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Deepti...I did that with my aata yesterday!!
I ended up making bajji maavu (Bajji batter ?!) instead of chapati maavu (Dough) ...🀣🀣
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Originally posted by: Ashu25

One doubt after reading Hershy's rant πŸ˜†

WHY do we want to see the leads perfect in all possibilities and situations as soon as they seem to be in a relationship in a movie or books ??
I mean cant they be IMPERFECT till the end ?

I dont know...I m just expressing a doubt here πŸ˜•. No offence to anyone πŸ˜­

Cos when they are imperfect, there is a not-happily-ever-after... Which comes under tragedy genre... Not romance!! πŸ˜†
N the "not-happily-ever-after" in other words is called "real life".
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Originally posted by: swathi1990


Hey I am here Ashu...infact ready to burn 50 pages..ana enaku update venum...I am sooo eager for the update re...I want to know what will happen after the song...enaku therinje aganum...πŸ˜†

Podi...By the time Nish comes up with an update, we can burn this down πŸ€£
Ennakku venum update aana m ready and willing to wait cause I know something spicy and steamy is up πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Coin Toss


Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan
Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan



It was like there was no connection between the nervous half drunk edgy
28 year old and the now bold, husky voiced singer that emerged from the golden folds of the saree

Her eyes were cemented to Rakshasan's he sat in the corner seat of the sofa, she sat in a cane papasan chair,
her knees drawn up, like she was sitting in DII on her divan, she placed her arms across the knees and placed her chin on her choora...

Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe
Main Khud Ko Chupaao Kahan

She lifted her head and leaned back, slowly sliding her legs off the chair, putting one leg over another, arms across her chest,
she tapped gently... with no shruti box for tune or rhythm...
The Carnatic singing involved sure audible taps... on her knee as she sat cross legged in this she tapped with her left hand on her right elbow

NOT ONCE GOING OFF KEYπŸ‘

She repeated the opening lines softly
Her voice quivered at the end...

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan
Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe
Main Khud Ko Chupaao Kahan
Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan


Her voice was deep-er and huski-er than usual because of the two glasses of wine she had downed.
He looked at her like the apartment was empty and they were the only two in it... like he had never heard her sing before
Like she sang for him and only him...

Yeh Pal Hai Apna To Is Pal Ko Jee Le
Sholo Ki Tarha Zarah jal Ke Jee Le
Pal Jhapakte Kho Na Jana
Chooke Karloon Yakin Na Jane Yeh Pal Paaye Kahan
Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan


Sukrit watched R&B's face carefully from across the room, Sakti exchanged a quick look with Sukrit... they looked down instead of the couple
Something told them they were intruding a private moment



Baahon Mein Teri Yun Kho Gaye Hai
Armaan Dabe Se Jagne Lage Hai
Jo Mile Ho Aaj Hum Ko Door Jana Nahin
Mitado Saari Yeh Duriyan
Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan
Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe
Main Khud Ko Chupaao Kahan


Her face was flushed and her lips dry when she ended it... she gulped down her wine like it was water
Uproarious laughter followed a thunderous applause...

Sukrit:wasnt religious... was it?

"No" said II unable to tear her eyes off her dude

"You must teach me sing?" M begged

ONAKKU DAANE? KANDIPPA DI
KATHU TAREN VAA... I WILL MESS UP ALL THE LYRICS SO BADLY
AND MAKE YOU SING IN FRONT OF A HINDI AUDIENCE

II WAS REMINDED OF THE THREE IDIOTS COLLEGE AUDITORIUM SCENE

She giggled quickly

Angela: You dont think you are good

II returned to earth... "Umm... sorry?"

Angela:U are lost arent you?

II:I was just thinking of something sorry

Romaine wanted to give her a hug "U are very talented" he said haltingly in English

"Thanks, Ive just had too much practice" II muttered sheepishly...

Pierre and R&B chatted about work... II poured more wine and sipped slowly... it felt good in her throat...
As it went down though it lit a fire... she hadnt eaten much only eggplant basically,
her chholey was drenched in hot sauce, her rice tasted like chalk when she saw M...

It was close to 2 AM... The French women were asleep in her hubs' arms...Sakti was wide awake and Angela... partially

Alex's girlfriend wouldnt stop texting... M and her were best friends it looked like... to II

Will was the first one to get up... "See u Monday?" he asked

R&B nodded, shaking his hand and giving him a dude hug

Angela bent down to give her a hug, she stumbled getting off her chair, R&B held her elbow... "Ok?"

"Mmm" she muttered... at one of the R&B's the one closest to her
He held her by her waist

NOT OK U FOOL, U HAVE THREE HUSBANDS NOW?
ONE'S NOT ENOUGH?
EPDI? HOW?
SHE QUESTIONED... TURNED AND PEERED AT HIS FACE

THERE IS ONLY ONE NOW!!

SHE SAW ANOTHER SET OF LONG WIRY ARMS, AND THE YELLOW THREAD ON ANOTHER RIGHT WRIST

"Is there two?' SHE ASKED RAKSHASAN

"Of what?" he asked softly

Marie reached up to hug her

She said something in French to R&B

"She thinks you are the best singer she has ever listened to live" R&B translated

"In the whole entire world?" she asked... like SHRAVU

R&B translated that to French for Marie

Marie laughed loud and screechy "Oui oui" she said

"I like that" II said huskily nodding

They all universally appreciated the food and said they would cook for her whenever she wanted to visit.

"Only vegetarian?" II confirmed

Most nodded joyfully... the ones that didnt looked confused wondering what they would make for her

II picked up a cup of her kheer and chowed down as the people began to leave

Sukrit: Stay in shape man!!
R&B chuckled

II:I am not that great! (shy)

Sukrit:That was fantastic!! I shoulda known when he said he was gettin married... it cant be just anybody

II blushed furiously

Sakti:Suk said you guys would fight a lot is that true?

II:I DONT... not sure WHO he is referring to (II lied glibly)

SaktI: SEE!! I TOLD YOU! SHE LOOKS SO INNOCENT!! (She punched Suk)

Suk: Hey its all second hand garbage... he told me

R&B smiled his half smile


Alex nodded and shook hands

His girlfriend gave her a cursory nod... II just smiled and said "Thanks"

M hugged her "Sing lesson?"

"Ummm yes"

"She is singer (thats) why u like her" she pointed to II and giggled at R&B

R&B smiled


R&B read a text Romaine sent commenting to Alex about it in French


"Buy green tea for me" M nudged giggling

"Probably not" II said firmly... and smiled as an afterthought

They waved as they left... she shut the door and pinned him to the back of it went on her toes and kissed him

Tasting his lower lip, pausing and doing it again... like she was familiarizing herself with his shape... "II"
 he began... "Shhh" she said "Kitna bolte ho" she scolded

He smiled... as she gently undid, one, two three, buttons... four five six... seven... and let the shirt hang loose

"Great!" she cursed when she saw the vest... stripping the sleeve by sliding it off the shoulder, he was too tall

She told him that "U are too tall"

He nodded... when she was done, she slumped against him, his groan reached her ear... she gently found the edge of his vest and pulled it over his head

It messed up his hair completely... she gently gave him a finger kangi... and went on her toes and kissed the tip of his nose
"Hey" he greeted her holding her face in his palms... calming her

"I am not drunk" she declared defiantly

He nodded biting his lower lip to hide a smile

She stepped back and slid a finger under the burnt gold/reddish hued blouse and pulled the safety pin off and handed it to him, he lunged for her, she ran to the bed panting

"Nope" she said swaying by the footboard... gently brought her braid to the front and undid the restraint at the end and unfurled the locks

He stood with his hands in his pockets

He brought a hand out trying to feel her silky locks she stepped back, wobbly...

"Not drunk?" he thought

She gently pulled the folds out from her belly holding them like the ends of a Japanese fan

He sucked his breath in, hopin she would drop them

"Bad idea" she said tucking them back in

She put her foot up on the bed, giving him luscious views of the ankles and calves and undid the string of silver first on her left
then on her right, her hair enveloping her like a sheath of black silk

"U can have this" she said

He saw the tube like toe rings... she never took them off... like the yellow cord around her neck

She took her solitaire off her ears and handed them to him, each time she took a step back and he took one forward.. they walked alongside the foot board, her pallu a long flowy mess

He watched through dry lips, in anticipation... holding back with great difficulty, on the verge of losing his sanity... yet waited patiently for her act to end

It would take him less than a minute to haul her and put her on the bed... and get his way with her

"No da" "Please" she would beg... but this this was infinitely more arousing...

Yep! it was... she was now playing with the knot of her underskirt, his heart skipped a beat as he waited for it to drop taking the silky folds of the saree with it

But she fondled it and let go...

She fondled the knot on her halter neck blouse also...

"Bad idea?" SHE ASKED hoarsely
She reached the end of the bed... the end of the length, her back hitting the bedside drawer, and she tipped the lamp, he lunged to catch it

She did and set it straight

She stepped back and leaned on the two foot wall between the bed and the French balcony window, she reached and turned off the lights... the living room light glowed at a distance

The food and silverware and plates were left as is...

The rain outside made it seem like the streetlights were melting into orange juice on the window...
it trickled down and pooled into Coke on the balcony floor

He reached to touch her... she shrunk... and moved...

"Take off yours first" she ordered, arms across her chest

He fumbled deliberately... she reached and pulled, it was the snap kind... it echoed across the room

He stepped out... she withdrew her hand... unwilling to look at his arousal

He reached for her hand

She leaned on the freezing wall... the heat inside was turned up to 72F the walls  were still cold
150 yr old stone walls...


"Which one first?" she asked fondling her waist knot and her neck knot alternatively

"U want my vote?" he asked huskily

UVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME" tone

"Mmm.. I somewhat think so" she croaked


"Both?"

"Not a choice"

"Neither" is" she said

(Dont undo either? which a---- will pick THAT? he wondered)

"Coin toss?"
 he offered as unsteadily as he could

She smiled... ...
He opened the drawer and picked up a coin  and tossed...
"heads" he called

"Tail" she called

It was indeed Heads...☺️

He yanked both together...as she gasped, when he picked her up


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harshita27

Cos when they are imperfect, there is a not-happily-ever-after... Which comes under tragedy genre... Not romance!! πŸ˜†
N the "not-happily-ever-after" in other words is called "real life".


WORDS OF WISDOM πŸ‘
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swathi1990


Simple re...If they are sooo perfect, then the story is boring...

If they are always imperfect also, story will become boring...imperfection to perfection makes sense and is also interesting to read...

He is getting thoda thoda perfect no beech mein πŸ˜•πŸ˜•
Bechari Harsh ne  iske peechey jaan lagadi thi...ab sudddenly kya ho gaya πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Time do re usko...He will talk it out πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harshita27

Cos when they are imperfect, there is a not-happily-ever-after... Which comes under tragedy genre... Not romance!! πŸ˜†
N the "not-happily-ever-after" in other words is called "real life".

LMAO πŸ€£
I know...I know...
Thoda time de re...Sudhar jaayega bachchca...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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NISH...
Brutal...We are not allowing you to sleep now...NO NO NO...NOT after giving this chapter...


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EVIL EVIL AUTHOR SAHIBA πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­
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Posted: 9 years ago
Well I can ho to sleep now as spring vacation is over and now bak to same
old routine
M and singing and what does she mean
by he married her bcoz she sings , did his
mother also sang
This couple is going to fight and love each
other they r unlike old traditional peps
So we should b ready for the roller coaster
ride with them. Sit and enjoy