Diii new ff
omggg i m sooo happyyy
bt u just broke my heart
sid kar kya raha hai yaha???? Anddd woh bhi ridhima's bf nd soon to be hubby
huh huhhh
vagao isse :////
Originally posted by: mishti_forever
amazing ...
Anji, nikki, muski, ridzi... woowwHero jaldhi anewale hain.. balle balle...waiting to read more...
awsm one
superb start.
lud it
plzz cont asap.
thnx for the pm
t.c
Originally posted by: palakajenian
hey ayuuu...
new story ohho
interesting concept but why kasu instead of kajen *pout* but anyways ur choice
the cs is interesting
part 1 is superb loved it
sooo armaan comes back to India
loved how shashank nd padma loves nd care for armaan like their own son
i think armaan loves ridhz nd is upset abt her wedding that's why he is behaving like this
first part is marvellous eagerly waiting to read more of it
continue soon nd do add me to ur pm listhey palak...hahah sab ko banner mein dikat hain huff... koi nahi ...i will palak.. but i guess mein ne tumhe remove hi nahi kiya tha... hihihi...and ye i know... armaan ki bonding padma se toh achi thi hi serial mein par mein ne shanky se bhi kar di aapni ff mein hahaha
Originally posted by: megha_kajen
awsume start aayu...love the concept..
AR best friends. that's nice... but yeah kyaaa.riddhima is getting married to sid... and pyaar bhi karti haiusse... I wish sid ki jagah armaan hota...but agar armaan kahin nazar ni aa raha...that means he's is not happy k riddhima loves someone else..aur voh usse pyaar karta hoga...m damn sure... about it...bechra ...anyways aur voh riddhima se Milne bhi nahi aaya since one week...he returned...and Now riddhima is getting tense...but I really hope AR ek ho jaaye... instead SR...let's see what turn AR life will take...and waiting to know real rzn behind armaan ignoring everyone...byetcmuahh :*
Originally posted by: little_angle
idhar bhi res res
like im with u par..
pr ika main jldi krungi unres...
Im back... Maine nahi socha tha main itni jldi unres krumgi.. Pr after reading the character sketch.. I couldnt stop myself...
Ridhz with sid..!!! 😲 😲
nahi ye nahi hosaktaaa...
Are wahh shishank n padma treate armaan as their son..
AR childhood frnds.. Armaan sabse pehle ridhima se milta hai.. N even uske behave pr leave deke uske sath time spend.. Pr isbar kya hau..??one wk n kisia se nahi mila vo...
Ridhima ki mariage with sid toh nahi armaan ke is behavious ki wja...
Armaan loves ridhima na..?? Haina haina haina..??
Jldi se update dooo
cant wait to read it further...
Love uuu
Originally posted by: Ruppkotha
U know maine pehle character sketch slip ki thi
Then after starting to read the story kuch hi der me ake character sketch padli
Seems like something interesting
Sab itna busy kyun hai.????
Kuch function hai kya????
Ohooo yeh to shashank and sadma hai
Jaise hi shashank said ladli ki shadi hai & boht dhum dham se hogi to pata nhi kyun yaad aya yaad aya
Zara pooch kya dil me mere subaho shaam hai
Bas teri bas teri dhoom dhaam hai
Bas teri bas teri dhoom
Then when they were discussing about their son
& said he miss his parents
waise yeh beta hai koan??????
lets see
thn pata chal yeh to armaan tha then ridz ki shadi kisse ho rhi hai
So maine charachter sketch padi
tab pata chalka yaha toh siyappa hoke beithe hai
i mean armaan is only frnd & sid is boyfrnd
i mean kuch to twist hai isme
well i have some guesses let's see kya hoti hai
But itna chota parttt
Kya yaar ayu ek to itna late upar se itna chota partt
not done yaar
jaldi jaldi ek badi wali part update dena
Waiting fot it
love u :*
Tc
Originally posted by: RihooHaws
Res
UnresHiyyaaa Aaayooo hey sisoooWaise toh maine already padliya but comment toh banta hainaa... shhh... ye secreat tha na sisooo aapne leak kar diya... shhh.. aise baat public mein nahi bolte... shhhSo here I come with my comment...Main charater sketch ke baare mein kuch nehi kahungi as main kabhi padti nehi hoon hahaha...Woh kya haina... I feel when we read character sketch that it releave half of the story hehehe... hehehhe aab aapto super smart ho toh kya kar sakte hain ... haha bttw mein bhi nahi padhti CS... hahahOkey now enough of idar udar ke baate wagera wagera...Now about the first part...Usse pehle congrats for starting another SS... Muwaahhh thank u thank uAb ismein toh humhari faida haina, humhe AR ke baare mein ek aur nayi kahani padne koh milenge hehehe...Accha chalo, bohot hogaya idar udar ke baate... heheheh aapne pehle bhi bola tha ye baat par flow mein bhul gai aapni baateon ki hhahahahYeh kiske liyeh itni tayyari ho rahi hai... shadi ho rahi hainLagta hai kissi ke liyeh bohot bada din hai...Chalo aage badte hai...Oh toh yeh Gupta house mein Shashank aur Padma ke ladli beti ki shaadi ke liyeh tayyari chal rahi hai...Ab pareshan toh hogi na Shashank, after all uske ladli ki shaadi hai toh sab kuch perfect karni hai uske liyeh...Lekin kis beti ki shaadi hai yeh toh batai nehi...Hmm aage pata chaljaenge right hehehe...yes right sab question ke ans aage padhne par milenga aapko so keep reading further...BETE??? Yeh kiske baare mein bol raha hai...Ab tu poochengi mujhe kaise pata Gupta's ki bete hai ya nehi...Hehehe, woh actually kya haina... Maine tohda tohda sabki character sketch padli :PIssiliyeh mere koh pata hai Gupta's ke two daughters hai...Oh toh Yeh in dono ke dost ke bete hai jo in dono ke saat rehte hai aur yeh dono apne bete maante hai...hmm naat toh liya nehi kissi ne...Koi nehi aage toh pata chalna hi hai hehehe...Waise yeh baat Padma ne bilkul sahi kaha...Ek bete baap se zyada ek ma koh apne dil ke baat batane mein comfortable hota hai...But kuch log dono ma baap koh dil ke baat batane hai kabhi if they are real closed like friends...yes that depend on the parents that how they bondwith their kids so that kids can share thing with them or they get scared in sharing.. hain na... ???Ufff, yeh dono toh sad hogayi...Ab yeh koan aagayi...Anjaliii... oh ho, isse kyun jaanna hai apne mom dad kya baate kar rahi hai...What if they were romancing :P kitna awkward lagega hahaha...Ab aise has mat... u know i m very romantic toh mujhe bas romance sujhte hai doh log saat hote toh :PAccha aage bado...hahaha sachi u know siso reading AR romancing even after kids grown up look soo romantic but if imagin parents doing same toh bahut ajeeb sa lagta hian .. hahahaYeh bete toh kissi se nehi mila...Aur nahi kissi ne uska naam bhi liya...Lagta hai tohda aur wait karna padega yeh jaanne ke liyeh yh hai koan...Ayye hayye, Shaadi ho aur tease na kare... Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya right heheh...Friends toh koi moka nehi chodenge if it comes to tease anyone in their gang...Ab toh mujhe pakka yakeen hai yeh heroine ki shaadi hai...Issiliyeh toh Nikki and Muski itna tease kar rahi hai aur heroine itna sharma rahi hai...Love the bonding of their friendship...yup i know frnd ko mauka chaiye.. vo mauke par choka marte ahin... ek chance mila nahi ki tease kar kar ke jeena mushkil kar deta ahin ahahhahaye ye heroin ki wedding hain ...Armaan??? Hero already waha hai???Means Hero ke baare mein baat kar raha ta yeh log pehle...I mean Shashank and Padma, also Anjali was asking about Armaan?? :OHero shaadi ki tayyar kar raha hai toh Riddhima shaadi kisse kar rahi hai :OHayye, yeh shaadi nehi ho sakteee... *Dramatically with hand on forehead...*hehehe, zyada hogaya kya...Accha aage badte hai over reacting nehi karte ehehehhain thoda sa... u see bollywood mein nahi aa rahi aap toh be normal na hahahahbeta armaan hain .. hero heroein ki shadi ki taiyari kar rha hain .. :PMeans Hero urfff Armaan is son of Gupta's who is staying with them...Cool... Aur Ridz ke best friend bhi hai...Oh ho, yeh kya baat huvi...Armaan ne toh kissi se nehi mila na baat ki...Lagta hai Heroine ke shaadi ke baare mein sunke hero koh jhatka laga...After all hero toh heroine se pyar karenge na...Hayye, sacchi mein woh Ridz se pyar karte hai????Okey okey aage bado, aise look mat doh... I know I m overreacting hehehe... hahahha sachi mein di... ye wala toh over ho gaya thoda sa.. !!!Ek hafte se Armaan waha hai but apne best friend se nehi mila...Pakka kuch baat hai jo Armaan apne best friend se mile bhi nehi...Uske shaadi hone wali hai aur Armaan ne usse mila bhi nehi... hmmm main abhi ke liyeh apne dhimag koh rokti hoon kuch aur sochne se pehle hahha...Armaan and Riddhima was good friends from childhood... Cool...Siddhant???? Riddhima koh usse pyar hogaya???Hailaaa, hero koh hote huve us Siddhant koh pyar hogaya :/Yeh Ridz sacchi mein andhi hogayi hai kya...4 saal se yeh dono saat hai :OAb yeh daffy koan hai??? Wah wah, yeh nick sunke toh mujhe Donal duck ki cartoon yaad aagayi hahaa...Anjali koh pamper karna matlab Atul hi hoga hahaha...Mickey??? Mickey toh Micky Mouse ke yaad dila diya...Mean yeh dono bhi in sabki friend hai... Cool...Lekin yeh Armaan koh huva kya hai...Accha hai Ridz ne socha woh baat karenge...i know mein ne bhi cartoon seache kar ke name rakhe the ye wala hahahahha ... i see mera ko yaad tha par time par name toung par nahai aate toh google helped ahhahaOMG, in dono koh bhi nehi pata Armaan aaya hai...Armaan kissi se nehi mila... Ufff, yeh ho kya gaya hai Hero koh...Shock pe shock mil rahi hai Muski aur Nikki koh...Hahaha Muski ki behavior dekh ke aisa lag raha hai Mickey Rahul hai...Ab Muski toh Rahul ke naam se itni chidti haina hahaa...Lolz, Niks ne sahi guess kya... Mickey ke saat saat Daffy bhi aaraha hai but Anjali ne kaha nehi hehe...Yaha Anjali and Muski khush nehi hai but Ridz and Nikki bohot excited hai yeh jaan ke woh dono aa raha hai...Muski ki gussa aasmaan chu rahi hai Rahul ke aane ke baad sunke hehehe...Arey wah, Modi bhi aa raha hai un dono ke saat...Means gang would be present under one roof...full gang comuing par i think gang ka jayada kam nahi rahe ga.. kuch hoga par pura nahi ... hahahahKhatam hogayi part...Kitna chotu hai yh part...But bohottt maza aaya...Awesome start Aayooo...Muwaahhh Love u...Continue super soon...Waiting to know what has happen to Armaan and AR moment...Take care <3chotu tha.. really now...mujhe nahi laga aisa kuch ...luv u sisooo
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