ArHi SS: Timeless Love | Note P22 14/5 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
awesome update
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Thanks for the pm
Amazing story.
Loved this update. 
However its just the 2 parts where Arnav said those things to khushi wasnt written bt mentioned was a little confusing. 

Also 1st part was ok bt 2nd present one where it suddenly was a leap where payash are married.
then khushi went away for 1 yr n is now bck for vacations n Arnav saw nk hugging khushi n he told her tht this is nt her home so khushi went to mumbai. 

I'd have loved to hear what Arnav said instead of it just mentioned in brief. Arshi tiffs wud be interesting. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Really nice update :) 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
interesting update. I am loving the story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Fabulous parts...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Beautiful update
Loved both part  past and present
Can't wait to find out what happen next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Thanks for clarification😊 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
I absolutely love this collage style of writing!!! You are weaving a beautiful story!! 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Awesome update. I loved the way You're balancing between past and present. Though Khusum was happy for her sister, but the bubbling emotions in her was completely understandable. Arnav/ Ratna has feelings for Khushi/ Kusum but his anger overpower his feelings for her. Very interesting update. Looking forward to read more. Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
That was really a cool update. There are similarities between the past and present scenarios.