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Hi Guys⭐️ How r u?

Firstly, I would like to thank all you guys for liking and commenting about the prologue and character sketchπŸ€—



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I have changed the story title fromARSHI'S LOVE STORY to ARSHI'S NEW GOLDEN WORLDπŸ˜‰

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Thanks for all and Good luck for your exams. Edited by ALUJNA21 - 9 years ago
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Lovely banner and name
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nice start dear... Keep your spirit High, even no one read your story.. Its the key for Success... Don't get pissed Coz dear no one cares... 😊
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Originally posted by: Sarangnunmul

nice start dear... Keep your spirit High, even no one read your story.. Its the key for Success... Don't get pissed Coz dear no one cares... 😊


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Thnxx 4 the PM dear!!! continue soon...all the very best 4 ur exams!!πŸ‘πŸΌ
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So here's I am presenting chapter-1...😎

                                               


 ARSHI'S NEW GOLDEN WORLD β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ


           CHAPTER-1

                                       PART-A
At SHANTIVAN:

It was 6 'o' clock in the morning. All family member's gathered near mandir in shantivan.
 Arnav came near mandir and greeted every one saying"Good Morning".Every one replied to him.
Aarti Singh Raizada started doing puja.She sang aarti song 

Om Jai Jagadish Hare
Swami Jai Jagadish Hare
Bhakt Jano Ke Sankat
Daas Jano Ke Sankat
Kshan Men Door Kare
Om Jai Jagadish Hare

Jo Dhyaave Phal Paave
Dukh Bin Se Man Kaa
Swami Dukh Bin Se Man Kaa
Sukh Sampati Ghar Ave
Sukh Sampati Ghar Ave
Kasht Mite Tan Kaa
Om Jai Jagadish Hare

Maat Pita Tum Mere
Sharan Kahoon Kiski
Swami Sharan Kahoon Kiski
Tum Bin Aur Na Dooja
Tum Bin Aur Na Dooja
Aas Karoon Jiski
Om Jai Jagadish Hare

Tum Pooran Paramatma
Tum Antaryami
Swami Tum Antaryami
Paar Brahm Parameshwar
Paar Brahm Parameshwar
Tum Sabke Swami
Om Jai Jagadish Hare

Tum Karuna Ke Saagar
Tum Paalan Karta
Swami Tum Paalan Karta
Main Moorakh Khalakhami
Main Sevak Tum Swami
Kripa Karo Bharta
Om Jai Jagadish Hare

Tum Ho Ek Agochar
Sab Ke Praan Pati
Swami Sab Ke Praan Pati
Kis Vidhi Miloon Dayamaya
Kis Vidhi Miloon Dayamaya
Tum Ko Main Kumati
Om Jai Jagdish Hare

Deen Bandhu Dukh Harta
Thaakur Tum Mere
Swaami Rakhshak Tum Mere
Apne Haath Uthao
Apni Sharan Lagao
Dwaar Padha Tere
Om Jai Jagadish Hare

Vishay Vikaar Mitaao
Paap Haro Deva
Swami Paap Haro Deva
Shradha Bhakti Badhao
Shradha Bhakti Badhao
Santan Ki Seva
Om Jai Jagadish Hare

Om Jai Jagadish Hare
Swami Jai Jagadish Hare
Bhakt Jano Ke Sankat
Daas Jano Ke Sankat
Kshan Men Door Kare
Om Jai Jagadish Hare


and gave aarti for god and goddess idols present in mandir . All took aarti .

After doing puja all are gathered near dining hall for having their breakfast.
Hariprakash[the servant] and Aarti served breakfast for everyone.
After having breakfast everyone gathered at living room.
Pranav was busy in getting ready for going to office. Aarti helped him to wear his coat and fixed his tie in their room.

Shyam is also getting ready for going to court.Anjali went near shyam to sk if he need's anything.

Manohar is also busy in getting ready for going to office while manorama is busy in doing her make up.

At living room Akash,Arnav and Devayani sat on sofa.
Arnav is reading THE HINDU NEWS PAPER.
Devayani and Akash started talking about the puja she need's to attend this evening at neighbour's house.She asked if arnav too wants to join them.He said that he is not interested.She said ok.

Pranav and Manohar went to office. Shyam went to court.
This is the daily routine of member's in SHANTIVAN.
Arnav is enjoying his summer vacation's with his family.

How is part-A guysπŸ˜›

Hope you guys like it😊

Please hit like button before reading part-B guys😳

Part-B: SCROLL DOWNπŸ˜ƒ
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                              PART-B

At Khushi's House:

Khushi is in her dream land[THE GOLDEN WORLD]. She is searching for her prince.While she is searching for prince she has been seduced by the nature in the golden world.The trees,plants,waterfalls,garden's all are fascinating.She entered into a forest which is so colourful and filled with beautiful flowers.She walked along the trees and reached near water falls.
It's breathtaking scenery.


"Aww!!It's amazing",she exclaimed. She went along the water falls which lead her to a den.She entered into the den. It's really so dark.She got scared."Devimaya, why did you make me enter into this den. This place is so scary"she murmured
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She decided to go back but she lost the way.So,there is no other option for  her rather than going forward.She is walking.After 10 minutes what she look took her breathaway.

"Khushi...khushi...open your eyes"payal yelled.
Khushi felt someone is calling her and turned back. But there are no sign's of any person calling her.
She felt someone shaking her and shouting her name.
Suddenly she opened her eyes and to her surprise she is in her room resting on bed covered with her favourite pink bedsheet.

payal:"Finally khushi,You woke up!"she exclaimed.

khushi:"What happened jiji?Why did you spoil my beautiful dream"she asked payal and yawned.

Payal: "What! I spoiled your beautiful dream? Khushi now it's been 12 'o' clock.It's afternoon khushi"she yelled at khushi which made her feeling to sleep run away.

khushi:"Oh no...!It's afternoon now?"she asked payal.

payal:"Yes khushi. Now get fresh up and come to dining room for having lunch"she said and went to living room.

Khushi got up and freshened herself.She went to dinning room.Payal served food for khushi and herself. They both started having lunch together.

Payal:"khushi you were talking about some dream when you woke up. Tell me what is your dream",she asked khushi.

Khushi told payal about her dream.She explained every thing.

payal:"So I am the one who spoiled your beautiful dream"she sighed.

khushi:"Nothing like that jiji. You were concerned for me that's why you woke me up. It's not your fault. Don't feel sad."she said.

payal:"ok. Tell me what did you see that took your breath away?"she asked excitedly.

khushi:"who know's jiji? For knowing that again I have to sleep and go to the golden world",she said huskily.


How is the update guys?πŸ˜›
I hope you guys like this update.😊

Press like button and do comment about chapter-1😳

Let me know your opinion about this update.⭐️


PRECAP: SCROLL DOWN
Edited by ipkkndkasr - 8 years ago


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