OS : Ragins Nachiket; The Father

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello friends,first time in my life i attempted this,i myself dont know if the outcome is good or bad.But i want you all to go through it and comment what you felt about it.

Looking forward to your response.Dont hesitate to criticize if you didnt like it.

Here it Goes :


Neil,Neil where are you? Pam comes to his room but she fails to find him.

Finally she sees him in the other room where he is holding a photo of his and Raginis along with the four children.Hearing Pams voice he immediatelykeeps that photo inside his pocket.

Do you even care for your kids?she enters the room while shouting at him.

What happened Pam?Why are you shouting so much?

Let me tell you my brother that your Ex wife slapped our elder son Ranbir for no reason.Im very upset because of it.I dont know what's her real problem is?why is she doing all this?why cant she stay away from my kids?I told her not to interfear in my 2 kids life but she never listens to me and hence i want you to go and tell her the same.

Relax Pam,im sure there is a reason behind it if she really slapped him.

I knew that you will support your Ex wife only without checking the true facts.Why dont you understand that she is playing games with you,your emotions and your kids.

Oh,please come on Pam,I am not going to trust you and Ranbir blindly this time.Last time i did and you both proved wrong in the end.That incident is a proof for me that Ragini is a very good mother.I unnecessarily that time blindly supported you and your son and went against her.I hurt her big time with my behaviour but she still cared for us and hence told shilpa to withdraw her statement so that she can save Ranbir.Indirectly she saved us and hence this time without checking the facts im not going to go agaisnt her atleast when the issue is about kids.

Since the day you arrived in India,i actually think you are not the same Neil,saying this Pam leaves the room in anger.

"This time i wont make the same mistake which i made last time,i will check the facts properly and only then i will take the necessary action if required.I know you are a good mother Ragini,you wont do anything wrong.If you slapped Ranbir,im sure he deserves it.You allowed me to do Kanyaadan of Nishi though i myself is very much aware that i have no rights to do that.But you still agreed to it just because Jigneshs family wanted us to do it together,hence you kept quiet.Im in a way thankful to you because i realised my responsibility of a father after Nishis marriage while i was doing her Kanyadaan This time your Nachiket will support you Ragini and wont disappoint you.Today i promise that to myself."

An Hour Later:

Ranbir,Ranbir,Come with me,Neil shouts at him.

But where we are going dad?

Follow me,i will tell you on the way.

Both of them reach at Raginis house.

Aarav,where is your mom?

Neil takes Ranbir,Aarav and Ragini inside Nishis room.

Ragini,i heard you slapped Ranbir,Pam told me sometime back.

Yes,i did but before you ...

Wait a minute Ragini,l have not finished yet.

I am aware of the real reason behind it.im not here to ask you any explanation that why you did that?im here because of some other reason.

i know what you did was right,its was totally Ranbirs mistake,but i actually cant believe what these two are upto?If you dont mind,i want to talk to Aarav in your presence.

But let me begin this with my son .

Yes,Ranbir,im very much disappointed with you and your acts.Let me tell you i just heard what you and Pam were discusiing in the room.I cant believe you are getting close to shilpa just because you want to take revenge on Aarav and Ragini?You both are equal partners in this crime,Its yours and Pams plan to get close to that girl and then ditch her.You havent learned anything from your last mistake tht you did during the accident?I will talk to Pam later about this but what are you upto? You are supposed to be the eldest brother who need to guide your younger siblings.I am ashamed after hearing all this.We will talk about this later,again infront of Pam once we reach home.

And what about you Aarav?I thought the other day when you were very upset and sad that no one is understanding you,i really thought there is some very serious problem and which you are going through and i really thought to help you in whichever way i can.But you are doing all this just for the sake of that girl?

Today in your life that girl is more important to you than your mother who did so many sacrifices for you since your childhood.I really thought you are wise enough to take proper desicions of your life,but im really sorry.This is the age where you need to concentrate more toward your career rather than a girl.Its the time where you need to complete your studies first,settle in a job and then take care of your mother,who single handedly raised you and Nishi all these years without thinking about herself.Im very disappointed with you too for this foolish actions you are doing and not giving enough importance to your education.im not going to help you with any financial way unless until you first complete your education and fulfil your mothers dream.

Ragini who was standing in a corner was quietly listening to all this.She is very surprised and speechless seeing her Nachiket behaviour.All of a sudden she is seeing a responsible father of her kids in him.She was genuinely feeling very happy because she knows that the importance of Father espicially if the kid is a boy because how much she can try but at such age you need a father who can guide his kids and she knew that Aarav needs him and his love,his guidance big time.

Ragini ragini,hearing the voice she came out of her thoughts.

I know Ragini that you may be upset with me for scolding your son like that,but i was just trying to guide him in whatever way i can.i didnt knew that day after Nishis Pagphere when he told me that he wanted to do some business and all neglecting his studies and this is the main reason behind it.I actually thought that the reason behind it was someting big becoz of which he took that nasty desicion.i agreed to help him that day as i was unaware of the background behind it.I actually wanted to discuss this issue with you in a day or two but luckily i heard theconversation of Pam and Ranbir.I really hope you dont mind me involving myself in your sons matter.

Not at all Nachiket,even i wanted to speak to you about this whole issue,the truth is i realised that at this age and stage of his life,he needs a father who can properly guide him.I tried my best,but it seems he is not ready to listen to me.Infact im very happy that you came forward and did this.I really hope you will be there for him in the future too whenever he needs you.

Ragini,We may have many problems between us but the truth is that which i realised that for the sake of our kids we need to keep our Egos, problems away and become responsible parents so that they can have good future.We have to do it and today i promise you that i will be there from now on whenever Nishi and Aarav need their father. I will see you tomorrow in the hospital.

Lets go Ranbir,i need to talk to you and Pam once we reach home.Saying this Nachiket leaves.

You take care Ragini and good night.

Good night Nachiket.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Pavan,
👏 for writing. And this definitely gives a scope to consider the changing roles of NR as parents in their kids lives.

The kids are in some mess or another, and it is only as parents that NR can tackle these.

Please continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Pavan...
Very Nice... Please Continue...👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The end????

No way! You have to continue this Pavan!
So refreshing to read of them as parents.. Waiting to read the next part of this :)


Well done! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay so from the comments i got your name, hey pavan :D
It was a beautiful side of NeiRa which we definitely want to see in the show, they being responsible parents, both aarav and ranbir need good guidance and only they as parents can provide it to them. Really brilliant piece of work!
Continue if you can :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved it, i so want NR and the kids to act as a family
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Posted: 10 years ago
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More more more please :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So Eloquent...Every word has come from your heart...I can feel that...

In reality this was the core theme of the promos..."husband and wife can divorce, not parents." This is what hooked me to watch this serial, not withstanding the fact that I'm not at all into soaps.

And you have brought it up in such a cool flowing style. 👏


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great Pavan, now we are all waiting for the next part. PLEASE. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was truly very awesome! Great idea this is...them sitting and discussing about their kids keeping aside their ego issues!
Please continue this if possible 😉

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