Originally posted by: TanjoreGirl
Hey Anu ! Where did u go yesterday. Was just waiting for u.. Knew that u wud love this chapter
aaw i slept actually by 10:30 EST then got up at 4:30 and read but i hate typing with my ipad so then got up again and then typed ..
so touched π³Missed u and ashu yaar...
Originally posted by: swathi1990
Are you going to make Ranjan innocent Nish ?
Economy & Imagination
It surprises me how much the Dude can talk when it comes to proving a point to II.π² And she for one would never take it lying low.π‘ They argue with vengeance and they make up with even more vengeance. πIt is as though their passion in love making is fueled by the duel! π
As long as this is the case, who's complaining? What I like about your writing is you never make it just a puppy love story, even though he follows her like a puppy. He maintains his ground and so does she!
The Monet, their sanctum of love!β€οΈ This will be sorely missed in Paris,π unless there is one there too. He wants no competition, even in II's imagination.π³ Sam tho badi badmaash nikli. Evil Sam!π
Forgotten
By far, the most heart wrenching and touching part till now. It is in such parts you even outshine yourself Nisha. You are the most consistent writer I have seen in terms of the quality of each part, a slice of their life (I don't even want to call it an update anymore), still, there are some moments which you bring out with such depth, honesty and realism, they are testimony to your immense talent as an outstanding writer, one who can delve deep into the psyche of each character, into each context and surrounding , make it their own before orchestrating them to your tune like a masterful conductor. Superb !πππ
We know of II as a very kind hearted person, who would not think twice to thank minion or write a note of gratitude to Mrs.Sagar but what she felt for Ranjan was more than just compassion. She felt care, duty and love as for her own family member. Ranjan has found someone probably only after Savita, who is going to look after him and care for him genuinely without any strings attached. From the time she runs back to check on Rajan till she comes back home thinking still about his khichdi was totally awesome. Loved each and every line and can totally connect to it like Amma and Appa were my parents. Now ,after this part I am sure Ranjan is everybody's pet, not just Anu's. πEveryone is going to gush over him and pester you till you vindicate him.π
Economy & Imagination
It surprises me how much the Dude can talk when it comes to proving a point to II.π² And she for one would never take it lying low.π‘ They argue with vengeance and they make up with even more vengeance. πIt is as though their passion in love making is fueled by the duel! π
As long as this is the case, who's complaining? What I like about your writing is you never make it just a puppy love story, even though he follows her like a puppy. He maintains his ground and so does she!
The Monet, their sanctum of love!β€οΈ This will be sorely missed in Paris,π unless there is one there too. He wants no competition, even in II's imagination.π³ Sam tho badi badmaash nikli. Evil Sam!π
Forgotten
By far, the most heart wrenching and touching part till now. It is in such parts you even outshine yourself Nisha. You are the most consistent writer I have seen in terms of the quality of each part, a slice of their life (I don't even want to call it an update anymore), still, there are some moments which you bring out with such depth, honesty and realism, they are testimony to your immense talent as an outstanding writer, one who can delve deep into the psyche of each character, into each context and surrounding , make it their own before orchestrating them to your tune like a masterful conductor. Superb !πππ
We know of II as a very kind hearted person, who would not think twice to thank minion or write a note of gratitude to Mrs.Sagar but what she felt for Ranjan was more than just compassion. She felt care, duty and love as for her own family member. Ranjan has found someone probably only after Savita, who is going to look after him and care for him genuinely without any strings attached. From the time she runs back to check on Rajan till she comes back home thinking still about his khichdi was totally awesome. Loved each and every line and can totally connect to it like Amma and Appa were my parents. Now ,after this part I am sure Ranjan is everybody's pet, not just Anu's. πEveryone is going to gush over him and pester you till you vindicate him.π
Originally posted by: TanjoreGirl
OMG such a wonderful post π no words swaram u know i have not experienced this in my life i know my friends on FB and can connect but this SoSy world honestly totally gets some amazing people in here and makes our journey so much fun...every comment is so insightful and so perfect..
Economy & Imagination
It surprises me how much the Dude can talk when it comes to proving a point to II.π² And she for one would never take it lying low.π‘ They argue with vengeance and they make up with even more vengeance. πIt is as though their passion in love making is fueled by the duel! π
As long as this is the case, who's complaining? What I like about your writing is you never make it just a puppy love story, even though he follows her like a puppy. He maintains his ground and so does she!
The Monet, their sanctum of love!β€οΈ This will be sorely missed in Paris,π unless there is one there too. He wants no competition, even in II's imagination.π³ Sam tho badi badmaash nikli. Evil Sam!π
Forgotten
By far, the most heart wrenching and touching part till now. It is in such parts you even outshine yourself Nisha. You are the most consistent writer I have seen in terms of the quality of each part, a slice of their life (I don't even want to call it an update anymore), still, there are some moments which you bring out with such depth, honesty and realism, they are testimony to your immense talent as an outstanding writer, one who can delve deep into the psyche of each character, into each context and surrounding , make it their own before orchestrating them to your tune like a masterful conductor. Superb !πππ
We know of II as a very kind hearted person, who would not think twice to thank minion or write a note of gratitude to Mrs.Sagar but what she felt for Ranjan was more than just compassion. She felt care, duty and love as for her own family member. Ranjan has found someone probably only after Savita, who is going to look after him and care for him genuinely without any strings attached. From the time she runs back to check on Rajan till she comes back home thinking still about his khichdi was totally awesome. Loved each and every line and can totally connect to it like Amma and Appa were my parents. Now ,after this part I am sure Ranjan is everybody's pet, not just Anu's. πEveryone is going to gush over him and pester you till you vindicate him.π
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