#1 Asya ff-unique love part 1-17 *thread links in the index* @pg 1

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surbhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey guys !!! i'm new on IF
i'm gonna write a ff on our beloved asya.wow!!!
i'm s0 excited and i'll appreciate some good comments.😊
so here goes

index:   part 1 - page 1
            part 2 - page 1
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811

            part 3 - page 2
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&TPN=2

            part 4 - page 3
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&TPN=3

            part 5 - page 5
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&TPN=5

            part 6 - page 8
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&TPN=8

            part 7 - page 11
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&TPN=11

            part 8 - page 14
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&TPN=14

            part 9 - page 20
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&TPN=20

           part 10 - page 32
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&PID=121363023&#p121363023

          part 11 - page 39
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&TPN=39

          part 12 - page 40
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&TPN=40

          part 13 - page 54
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&TPN=54

         part 14 - page 63
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&TPN=63

         part 15 - page 74
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&TPN=74

         part 16 - page 86
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&TPN=86

         part 17 - page 99
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4318811&TPN=99

thread 2

thread 3

thread 4.

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                        😃charactersketches😃

zoya: well zoya is zoya!! but in this ff zoya pretends to be cool but she cries in the night remembering her love for Asad. she is so bossy when in office.she has her best buddy Eric.they both lives in NEW YORK.

Asad:he loves his family the most and a man of words.he is most devoted to his work.he is handsome with all six packs and all!!! he works for microsoft and is soon gonna shift in NEW YORK with his family.

Nazma: she is a very bubbly girl like she was in the show.asad call her TAMATAR and so does zoya.yeah zoya and nazma are very good friends since zoya left for USA.
they talk a lot on their video sessions.she's soon gonna join st.jose colledge in NEW YORK same as Eric.

Dilshad: she loves her children very much.she is after zoya to make her her daughter-in law.she loves zoya as her daughter only and talks with her on vedio chat seldom.

lets see what happens when asya meet in NEW YORK.

guys shud i continue? you all have to support me coz i've never tried this before.do comment to let me knowww!!!!!!😳😊
Edited by suearmaniac - 8 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice concept😉

Asya in Newyork

will be waiting eagerly for first Chappy😃

Update soonishhh😳

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

yeah i'll write soon.thanks 4 encouraging me

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

    credit- Niya_789

                                           😊part-1😊

It was another tiring day in her life as she walked on the beach.The sun was setting and her hairs were set open all surrendered to the wind.It was just her type of day.breezy.she threw the ipod in her bag and sat in her car.she turned on the radio but then turned it off.coz whenever she listens to any song she begins relating the lyrics to her life.she was home in half an hour.her home was big!!!!really the type of house the boss of the ZOAD company shud own.her cell rang and she picked it up
ERIC:hey zoya!!!!are u home?
ZOYA:yeah just got in.
ERIC:okay so how about dinner tonight?
ZOYA:cool.what time and place?
ERIC:i'll pick you up at 8.
ZOYA:yeah i'll be ready. c ya.
ERIC:BYE!
it was 6 in the evening when her pc window enlighted.it was a call from India.her face also lightened and a smile broke on her face on seeing Dilshad.
ZOYA:phupi !!!!!!salam alikum!!!
DIL:alikum salam meri bacchi.tum kaisi ho?
ZO:oho phupi meri chodiye aap bataiye aap sab kese he?
DIL:hum sab yaha acche he.bas mujhe to tumhari fikr lagi rehti he.
ZO:to fir itni dur kyo hai aap mujhse ?[she said with a small pout]
Dilshad laughs on her cuteness.
NAZMA:yahi to batana he zoya ki hum sab aaj hi New York ke liye nikal rahe he.
ZO:kya???wow!!!!!!to aap log jaldi kijiye na.i want to see u all ASAP.
NZ:okay to bye 4 now.hum airport pe milte he kal.
ZO:sure.bye khuda hafiz tamatar.
NZ:bye.
The call was disconnected and she was so happy coz she was going to live with her phupi her cute tamatar and...and...ASAD?
she had butterflies in her stomach at the mere thought of him.she loved him afterall from her early ages.she doesn't knew that how will she face him after all those years of lonliness.she even didn't know how he is like in appearance coz she was only in 12th when she left India.
she was so happy that she is gonna live with all of them but left with a disturbing thought of going weak to put on a courageous face in front of all.
her cell rang and rang many times b4 she came out of her thoughtful state.it was Eric.she locked the doors and headed out with a smile on her face.

DIL:Asad beta meri baat to suno...beta..
ASAD:kya ammi aap chahti he ki me Ms.Farooqi se nikah karloo?why??
DIL:beta kyoki wo tumhare layak he aur hum sab se kitni mohabat karti he.i think she's perfect 4 u.[yes dilshad wud speak in english afterall they're gonna be living in USA]
ASAD [with a smirk]:right!!ammi aap samajhne ki koshish kariye abhi mai ready ni hu nikah ke liye.
DIL:mai tumhari ammi hu asad aur mene ye faisla kar liya he ki tumhara nikah zoya se hi hoga.
ASAD:ammi...vo..
DIL:bas isse aage mujhe kuch ni sunna.
she left the hall to pack.asad also left to his room to spend last moments in his room.from tomorrow his life wud be changed.his new office ,new house, new room is waiting 4 him in NewYork.
he thought about zoya how she looked 10 years back.all distraught on her parents death.there was no one to look after her and then his ammi brought her home.she lived with them hardly 15 days and then left for states with watever money she had.but the progress she made after all these years is worth appreciating.she was in constant touch with his tamatar and ammi.but how come there was not a single convo between them?then he thought that they doesn't use to talk even b4 when she used to live next to his house.she always came for playing with nazma or to talk with his ammi but they always stayed out of each others way.or was he the only one who never approached her?watever.he packed his bags and headed out to join an excited nazma in the hall.
ASAD:ready tamatar?[with a sly smile on his face]
NZ:bhaijaan!aap mujhe US me bhi tamatar kahenge?[she whined]
ASAD:ofcourse tamatar![he spoke with a grin which was short-lived coz dilshaad entered the hall with her bags rether looking angry]
asad cleared his throat and took dilshaad's hands in his and said:um...ammi vo ..i'm sorry.mujhe aap se aise bat ni karni chaiye thi
DIL:its ok.hum baad me baat karenge us baare me
NZ:kis baare me[she asked innocently]?
DIL:bata dungi baad me abhi chale ni to flight miss ho jayegi
ASAD:ji ammi chaliye

ZOYA: wow!!i'm so happy Eric.finally they're gonna be here.
ERIC: yeah from last 2 hrs u've been ranting abt this.i knw
zoya hit him on his arm and said:ERIC u do knw how much they mean to me.
they were back frm their dinner now in front of zoya's house.
ZOYA: okay so thanks for the evening.
ERIC:[coming out of his car door winked]anytime baby.
ZOYA:um...2 things.
ERIC: what?
ZO: 1 u are nt allowed to come at my house at odd hrs frm now coz tamatar ...sorry nz is gonna live here and second you r not to tell anyone that i love him.
ERIC:Huh? why?
ZO:coz m saying.live with that.
ERIC:r u mad??zo he's gonna be here after ages and u r backing out?
ZO:no m not backing out.m just not ready to disclose it to him now.please will you do as i say.?
ERIC:okay done.but u can't stop me frm flirting.[he winks]
ZO:yeah right you do wat you do with me but don't you dare harm my tamatar..um i mean nzma.
ERIC: TAMATAR!!!what does that mean?
ZO:tomato
ERIC:oh but y u call her that?
ZO:u'll see.bye gud night.
ERIC:'night baby[he kissed her on her cheeks and she does the same]
she went in her house.
ERIC:[while getting in the car]fine then lets meet u tamatar
he drove away with a smile on his face.

In the flight asad kept on thinking abt his ammi's proposal.he thought that zoya is nt that bad and she'll listen to him and understand his problem.he decided to talk to her that he'll live his own life and not interfere in hers and expected her to do the same.with a relief smile he dozed off to sleep.

zoya was so looking forward to see them all.specially him.how wud he look???how wud he talk??wud he talk to her??does he remeber her afterall he never bothered to say even a hey to her when she lived with them.these questions kept popping up in her mind untill she dozed of to sleep.

lets see what happens when asya meets?
guys please do comment and let me know hows it going.
feel free to criticise coz it'll help me improove.
comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by suearmaniac - 8 years ago

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ayat

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice 1 some thing unique

Looking forward to this story

Update next part soon

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suni_104

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Posted: 9 years ago

Lovely start
Asya in new york
Continue soon...

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

credit -
Niya_789
😊PART-2😊

She woke up with a smile on her face and quickly got ready to receive her beloved ones.she reached the airport early and bought coffee.she sipped on it patiently.soon she got busy on a call from her office.

asad's train of thought broke when he heard nazma scream and point to a very pretty girl busy on cell with a coffee cup in one hand.she was beautiful and carried a simple elegance.there was something abt her that he kept staring at her.she was dressed in a white shirt and blue jeans.she was gud heighted but still wore heels.her hairs were tied in a neat pnytail and her goggal rested on her head.[asad in this ff doesn't have issues with modern outfits]he thought'man!!she is so pretty'and then realised what he thought adjusted his collar uncomfortably.dilshaad smiled inwardly.
her eyes met with a pair of eyes already looking her way and in nxt moment she knew it was his eyes.it was him and he looked...perfect.her mind was blown by the fitness of this man.he was wearing a black shirt and blue jeans.she thought'he's hot.allah miya!!whats wrong with u zoya?stop checking him out.she broke their staring session.as soon as she was done with the call she rushed to hug her phupi.she said"salam phupi".dilshaad kissed her on her forehead and said"meri bacchi"
then she hugged an excited and waiting nzma and they mimicked english highclass meetings by pretending to kiss each other cheeks saying 'muaah muaah'.[seeing both the girls giggling imagine asad's hand already on his forehead 😃lolz!!!]
asad thought 'atleast wish her man where are your manners?'
ASAD:salam aalikum Ms.Farooqi
Zoya looked up surprised and said uncertainly with half smile:aalikum salam Mr.Khan.welcome to NewYork.
asad smiled at her and she was lost in the beauty of his dimples.she was brought back to reality when nzma spoke:chale zoya?
ZO:yeah lets go.
she put on her sunglasses and lead the way to the car.on herway she was thinking'allah miya wats wrong with you zoya?welcome to newyork?ur not a flight attender.pata ni Mr.Khan kya soch rahe honge mere baare me?'
she was again interupted this time by asad himself.he cleared his throat.
ZO:huh?
ASAD:GAADI ki dikki kholengi please.?
ZO:um..yeah i'll get the keys.
she unlocked the car and began putting luggage in the back.while doing that asad's hand slightly touched zoya and zoya was dazed by it the whole journey back home.

they reached home and everyone was amazed by the beauty of it except zoya.
NAZMA:wow!!!!!zoya tum yaha rahti ho?yahi tumhara ghar?
ZO:un huh.yahi he ab hamara ghar[she said smiling]
dilshaad smiled back.zoya showed them around and gave directions to everyone's room.
after half an hr everyone got freshenup and came for breakfast.they were surprised to see pizzas.asad looked at his ammi furously.
DIL:zoya beta hum pizza ...vo
ZO:oho phupi ye pizzaa to nazma aur mere liye he.aapke aur Mr Khan ke liye to mene aapka fav. kheera aur aaloo ke parathe banaye he.
NAZMA:zoya mujhe ni pata tha ki tum itna accha cook kar leti ho[she said taking a bite of asad's parathas]
ASAD:TAMATAR...[AND HE RAN AFTER HER]
zoya and dilshaad chuckles at them.
DIL:beta ye ghar itna bada kyo he...i mean tum to yaha akeli rahti ho?
zoya smiled and said:akeli kaha phupi ab aap sab rahenge na mere saath.
nazma came breathing hard and asad also joined them.
NAZMA:aapko pehle se pata tha kya ki hum yahi aayenge?
zoya was taken aback coz she was the one who insisted microsoft by her sources to post asad in Newyork.
she smiled coyly and zoya and nazma said in unison:zoya farooqi kuch b kar sakti he
they all burst out laughing.zoya's laughter was music to asad's ears.he kept staring at her.her eyes met his and he dropped his gaze embarased being caught.zoya's slight blush went unnoticed by everyone except dilshaad.she smiled fully and thought'hmmm interesting.allah mere bacho ko ase hi khush rakhna.

later in the afternoon nazma and zoya were watching a cricket match in hall. dilshaad was talking to some relative back in India INFORMING them they arrived safely.asad was working on his laptop and getting irritated by zoya ranting abt M.s. dhoni all throughout the match.
all of them tuned to look at the door getting unlocked frm outside.then a boy steps in.

who is this boy?any guesses?keep guessing untill nxt part.

sorry to leave you all at suspense but where is the fun in not having that?
i need comments please let me know how it is.silent readers do tell me my mistakes or gud things.please.
love sue😃

Edited by suearmaniac - 8 years ago

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Hafsa

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Posted: 9 years ago

hey!

nice concept!

loved it!

well written!

both partss!

Zoya in new york

Asad and family moving to new york!

Zoya and Eric love them haha

Dilshad gave Asad a proposal fro Zoya

Zoya loves Asad

Part 2 was amazing!

do PM me!

continue sooon!😊

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tinunaik2069

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awow it was super update

Continue soon

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

thanks 4 the lovely comments

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