Broken Angel FF Update Pg 53- Complete!!! - Page 41

Originally posted by: pari0706

lovely how the last few parts were all about Ratan and her marriage...

loved how u showed that Ratan is like a daughter to Pratap... would have liked more Praja scenes but hey its still nice

waiting for your next story i am going to misss this one

Thanks Pari...I wanted the last chapters to showcase Pratap-Ajabde-Ratan scenes as they both have a parental role to fill in for her...I know everyone wanted Praja scenes but then the Ratan dynamic would have been a bit sort of tilted I guess...

Will try to give more Praja scenes in the next one😊

Originally posted by: realraul2307

Aww how lovely... you are such a great writer! I loved all your stories! Cant wait for your next

Thank you 😊

Great update dear. An awesome end of a super story.

Garimaaa !!!!!!! 🤗 Look, I know I have to un-res my previous post 😳...But this update is sooo beautiful ... I just could not keep myself from replying to this last update of yours, first !! 😳

Wow awesome update. Ratan got married . Amar loves gauri . Amar s like his father . When reading amar and gauri it remind abt pratap and ajab . Pratap and ratan scene were so cute . The beautiful ending . I thought amar will trap gopal for seeing gauri. Waiting for your next story

my god!!! wat an update.. 🥳🥳 u left me speechless as usual... 👏

Ratan's bidhayi was so emotional..

So when r u starting a new story?! 😉

Must say the update was really fantastically magical... 😊thnks for such amazing stories once again...

Originally posted by: vvishalini

Great update dear. An awesome end of a super story.

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: rinall

Garimaaa !!!!!!! 🤗 Look, I know I have to un-res my previous post 😳...But this update is sooo beautiful ... I just could not keep myself from replying to this last update of yours, first !! 😳

Oh My !!! What a beautiful update, Garima !!! 👏 I'm feeling sooo happy that I have tears in my eyes... I mean, after all the pain, the sadness, the misery, the hurt and several bereavements, everything took a 360 degree turn... You know, this last update made me so happy and emotional that I thought, Oh God !! Why did this story have to end ?? 😭The bond Ratan shares with Pratap is soo magical !! It's almost like a father-daughter bond ❤️... Ratan is the daughter Pratap never had 😳... Her bond with Amar, Ajay-Ajeet and Chandan and Gauri is also heart-warming !! 😃

And my my !! We have another couple in the making here, eh ?? 😉 Gauri-Amar ☺️... Gopal's presence between them reminds me of Ajab-Pratap-Tota triangle 🤣...

So our beloved titli, Ratan finally found her match in Aditya ... Spectacular !! The way you captured her emotions is just spectacular !!

Thank you soo much, Garima !!! You're such a talented person...you write such amazing stories that make us feel like we're all involved in them... your stories are so realistic that all of us can relate with the characters, we can feel their emotions, we can read their thoughts !!

Thank you, Garima for allowing us to be a part of yet another journey !!

I cannot thank you enough darling ! Please, please keep writing and share all your lovely stories with us here !! 🤗

Rinal yaara am speechless - itna saara pyaar Thank you!!!
It feels so good to know ki aapki stories and attempts receive so much of love, attention and that even an ounce of it allows you to feel all those emotions that I feel while writing them

Ratan was my star for this story - it started as Praja but once Ratan entered the pic I knew that she would go on to be the central person
I hoped somewhere that maybe even in history what would have happened if Ratan did not marry Pratap at all - what if she actually considered him as a father figure so I just went with what came to me
Amar-Gauri-Gopa triangle was taken from Pratap-Ajabde-Tota!!! They never really showed much of the triangle but I would have loved to see more of it but still am really glad you enjoyed reading it as much as I ahve enjoyed writing all of my stories

Next one is already rolled out !!!

Originally posted by: sita_rama

Wow awesome update. Ratan got married . Amar loves gauri . Amar s like his father . When reading amar and gauri it remind abt pratap and ajab . Pratap and ratan scene were so cute . The beautiful ending . I thought amar will trap gopal for seeing gauri. Waiting for your next story

Amar-Gauri were inspired from Pratap-Ajabde, next story is already out - check it out: Sakha Veer Tale

Thanks

Originally posted by: ApekshaM

my god!!! wat an update.. 🥳🥳 u left me speechless as usual... 👏

Ratan's bidhayi was so emotional..

So when r u starting a new story?! 😉

Must say the update was really fantastically magical... 😊thnks for such amazing stories once again...

Baccha meri pyaari baccha

Thanks a ton
New story is already rolled out - Sakha Veer Tale (check the link in my story ka sandook!!!)