir"kya hai?"

Raman"woh...woh...mein tujse kuch poochna chahta hoon"

Mihir"kya?"

SILENCE came the shout of the lecturer

Raman"woh...woh...mera ek dost hai use baar baar ek hi chehra dimaag me araha hain jab woh chahra usse yaad atha hai toh automatically uske chehre pe muskaan athi hai,woh kitna bhi koshish kare voh uss chere ko dimaag se nikaal nahi paraha hai,aisa kyu ho raha hai?"

Mihir"bhai woh banda pyaar mein hain "

Raman"PYAAR?"shouts raman

RAMAN OUT OF THE CLASS,RIGHT NOW came his lecturer's voice

"Raman... Raman" came his mother's voice by which he came out from his memory



Part 3 on pg 5
Edited by pari... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Thats it guys
Need ur encouragement
Sry fr mistakes if any
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Loved it Pari dear 😊
The update was super good.👏
Good job.Flashback was nice👍🏼
Especially that line "Toh fix" was hilarious😆
Continue soon dear.
Eagerly waiting for how the story unfolds
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Good Start
Waiting for the update
Possible PM for the next update
Maya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
It was awesome dear...Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Hahahaha! Awesum update! Raman class ke bahar! Bahut baadiya! ;-)

Cont soonnn! Lovedd itt!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Hi pari,so well written.raman and ishita past is very intresting.continue soon.loved it.